Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: 10/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



On Hiatus: No
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True Love Survives by rhondanicole18
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

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What happens when you see someone from your past who has haunted you for years?  What if you never really lost your feelings for this person?  What happens when you see this person again?  Will they give you a second chance?  Will you be able to try to have a relationship again?  These couples asks these very questions as they try to find out exactly what love really is.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:No
Word count: 56527
Read Count: 6378
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 06/04/09

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Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25-Jason and Keeana

I agree LOL...I thought i was going to choke on my soda when he got on his knees begging...great update and finally thy admit the truth...Yeesh

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.  I appreciate it.  Yeah is right.  They were causing too much Angst. LOL

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Date: 13/10/08
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Brianna and Daron

His work out clothes are Jeans?  Great update.  Thanks



Author's Response:

I think that may be a typo.  LOL. I'm not a great editor.

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Date: 13/10/08
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27-Tabitha and Steven

OK, oh boy that is to bad that he walked out but I can understand why he did though because she still want the scandalous one...Mr NBA

Author's Response: LOL. You think he's scandalous? Hmm, he is a bit of an ass. LOL. but Steven felt he had no choice.

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Date: 13/10/08
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-Michael and Dana

Of course it will last and last and last...thanks for a great read

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and you are very welcome. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13/10/08
Title: Chapter 1: The Prologue: Ten Years Earlier

Wow you responded fast to my comments...thanks and when is the next update.  I am hooked on this story now.  I also like your end notes on the story and the way that u asked questions.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I don't know when I'll update. Probably in the next few days. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
Date: 13/10/08
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Cedric and Jolette

Great update...I hope that loser stays gone but probably not.  As for his parents I am sure that they will want to break them up again.  Hopefully this time because they are older that they will stand together against any and all that oppose their union.  Thanks 

Author's Response: Hey Divsionred!! Thanks for reading.  I am so glad that you enjoyed the story.  Can't say that you have seen the last of the loser, but he is a big time loser.  LOL.  His parents are snobs.  We'll see if they can stay together.  Thanks for reading.

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Date: 04/11/08
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Cedric and Jolette

Hi Please update.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Hey Divsionred.  I've had writer's block, but I updated and i plan to update more in the near future. thanks

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Date: 13/12/08
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30-Tiffany

Tiffany was wrong for using her son that way...she should be locked upa nd they need to throw away the key the conniving so and so, the nerve of her.  As for Antoine and Ashley enough already either be together or not but come on....this has been going on to long...dude is way into her and she is showing her natural ass...like his brother said, get over it if she doesn't want to be with you then move on.

 

Thanks for a great read, and please update sooner than later and don't stay away so long.  Take Care.



Author's Response:

Hey Divsioned.  Thanks for reading and sticking with my story even though it took me a long time to update.  Writer's block is a killer on the spirit for writing.  Anywho, Antoine is not Nicholas' father.  Its a shame he isn't cause the poor baby needs some type of parental guidance and structure in his life.  Ashley and Antoine are going to keep frustrating you i hate to tell you.  They are both just alike......stubborn and set in their ways.

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Date: 03/02/09
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31-Stephanie

This is a great update.  Stephanie needs to move on asit is obvious that Jason doesn't want to be with her.  Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Divsioned.  Jason's a typical male.  He really does love Keeana, but he is scared of commitment. 

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Date: 19/03/09
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33-Latoya and Kyle

Thanks for a great update.  I missed the story.  Take Care

Author's Response: Aww thanks for reading Divsionred.  You are one of my faithful readers and I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read my story.

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Date: 07/04/09
Any Given Thursday by ShanniC
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:




Celina hates Jake. Jake hates Celina. Can two people, completely opposite from one another settle their differences and find love in the process? How can you be in love with someone whom you are diametrically opposed to? An interracial romance.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 49555
Read Count: 14150
Published: 11/07/08
Updated: 29/08/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Requesting an update.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
Date: 29/07/08
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Please update real soon...I left a post on Fictionnet...I really do love this story and I hope that you will have an opportunity to compete the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
Date: 25/07/08
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Update Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
Date: 30/07/08
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Welcome back.  I was so excited to see this update.  This has been one of my favorite stories and I really do hope that you will be able to complete it.  This was an Excellent update.  I want to know more about what led up to the death of their child.  I hadn't realized that Celina's parents were more successful than Jake's.  In a small southern town that had to be hard for the town folks.  Is that why Jake's friends hated her because she was a rich black girl that was friends with Jake and then they became lovers?  Looking forward to reading more.  Thanks and welcome back.  Yeah.  You made my day by updating this story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your detailed review! Honestly, I had forgotten about this story until I found my  saved work on another flash drive. I have most of the drafts complete so the story will be finished soon. I am glad to have made your day! :)

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Date: 24/06/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just wanted to let you know that I went back and read the story from the beginning.  I really love this story and the characters.  I am waiting to find out more about the tragedy that caused their child to die.  In addition, I would love to know more about her parents POV.  We know that Jake's parents were against them being in a relationship.  Although it does seem that Celina's family loved Jacob.  Also, how did they end up at the same college when she was so adamant that she wanted to go to the University of Chicago. Thanks and I am so glad that you came back to finish the story.  Take care.

