Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

what happens when a one night stand becomes somthing more? Lucas is a man of many talents and a dark past that could make or break him. He keeps his distance from others not allowing anyone to get close to him. That was until Bea appeared calling out to somthing inside of him. He wont stop till she is his armed with determination and a killer smile. Can her love save him?

Or will she run?

Betaed by:LOVEMBOTH



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 22575
Read Count: 56320
Published: 06/09/08
Updated: 27/11/09


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This story is developing nicely. I especially loved the fact that he reads to her, I think that's so sexy.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I try to make sure I show Luc's character or he'll be upset with me.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/08

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It always amazing me how people can see each others problems, but not their own. Bea can see Nikko issues with George, but she's in denial about the fact that she's doing the same thing.

Author's Response: She's in for a wild ride.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/02/09

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Please put some spacing in here. It makes it so much easier to read.

Author's Response: I fixed that. I'm deeply sorry I was in such a hurry to post that I didn't preview it thank you for telling me.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 12/07/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 AJ

All My Children: Angie/Jessie

Twenty years ago Pine Valley was led to believe that Jesse Hubbard died in the line of duty. Until that faithful day he returned to Pine Valley and the love of his life Angela Hubbard. Where was Jessie all this time? And why didn’t he return to his family sooner?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, All My Children
Characters: Angie Hubbard
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jessie/Angie (All My Children)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 1542
Read Count: 8357
Published: 07/09/08
Updated: 13/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Oh man, this seems like it should be a painful yet necessary conversation. Telling the person you love, who thought you were dead, about the life you lead without them seems like a hard thing to do. No matter what, the issue of why you never tried to contact them, especially for 20 years, will always come up.

Author's Response:

Thanks again for reviewing!!

I felt Angie's pain when she first saw Jesse. I love these two together. They still have a lot to talk about.

Hoping to update again soon! 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Story Teller

Wow. Jesse basically spent 20 years alone. That sucks!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Sweet Pea. He did spend most of of his life alone...but not all:)

Hope you enjoy the update! 

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Date: 18/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Todd was never married to Blair, he was just an arrogant rich bad boy who always had his way until he met Evangeline who was a financial advisor at Bank of America where she worked.

She was pretty hard to get but they became friends and then the coma happened, when she woke up, they took things from there.

She left him three years ago, and now that he’s moved on and about to get married, she went to convince him to take her back on the eve of his wedding.

She wants him back but Todd is hell bent on giving her a dose of her own medicine.



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3534
Read Count: 1127
Published: 07/09/08
Updated: 07/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It didn't take long for Todd to crack! I knew he wouldn't let her walk away from her twice!

Author's Response:

hi sweet pea, Eva definitely got Todd on a lock down and when she was done, he didn't know what to do with himself. But then, she took a huge risk by going to him on the eve of his wedding, I don't think I have that kind of courage in me.

Thanks for reading, appreciate the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/08

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Tavin Wilson and Cameron Caldwell have disliked each other for years. Something happens to change their opinion of one another, and they become friends. During their friendship, they learn that they were wrong about one another and their friendship develops into something more.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 141834
Read Count: 330003
Published: 07/09/08
Updated: 08/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm hooked. These two love/hate relationship screams unreleased passion!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/08

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 & Epilogue

I Finally finished! This story was so good. I laughed, cried, got angry, wanted to kick ass, and got hot and excited. Great job!

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Date: 09/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Seth Aldridge, Casanova extraordinaire, has never had a problem getting women...until he meets Brianna Mills. Brianna Mills has been burned by men like Seth before and she has no intention of getting hurt again. But, he's charming, funny, gorgeous and sexy as hell...she can't resist him for long. Seth is totally intrigued with the beautiful girl who seems to be resistant to his game. He finally wears her down and realizes that she slowly makes him do something he's never done before... fall in love. Brianna wonders if she's enough to make him change his playboy ways? There's only one way to find out.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 102537
Read Count: 190142
Published: 08/09/08
Updated: 18/03/09


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I enjoyed reading this, and I hope you're not finished. It was so fresh and real. I loved that you gave them some real time apart after the breakup, especially because she caught him with the skank! The sex was . . . let's just say DAMN!

The flow of the story with Lessons was on point! I could see how the timelines were connected, but it is still a seperate storyline. Great job!

UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/09/08

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was so cute. I liked how Seth's mom called him out on getting Bri pregnant on purpose.

