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Title: Brown Eyed Susan

An interesting discussion is worth comment. I think that you should write more on this topic, it might not be a taboo subject but generally people are not enough to speak on such topics. To the next. Cheers chatave

 Reviewer: mtom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 10 2025 02:48 am
Title: Brown Eyed Susan

Interesting & cute... Can't wait to see where you take this journey..

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and your comment :)
I have thought about taking this a little further, but for now this story is finished. Glad that you enjoyed it!

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 07:43 pm
Title: Brown Eyed Susan

 Boo hiss, Xander!!  It would serve you right if Susan told you to keep it moving!!!  You have proving yourself to be a rotten friend.



Author's Response:

Ha ha!
It's funny, the hopless romantic in me want him to have another chance, but the part of me that's guarded makes me wonder if he will do the same thing when they get into college. Will he be that star player who pushes her aside once again or will he redeem himself. *shrugs* Thanks pmgayles!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 05:52 am
Title: Brown Eyed Susan

Really? Tease



Author's Response:

Lol Yea. I know.

 Reviewer: nikol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 04:26 am
Title: Hydrangeas

Their mother is an evil, narcissist, money hungry shrew.    She needs loose everything including her other daughters.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 06:23 pm
Title: Hydrangeas

The only thing she has left of her daughter is the flowers she hated so. 



Author's Response:

Yep. So sad. *shake head* Thanks for reading :)

 Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 02:10 pm
Title: Hydrangeas

Loved it - wish it was longer. In her own way she loves and misses her daughter - she expresses it through the hydrangeas she now wants in the house. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much <3
If only she had let go of her pride... then she would be sitting with her daughter and not just thinking about her.

 Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 06:52 am
Title: Hydrangeas

Since she likes money and status so much, I hope what she got from her late husband will keep her old and cold heart warm. Beastly woman. There's driven, and then there's...well, THIS.



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha! I know! It blows my mind to know that there are actual people who are like Mrs. Davila. So concerned with how they are perceived that they forget that it is what's on the inside that counts.
Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 06:11 am
Title: Hydrangeas

what a very shallow woman. Her daughters are lucky to escape her.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 04:44 am
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