Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Journey (Book 1 - Devyn's Journey) by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104090
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014

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Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

Madeline is a crazy *B*. My goodness. I hope everything backfires in her facexanx that she and her conniving daughter get their comeuppance. As tot Jason and Devyn glad that they are moving forward and that Jason met Devyn's mom. Thanks

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Date: July 05 2013
Love and War by TheSouthernScribe
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

All is fair in love and war?

That's the way the story goes until Nita Floyd's promotion is handed to the son of her firm's managing partner. Fifteen years on the job, two failed marriages, and a son and daughter who hate her more than life itself, what's Nita's next move. How far will she go to right the wrong especially when her rival re-acquaints her with a little thing called fun.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 11731
Read Count: 49597
Published: December 12 2011
Updated: March 05 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Like Father...Like Son

So little Lolita is Nita's daughter.  I guess her and Russ are bounf to run into each other outside of work, especially if Russ's friend son starts dating Deja.  Thanks

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Date: December 20 2011
Title: Chapter 4: The Apple Doesn't Fall Too Far...

Thanks for a great update.  Nita is like Rodney Dangerfield, she gets no respect...LOL, only joking.  Her brother is great to be all of those things to her.  I hope that she will choose her children over her job because it seems like her daughter needs her to be her mother right now.  I wonder how her son is doing.  Is he acting out too?  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: December 19 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Introduction - Russ the Glutton for Punishment

LMAO at Russel Ware.  I love him the idiot.  Oh Nita.  You are in for it now, a run for your money.  Thanks

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Date: December 19 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Your Cast...

Good cast.  Thanks

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Date: December 19 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Introduction - Nita's Struggle

Good start to the story.  Poor Nita to be caught up into neptism at the work place.  Thanks

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Date: December 19 2011
Title: Chapter 6: First Name Basis

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: December 27 2011
Still in Love by TheSouthernScribe
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Take away love and our earth is a tomb ~ Robert Browning

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 5754
Read Count: 23282
Published: December 19 2011
Updated: February 27 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: The Players

Good cast.  Thanks

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Date: December 19 2011
Title: Chapter 2: I. The Words We Never Speak

Good start to the story.  I wonder why Zoe thinks that she should have been the one to die instead of her friend.  I am looking forward to reading how Keaton and Zoe reconnect.  Thanks

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Date: December 19 2011
Title: Chapter 4: III. Vulnerability

Thanks for explaining that Keaton wasn't the person that died.  As for their rrelationship.  Wow, they were a mess together.  So Keaton works at a bar and Zoe performs there.  At least they seem to have good friends that understand the two of them.  Poor Zoe won't evenallow Keaton to say he loves her.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: December 27 2011
Title: Chapter 3: II. Not one for goodbye...

IS Keaton now the person that died? Thanks

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Date: December 23 2011
Intimacy by TheSouthernScribe
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

 

Will they...

 

Won't they...

 

Three months in and Lulu and Dennison haven't moved beyond first base...

 

Will they...

 

Won't they...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: While We're In Love
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7425
Read Count: 9161
Published: December 20 2011
Updated: February 20 2012

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Title: Chapter 4: Tete -a-Tete

Thanks for a great update.  I like Raj and the fact that he was honest about his relationship with his wife and that he cheated on her.  Hopefully, this will elp Dennison not to bang his neighbor. Because if he does I don't think that Lulu would be so forgiving. She may caught off his blue balls. 

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Date: December 28 2011
Title: Chapter 3: The Friendly Neighbor

Damn Izzie, now you want old boy.  I was stunned that Lulu was jealous.  I can't wait to see them together again.  Thanks

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Date: December 28 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Perceptions of Reality

To bad Lulu and Dennison's friends are idiots.  Funny idiots none the less.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: December 23 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Pep Talk Royale

This was a fun and sad update at the same time.  The fact that Mrs Lord is dying is awful.  I like the new and improved Lulu.  The dress sounds really sexy, I guess her and Dennison will be heating the sheets soon.  As for the conversation between Dennison and his dad it was a good one but still very sad.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: January 18 2012
Title: Chapter 6: More Than Words

Thanks for a great update. He seeems to understand the way Lulu thinks.  Finally, they are there being intimate. I can't wait to read her POV. 

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Date: February 21 2012
The Gift by Brenda1257
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 169]
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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 5917
Published: December 21 2011
Updated: December 21 2011

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good for Hernietta in doing the right thing for her father that she had never known.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Henrietta got what she wanted.  She wanted to meet her father.  Henry's life will never be the same.  Thanks for the review and Merry Christmas!

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Date: December 21 2011
Retired
Acceptable Lies by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 427]
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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94675
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013

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Title: Acceptable Lies

Thanks for a great update.  I really don't like Sugar and Albert at this point.  It is to bad that Albert and Sugar can't accept that their children are in love.  I want Honey to marry Gabriel, they nake a great couple despite their families deficiencies.  Thanks and Happy New Year!!!!

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Date: January 02 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

Thanks for a great update.  I am glad that Gabriel quickly figured out that his father was behind the fiasco.  As for Sugar, damn she sounds very ghetto.  I can't wait to read about the conversation between father and son.  Thanks



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It's coming and it's not going to be pretty!

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Date: December 28 2011
Title: Acceptable Lies

Albert is a dirty bastard.  My goodness to try and break up his son and Honey just because she is black.  He would prefer that his son had a black gay lover instead.  Incredible.  As for the sister Sydney it is clear that she is jealous of he younger sibling.  It seems that Gabriel's mother is the only one that is willing to accept her son and his choices.  I feel bad for Honey because she has no idea what is coming her way.  Thanks

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Date: December 28 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

Great start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: December 27 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Cast Pictures

Great cast.  Thanks

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Date: December 27 2011
Title: Acceptable Lies

Yeah for Sugar willing to fight that bitch Albert.  What is wrong with the man? I can't believe that he is going through all of this trouble to cause mayhem for his son and Honey.  Makes no sense.  Thanks for a great but disturbing update.  Looking forward to seeing what Albert has next for Gabriel, Honey and Sugar.  Also, go Sugar she got her a live one meaning Bruce.



Author's Response:

Albert has met his match...he just don't know it yet.  LOL

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Date: January 09 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

Thanks for an interesting read.  How in the world did Sugar end up dating and having a ba for Honey's father?



Author's Response:

They were in high school together.  He was in special ed classes and the rumor was that he was well endowed.  Sugar being Sugar decided that she was going to be the first one to get him on a bet.  She wasn't planning on getting pregnant, but she did.  LOL

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Date: April 14 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

Yes, I enjoyed.  I love how Sugar got that bastard Albert.  Go Sugar. What a nice little revenge for him sending her the pictures of two men making out on her cellphone.  I really hope someone put those pictures on You Tube.  That would be so great.  I was happy that Sugar is trying to get to know Gabriel.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: January 23 2012

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