Hey Cimmy1 happy to have you back! I can't wait for the next chapter and to see the pics. Keep up the good work. I hope Trey doesn't get her fired from her job. Can't wait for them to meet.

Hey Cimmy1, apparently I chose the right name since I have been a bug in your rug trying to get you to update. You could have knocked me over with a feather when I saw that you had posted and I am very happy indeed to see that Noelle and Trey are still in your thoughts.  

That girl needs to get her some, seeing naked men in fruit and Trey ogling her backside like that! They are going to be so cute together and I would say I can't wait but I can't do anything else.

I know life has a way of taking over so I can only say thank you for taking the time to do this.

Chel, I have never really watched Eureka but after reading this I need to find my program guide girl. I like it and the two story thing I think you could pull off. I'm saying that because I am loving M&MS and now you have intrigued me with this new story. Greedy I know but there you have it. I love the pics too. Keep up the great work and thank you.

Author's Response:

Hey girl!

Eueeka is a fun show to watch and write about!  It takes the most impossible thingd happen and it makes sense at the end. I'm having a ball writing it.

Hopefully M&MS will updated in the next two days *fingers crossed lol* I've added a few new people to both Jack and Jill's crews.

Thank you for reading and review Junebug; I REALLY APPRICIATE it!

Chel 

Damn woman that was almost better than the best sex okay how about some really good chocolate then! I said almost. I need a drink and a big bar of dark chocolate or white chocolate... Never mind it was good, really good. Thanks gota go now bye!

Chel, I really hate you! I said I wasn't going to do it and you sucked me in damn it! I started out by looking at the cast and you know you had me at that first pic right? After that I read the first chapter and as much as I've never watched the entire movie I think I might have to watch The Bodyguard the next time it comes on. You are an evil woman. Now I know you are trying to get this out so you can get back to M&MS and IHON but watch the grammar girl! Not enough to stop my flow but you know it would hang some people up. I will beta for you if you need. So far I do like it and would like very much to see where it goes.

Author's Response:

Hi Girl!

Don't hate me; I CAN NOT resist using Dave anyway I can get!

YES, I would LOVE for you to beta this if you have the time!

Waiting on Taste of Honey and Island Interlude!

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

Chel

Chel you are a trip one minute I am laughing and the next I am frowning.

Poor Frank is going to suffer so much because he has met the woman of his dreams and she is off limits for numerious reasons. A less honorable man would not think twice about tapping that ass.

Rachel has remained sweet and caring despite the obvious disdain of her parents and neglect of her brother who hasn't seen fit to stand up to their parents on her behalf.

Thank goodness for her Grand-Mere, Mr. Etienne and Marcus or she would be totally beaten down by her mother who sounds like a hot mess. Although maybe Rachel had better come clean to Frank about Marcus before he kills him.

Loving it girl don't keep us hanging again. I missed these characters and their drama.

James is one tough cookie, but it sounds like she's had to be. She is trying to better herself by going to school but why does it sound like she is being serious when she talks about being a drug dealer?

I like the friendship that she shares with Quinn and Xander and wonder if they know James has a very strange sense of humor? (As does the Creator known in this case as MJ).

Hmmmm enter one sexy Frenchman. Let the games begin.

Hey MJ, something occurred to me while reading this and I went back and looked and sure enough found what I was looking for. The club is named Melancholy (a fancy way to say sad) it is a blues club and the inside is blue with blue lighting. When you are sad you are blue. Did you do that deliberately? Nice touch.

Also a nice touch is James' relationship with Melvin who seems to have been a constant from her teenaged years and thank God for him because Pearl was not there in any constructive fashion apparently.

James held her position with Trigger and Pearl and sounded her battle cry with that song. Unfortunately neither one of them like to take no for an answer and won't let go but somehow she needs to shake them off like dirt under her feet or she will never be free.

The flirting was cute between J & T. The fact that James paid attention to Tristen though in front of Trick and his Pony is not going to be a good thing. I can only hope that he watches his back. 

Enjoying the story and playing catch-up.

Ok let's try this again, my review just disappeared.

This just reinforces my opinion of Tris, that was a very thoughtful gift. He is definitely a keeper, unfortunately Trick and Pony don't look like they intend for James to have him that long.

I like how James delivered the 411 to the 'messenger' I could almost smell the meat burning  but I wish it was Trick she was giving that tip to. Although if it was him she would have to pull out the big guns and that would not be good her.

James understandably feels guilty about Tris being in the hospital but he is going to need her strength to get him through this ordeal.

Really liking it MJ.

Ok lost another one, here we go again.

I'm not gonna bring anymore water to the party bcause I think there's enough of that already from the swimming pool. That was hot, intense and so very James and Tris-like to do something so unexpected. The two are well matched in the wildness department.

They both obviously got some sexy moves and it was nice to see them happy for a change. But Tris really took his life into his hands when he pulled her into the swimming pool. Doesn't he know that you don't get a black girl's hair wet?

I liked Tris' little jealous episode and the fact that for once he was at a loss for words when he snatched her up. I like that and also how he made her feel beautiful, desireable and sexy and so he should because she is.

I kinda sorta saw this coming, but as usual what James does is the unexpected as she faces her Kryptonite and I love her reaction. I also like the fact that she put on her big girl panties and was woman enough to want to tell Tris about the baby. That is until he told her his news.

I was disappointed in Tris because he did not put on his big boy drawers and tell James sooner. Instead he waited till now to tell her, but he made up for it by not acting like a jerk or asking if it was his. He held her like she needed and stepped up to the plate by asking her to go with him to Paris.

Wish we could have seen James in the outfit and shoes sounds like that would have been one hot date.

Now the question is what will James say? Nuff said.

I knew you were funny but it is official girl you are a trip. Ceasar is pitching tents and everything. Who says black people don't camp?

Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOL!!!! You're pretty funny yourself.

Thanks for commenting!

I know I am late to the game, playing catch up is not fun.

I would laugh if it wasn't true but most of us are just like her mother. We would lock the fridge instead of taking our daughters or sons for a walk which would be more beneficial to them. We want to help but just go about it the wrong way and the sad thing is we are usually in need of help ourselves.

I see I have been missing out on this great story and look forward to the many chapters you have written.