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Title: {One}

i love love love this story more some U ARE A ROCK STAR 5*****

 Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2014 11:37 pm
Title: {Thirteen}

You are a master with words! I love Will and Ana! I love how you have write this story and made it truly one my favorite stories on the chamber! Excellent job as always

 Reviewer: Jane doe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2014 02:15 pm
Title: {Thirteen}

10+ STARS! 

I Can Always Depend on YOU to give it your BEST and crank out a great update! Keep it up!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2014 05:28 am
Title: {Thirteen}

This chapter was smoking hot! 

I am loving the frequent updates! Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2014 04:59 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Thank you for the update and I can't wait to see what happens. I love Will and Ana!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2014 01:04 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Oh how I love this story! This chapter was excellent, well written I love how you do that! You are a master in my book and I would buy this if you ever publish it! This is just a work of art!!!!!

 Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 02:36 pm
Title: {Thirteen}

This is excellent! I love the way that you turn their lovemaking into a triumph over her monsters. It's so passionate, so uninhibited. As a person who has worked with many victims of rape and incest, I love reading the portions of these stories where they take back their sexual power. It's such a beautifully expressive thing between two people who love each other that to do anything else would be such a shame.

Thank you for not making the police officers stupid. My family bleeds blue, and stories where the cops just blindly go in following someone's lies really annoy me. Police officers are generally quite intelligent, and observant people. They have to be, to stay alive. A few bad/stupid ones shouldn't spoil our image of these brave men and women in uniform.

 Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 07:22 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Great update and Will not playing when he say he is not allowing Ana to leave the bed or his flesh until she is pregnant with his child.  Ana seems very pleased and happy with that.  :D

I am glad that Elise plan to have Nat arrested for assaulting her backfired.  I hope the plan to steal El away on Monday fail as well.  Is El even going to work on Monday since this threat is out against her.  Plus isn't Will going to be at work watching over El anyway?  Ana needs no more drama in her life behind that family.  Monica is tramatized but she needs to go seek help (but first complete her mission for Freddy) I know that sounds heartless but I am so ready for him to die and I don't want his blood on Will's hands.

I hope that Freddy is so out of it that he can't make an escape away from Monica.

Again wonderful/great update.  Can't wait to read the rest of it.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 05:32 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Ana made love for the first time and it was good! She foundf love asnd a protector in Will and he will slay all of her enemies.  I am doing my happy dance right now SafeHaven!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 05:14 am
Title: {Thirteen}

loved it!!! hope shes pregnant and i would love to get to read their baby story too! that would be beyond wonderful!! more please.............

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 03:56 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Loved the update! Glad Ana has Will.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 03:42 am
Title: {Thirteen}

I love the update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 02:57 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Laaaaaaawd ! This is addictive ! Keep up the amazing work ! :)

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 01:01 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Absolutely just love this story from beginning to now! Excellent work!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 12:57 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Yay Anna & Will I wonder is she preggers b/c he sure worked hard to make it that way then that proposal that was so sweet loved it . What are the cops Nathan & El talking about keep up the good work can't wait for more

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 12:55 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Can you love a story too much? If so, then I love this story too much! Just a Fanstatic update! Please kill everyone else in this story in the Moore family except Vincent! Ana deserves HAPPINESS !!! YAY!!!!

 Reviewer: AntiVenom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 12:44 am
Title: {Thirteen}

Great update...but some sick women in this story.

Glad El is enjoying Nathan.

Ana deserves happiness.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 12:42 am
Title: {Twelve}

I love this story. I can't wait for you to update again. This story is just too amazing not to complet. I would buy it! Awesome update!

 Reviewer: Water Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2014 03:44 am
Title: {Twelve}

love this story safe! thanks for the update! i cant wait til this whole mess is resolved and wil and ana can get married and make babies!!!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2014 04:04 am
Title: {Twelve}

I love this story please keep updating

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2014 03:54 am
Title: {Twelve}

OOOOOhhhh my goodness! Elise has really messed up now! Nathan is going to kill her...if not physically...then literally.....and if he doesn't Will is going to do it. Ok, I understand why Monica wants Fredrick dead...but this illision that El is evil like her sperm donor is beyond me. Monica needs to go back to the psyche ward....as soon as possible.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 08:22 am
Title: {Twelve}

Thanks for the update

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 06:33 am
Title: {Twelve}

I had always assumed fred and family were white. thanku for the short wait of this chapter, i would buy ur writings

 Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 06:33 am
Title: {Twelve}

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: divisinred@yahoo.com Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2014 01:30 am
Title: {Twelve}

Loved the update! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2014 04:34 pm


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