Title: Chapter 67 Meeting the Parents

Mostly, I think Mary Ann's reaction was welcoming. I thought there might have been something at the very beginning there, but maybe she was just taking Kendra all in.

I think Mary Ann is ok with Kendra. Same for his stepdad and Josh. Josh was cool. Just said it surprised him and that was all. I don't think he ultimately really cares about it like that. He's 15, so its whatever for him.

The rest of the family is TBD. I'm interested in that meet up.

Not really. I like all the couples because they are all giving me different things. Everyone has there own drama, personalities, family and solutions to work on for themselves.

Nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm glad I was able to portray the reaction I was intending Mary Ann to give, shock and curiosity. And I'm glad you like all the couples, and they truly do have their own set of battles to face.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2024 02:44 am



Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.