Loved the story. It was real and really showed the not so good times, as well as the great ending. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Emory Nichols is in danger due to her father finding a cure to one of man's deadliest diseases. Kieran Villegas and his order of Shiyan Knights are placed to protect Emory and her friend.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 31768
Read Count: 45274
Published: 08/09/08
Updated: 08/09/08


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

DAAAMN! He didn't even touch her but . . . I'm at a lost for words right now. When are you updating, becuase I NEED to know what happens next!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

 

In a world where demons are the good guys and human's are the enemy a young prince must protect his mate from the enemies that wish to destroy him by killing her.Will he be able to hold on to her once she discovers what he is?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 10942
Read Count: 20659
Published: 13/09/08
Updated: 10/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can already tell that this is going to be one of my faves!!!!!  Magic, romance, demons, and different dimensions, I love it!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/09/08

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Call me crazy, but I can't wait to see what trouble Jania's cooking up.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/04/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Christopher Waters recently learned about his adoption when his biological mother died. She left behind a mysterious book that belonged to his father. Since the day he received it strange things begin to happen.   



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10513
Read Count: 1719
Published: 13/09/08
Updated: 20/11/08


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: February 10th, 2008; The First Attack

AWE DAMN! They're meant to kill each other! That sucks!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/09/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

The story is several years old. So a few of the characters are no longer on daytime.

This is an introduction of characters on a fictional soap opera called Beautiful. I took most of the AfricanAmerican actors in daytime and wrote a storyline around each of them. There are only a couple chapters. Here is the first one. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Drucilla Winters, Evangeline Williamson, Gia Campbell, Jessica Griffin, Keesha Ward, Kerri Reynolds, Olivia Barber, Original Character(s)
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1062
Read Count: 5122
Published: 18/09/08
Updated: 18/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Situations

I can already see the crazy drama with this fic, and I love drama! Everyone is connected in some way. You have a lot of characters to play, good luck and I look forward to reading the first chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing Sweet Pea.

Yes there is a lot of crazy drama. LOL

I wanted so much for all of these actors to have there own story but alas it hardly ever happens.

I'm writing more of this fic and I will def try to update soon.:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing Sweet Pea.

Yes there is a lot of crazy drama. LOL

I wanted so much for all of these actors to have there own story but alas it hardly ever happens.

I'm writing more of this fic and I will def try to update soon.:)

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

 

No one could say that Rick Lawrence was a humble man. Even as a child he knew of his superior looks and had no problem telling his classmates of that fact. Now as a 28 year old man he makes a bet with his friend that he can bed famous model K. Jones. Too bad K. Jones is Karma Jones, an old classmate that he tormented. Now he finds himself as Karma’s B***h.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10266
Read Count: 2921
Published: 19/09/08
Updated: 18/01/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

How much as has this woman change, that he wouldn't recognize a childhood friend that he slept with?

I laughed at the fact that he's babysitting his own kid and doesn't know it.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 19/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 271]
Summary:

This is a story about a couple who wants to have a child. They will have to use a surrogate to have this baby. The woman they selected is a college graduate who wants to go to Law school. She sees this as a an excellent financial opportunity. She figures the couple gets the baby and she will get her Law degree, however, fate will effect all of their lives.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 39835
Read Count: 30966
Published: 20/10/08
Updated: 10/03/11


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Unexpected

This is very interesting and I can already see the complications this relationship will cause. There are few grammatical errors that need to be fixed (watch where you put quotation marks), but that didn't stop me from enjoying the story. Keep it coming!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/08

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Good News

I really don't see Jailynn and Jarred giving up their child. I see them falling in love and wanting to raise any child they create together, as a family.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/04/09

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Nontraditional

I'm loving Jarred so much right now!!

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Date: 08/04/09

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Life and Death

This situation really makes you think. I don't think I could give my child up.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/04/09

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Beneath the surface

TWINS!! And the plot thickens.

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Date: 24/04/09

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Beneath the Surface part II

Until I read the notel, I was wondering where Jailynn's pov was.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/09

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Beneath the Surface part II

I can't wait to see how her mother reacts. Will tell her about how the twins came into existence?

Author's Response: Sweet pea you must be reading my mind because I was wondering that same thing as I prepare to update.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/05/09

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Time Will Tell

OMG!!! Is she going to be alright. No, daddy don't come for her (her dad's dead right)! Let her live to raise those babies.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/09/09

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Ups and Downs

I knew they were going to want to keep the babies!! However, I didn't expect the end of Saige and Jeffery.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/09