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Date: 08/07/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thanks for a great update.  I love Jacob and Celina together. I wonder what Drew did to them later on.  Since Jake apologized for allowing him into their lives. 

I enjoyed the paint ball scene...that was to funny Jake taking that kids gear and he still ended up losing.

I really want them to be a couple again.

Thanks

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Date: 05/07/10
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I just love this story.  I can't believe that Jake followed those idiots and Drew got shot. 

In regards to how Jake broke up with Melinda, I am sure that she will be waiting for him when he returns or that she will show up at the next place that they are scheduled to stop.

I hope that we get Celina's POV...I can't wait to read what she has to say about Jake declaring that he still loves her.

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: 30/08/10
Edges and Other Dangers by luckybrans
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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"It was the third time he'd said her name that way, voice full of want, pleading for something, anything, from her."

(Alexx Woods/Ryan Wolfe)

 



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2923
Read Count: 2954
Published: 16/07/08
Updated: 16/07/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Edges and Other Dangers

nIce story...I just recently started reading other stories about this couple.  Thanks for a great read.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting!

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Date: 06/09/09
Blackout by greatodinsraven
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Jake is a cynical Chicago bar owner just looking for some peace.  Josephine is a woman with a shady past just looking for a second chance.  When their two worlds collide during a city blackout each knows that the other presents a threat and yet they can't resist each other.  They along with several people from different walks of life converge on Jake's bar while chaos erupts around them.  Everyone is in for a night of secrets, revelations and lessons learned.  Who will survive the blackout with their heart intact?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 14109
Read Count: 4110
Published: 21/07/08
Updated: 23/10/08

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my goodness...what a story...1st the sex, then she pulls the trigger...OMGoodness...who did she shoot?  I hope that she didn't shoot him.  WOw, this is a great story very funny, sexy and mysterious all at the same time...thanks for a great read.  Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and stars Divisonred!  All I can say is that she was definitely aiming for Jake as far as the rest, you'll see.  Thank you so much especially about the funny part because I'm always wondering if I can convey the humor in a line since you can't read tone, so it's a great compliment!

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Date: 05/08/08
Revenge 101 by greatodinsraven
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 156]
Summary:

revenge 101

Audre Highsmith thought she had everything in her life under control.  That is until her ex boyfriend got engaged to someone else.  Now Audre's about to learn that the sweetest revenge is in throwing out the rules and following her own happiness.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 50934
Read Count: 114859
Published: 23/07/08
Updated: 31/05/09

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I realy like this story...I hope her revenge plot goes well...wwhen she is thinking about the build baord is he naked is that why people are laughing at him?  Thanks

Author's Response:

Hahaha that's funny, let's say that in addition to the message Audre posted a picture of Greg digging in his nose that she took of him while he was unawares.  Somehow I get the feeling a picture of Greg/Henry Simmons would be no laughing matter hahaha.

I'm glad you like the story, thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
Date: 30/07/08
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Hi Please update ...I am following you all over the internet requesting updates on your stories....LOL  Now update.  Thanks

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Date: 06/01/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hi please update.  Thanks

Author's Response: Best laid plans Divisionred hahaha.  Won't ever be that long between updates again I assure you.

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Date: 10/03/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hi please update the story.  Thanks

Author's Response: Updated!  Thanks!

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
Date: 25/05/09
A Day In The Life Of..... by truth7
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

This is a story about a woman who keeps fighting to live despite the fact that life keeps showing her that sometimes it is better to be dead than alive.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2715
Read Count: 3135
Published: 26/07/08
Updated: 26/07/08

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Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life Of.....

This was a very disturbing story...I felt really bad for this woman child that she had ebndured so much.  Thanks

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Date: 06/09/08
Make Me by bscl9280
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary: Francesca Dupree is a high powered corporate raider. Alex Williams is her nemesis from college. Sparks fly when the two come face to face after five years at a mutual friend's house. This is a one shot story.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3898
Read Count: 3850
Published: 13/08/08
Updated: 13/08/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story...these two are to funny I was ROFLMAO.  So where is Lins husband?  why would he be working on Thanksgiving?  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/08/08