The way that you write Bradyvand Pen is SOOOOO ELECTRIC! I want a Brady for myself. I LOVE these two. And Harvey just what I said that he was.....an entitled asshole. Long Live Brady and Pen!!! Awesome story!
Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2016 12:45 pm
The anticipation is killing me with these two. 😁 Hoping Brady snaps Harvey's neck. Hoping Brady comes back later that night and gives Pen the business.
Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 12:44 pm
Dude me loves it a lot! I love Brady and Pen talk about animal magnetism!! HOTT!!!! Harvey sounds like an entitled asshole!
Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2016 12:27 pm
Thanks for the update!! There was way too much of that psycho Harvey though. How are you going to get rid of that freak?
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2016 05:46 am
Thank you for updating! And I'm curious to see what Harvey is planning. Brady is gonna kill him since he refuses to take no for an answer.
Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 06 2016 05:14 am
waiting impatiently for the next yummy chapter.....hurry
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Reviewer: ls Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 06 2016 03:19 am
HARVEY IS CRAZY, THEY NEED TO START BY FILING A RESTRAINING AGAINST HIM. iT SHOULD BAR HIM FROM HAVING ANY CONDUCT WITH PENNY AND bRODY. MEANING NO PHONE CALLS, TEXTS, FOLLOWS, SHOWING UP AT HER HOUSE AND PLACE OF EMPLOYMENT. THANK SO MUCH FOR UPDATING.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 06 2016 01:42 am
Please please please write and finish the story please I'm in love with all your story. Don't do us like that...... Tears
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2016 02:38 am
Excellent story. I love how attracted Brady and Penelope are to each other.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2016 10:04 pm
This is so wonderful! I love this story! Brady and Pen are just PERFECT! UPDATE PLEASE!
Reviewer: Xaria Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2016 10:02 pm
I want Brady but I love Pen so much that I will let her have him. These two are so hypnotic. Oh what a story!!!! I love it
Reviewer: Xaria Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2016 09:40 pm
I think that you broke my computer with this chapter. Brady and Pen are like volcanic lava. They just rage with HOTTNESS! I LOVE THEM!!!
Harvey is just a piece of S$$$. I hate people like him. He needs to be utterly destroyed. He is not fit for the earth. Brady already told him he'd be at his house. I don't think he can be redeemed?!
LOVE THIS STORY!
Reviewer: AntiVenom Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2016 04:12 pm
Love the rewrite! I love this couple Brady and Pen are so intense and beautiful. Excellent job
Reviewer: AntiVenom Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2016 03:58 pm
(Screaming) You brought it back yes!!!!!!!
Reviewer: AntiVenom Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2016 03:38 pm
I'm here for Brady. That asshole who tried to shade him for being disabled can fuck all the way off. How low can one person be? Usually villains have redeeming qualities to humanize them... but this prick is severely lacking. Nothing I hate more than someone who tries to make fun of people who are disabled. And though Brady is partially disabled, he 10 times the man Harvey is.
Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2016 03:14 pm
Great story, I'm glad that I came across it. I can't wait to read the budding of the cop and the heiress.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2016 06:13 pm
Really like this story Pen & Brady together. So magnetic. Her mothers genes are working & she's giving in. He stopped. I'm sure he's not going to the next time. Harvey just can't let her go even though she's put him firmly in the friend zone & with Brady he's going to be out of her life for good because he's turning into a obsessive stalker whose met his match because Brady doesn't scare off easy if anything he will probably kill him if her father doesnt because I'm he's going to get out of line & show his true colors & do something stupid. Waiting for the next update.
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2016 09:53 am
I want a man like Brady 😍 I told myself I wasn't gonna read this until it's done but gosh I like it so much already
Reviewer: eghperf Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2016 03:47 pm