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Title: Yearn and Burn

I guess it time to bring some definition to their relationship so everyone would know, especially Riley.

i am so ready for the next update 😌

 Reviewer: Nena Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2017 12:51 pm
Title: Yearn and Burn

Great filler chapter. It's always nice to get deeper into the characters relationship. Never mind the rejection, they'll be something soon! And congrats on the new house!

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2017 01:58 am
Title: Yearn and Burn

Gage, Gage Gage

 Reviewer: Gloria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2017 01:15 am
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

NOT EVEN READ IT YET BUT GOD BLESS YOU!!! IVE BEEN FAITHFULLY CHECKING THIS STORY WAITING , HOPING 😭😭😭

thank you author for this amazing update (I know even before reading )

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 04:43 pm
Title: Yearn and Burn

I'm glad to see this update. Thanks.

Is Gage trying to get Mercy pregnant? The way he is going I hope she is on the pill or something. 

Thanks again. Looking forward to the next update soon.

 Reviewer: Ama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 05:41 am
Title: Yearn and Burn

Thank you for the update. It was amazing. Girl you know how to keep us on the edge with this couple. Gage can't stay away from his Mercy. She has her hands full. 

He is already missing her. He means what he says when he sis three days😍

Hopefully we will be reading that adventure in three days. 

Congratulations on your new home. 

 Reviewer: Mavis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 05:35 am
Title: Yearn and Burn

I kinda agree that her coochie needs a serious break after all that work....lol!

Cute chapter.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 05:32 am
Title: Yearn and Burn

This was awesome.

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Date: February 20 2017 02:44 am
Title: Yearn and Burn

As Denzel just said, keep trying.  The reason he is on stage accepting a reward is because of repeated so called failures.  You continue with your goal and vision and you will succeed.  This chapter was fun and light.  It also still showed Gage's dominance.

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 02:13 am
Title: Yearn and Burn

Thank you thank you for this update.

Loving Gage. Continue with the updates.

 Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 19 2017 10:51 pm
Title: Yearn and Burn

Loved this update. Fun and drama free for a change, (though drama is what I live for in a good love story ... and you never disappoint in that area 😃). 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2017 07:18 pm
Title: Yearn and Burn

Awesome sauce!!!  Thank you for updating. 

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Date: February 19 2017 05:51 am
Title: Hell of a Night

Riley....ughhh!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2017 07:12 am
Title: Hell of a Night

Please have "mercy" on us and update😩

This chapter indeed was smoking.

 Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 08:52 pm
Title: Hell of a Night

Can we get an update soon?

 Reviewer: Nena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 07:50 am
Title: Hell of a Night

Update update update please 😥

 Reviewer: Chelsea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 02 2017 04:02 pm
Title: Hell of a Night

Holy crap this chapter was hot.

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 07:34 am
Title: Hell of a Night

No worries about the chapter,  I like this one better. Shame on Riley Pennington for lying to Mercy, but I know she will get hers in the end. Yeah for Gage and Mercy finally consummating their love for each other. I know this the calm before the storm, bring it on...I can't wait to read it.

 I give this chapter Two thumbs up and I rate it 10 stars worthy!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 02:35 pm
Title: Hell of a Night

Riley needs to go some where and sit down.

I can't wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 12:54 am
Title: Hell of a Night

Holy crap this chapter was hot.

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 09:44 am
Title: Hell of a Night

I loved the update. I like that they didn't consummate their relationship on such a sad note. Though, I'm surprised Mercy believed anything that Riley would tell her knowing how manipulative she can be, and that she would do just about anything to get Gage. She's green with envy.  

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 02:31 am
Title: Hell of a Night

I prefer the other chapter. This one was pretty cliché with her getting unreasonably angry from her antagonizer's claim. The other chapter had "meat" this one was just the usual.

 Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 01:18 pm
Title: Hell of a Night

I liked this chapter too.  I'm glad that Gale is alright, that nothing has happened to her and  I'm glad that their first time was a bit more light hearted than it was in Foolish. 

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Date: January 09 2017 06:01 am
Title: Hell of a Night

Loved the update! I'm glad Colton cleared up that messy confusion about Riley. She was just trying to get Mercy to run away so she could get her teeth into him. I hope Mercy beats the shit out of Riley the next time she sees her :)

 Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 05:46 am
Title: Leading Cast

I'm truly loving your rewrite of this story. Mercy and Coltan are absolutely adorable together. Keep it coming! 💋d83;

 Reviewer: LimePalmtree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 04:26 am


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