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Title: {Two}

Great story

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:46 am
Title: {Two}

love this story, please upate soon

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Date: April 01 2012 08:40 am
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What a beautiful chapter. Will's absolute gentleness will be Ana's undoing. In the loveliest of ways, though. Ana still needs therapy, though.

I hope you will shed more light on Frederick, and especially, Monica. The fact that this woman would not only fight her little brother, but help facilitate the rape of one of her friends, all for the other brother. Did she supply women for him to rape on a regular basis? What happened with these people? I would love some answers to these question. Interesting dynamic with that.

Glenna, she needs to go anyway. Too immature and too desperate; and too young to be so.

Elle, while I don't like the fact that Hector took it upon himself to tell her how she was conceived, I'm still glad she knows. Ana might never have; and who could blame her? How do you tell your child something like that?

Will, what a wonderful man. Such kindness, compassion, and humanity. His stats arent bad either...lol! What the hell is he doing with someone like Glenna anyway?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 08:04 am
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This chapter was so powerful!!  I was surprised that Glenna was intuitive enough to know her time was over and that she didn't make a scene at the resturant.  I loved how Will was able to put Ana at ease with words and his mere presence.  Gretchen is too funny I love her.  Why was Ana so resistent to going to rape counseling?  When you had Ana recall that day that she was raped it was so powerful.  How could Monica do that to girl that was suppose to be her friend?  I really hope that karma has paid Monica a visit and the payback was worse than Ana suffered at the hands of Freddie!!!

Thank you for this amazing story, SafeHaven you are an phenomenal writer.  I am looking forward to reading more WIll and Ana!!

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Date: April 01 2012 07:59 am
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omg. it was a little sad how he treated glenna but i hope ana and will fall in love and that it works out with little drama and how sweet was that card? hell i'm in love with him...great work....please update soon........pretty please

 Reviewer: nala88 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 07:48 am
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This is a wonderfully told story.

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 07:29 am
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Wow! Incredible work! I love Will. As for Ana...I admire her strength and courage. I'll be waiting for that update!

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 06:04 am
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Beautiful chapter. Monica and her brother should have been arrested. Will is so sweet, she needs happiness.

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Date: April 01 2012 05:44 am
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What error, lol! This story is simply amazing. I love it! I cannot wait for more!! I am really bad, but I hope Ana does not say yes right away to Will job...I know, lol!

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Date: April 01 2012 05:14 am
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What an awesome chapter and story!!  You are a talented writer!!!  I loved it!!!

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Date: April 01 2012 04:55 am
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Why in the hell did Hector tell Elle how she was conceived? It wasn't his place to tell her. I can imagine when Gretchen finds out she is going to rip him a new a$$. Maybe Elle need to tell Ana she knows after she accepts Will's offer and gets settled. Then she can talk her into going to therapy, letting it out will work wonders in healing, along with the smooth talking Will too. Those flowers and that note even made me blush. Glenna might as well cut her losses, once Ana starts working for him it's all over.

 Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 04:52 am
Title: {Two}

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww<3

i love them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: April 01 2012 04:20 am
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Outstanding, I need more.

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Date: April 01 2012 03:45 am
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I love this story. I love how sweet Will is to Ana and how sweet and loving her daughter is. Gretchen is a true friend. I am glad that Will set them up in those nice suites. I hope to see more Will and Ana action and please let her move there. More chapters today

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Date: April 01 2012 03:02 am
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That was so powerful. I wonder what happen to Fredrick?

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Date: April 01 2012 03:02 am
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Just because I was thinking of it I had to come back and say it.. Truly wonderful

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Date: April 01 2012 02:55 am
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Nice start I don't have any constructive criticism but I like this.

 *COUGH*The Ogre and Miss Clare *COUGH*

I'm on to the next chapter^_^

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 02:48 am
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You have no idea how hard it is to write with tears in your eyes. This story is absolutely wonderful. I don't know where you have been but I hope and pray you stay right here. I am so digging on Will and Ana. I absolutely loved the flowers and the card he sent her. Those words were so beautiful they made me cry. Please just write

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Date: April 01 2012 02:47 am
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That's because Will, you need a woman, not a little girl. Drop this chick!

Ana is going to be a winner here.

And Gretchen...ride or die chick, I see already.

Love it already.

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Date: April 01 2012 02:04 am
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This is interesting. I can't wait to read more

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Date: March 31 2012 12:31 pm
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love it!!

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Date: March 31 2012 02:02 am
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Great start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: March 30 2012 12:13 pm
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love it...please update soon

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Date: March 30 2012 10:17 am
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I LOVE IT!! UPDATE!! Finally, a single parent love story!

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 08:48 am
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ohhhhhhhhhhhh please continue

I wanna know where it is headed

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON

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Date: March 29 2012 09:15 pm


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