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Title: Hell of a Night

So good. Love the rewrite. Now my question is was Riley's fake confession foreshadowing for Mercy and Gage?

 Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 02:01 am
Title: Hell of a Night

I enjoyed it

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 01:27 am
Title: Hell of a Night

Riley is such a pest. When is she going away? Crazy chapter.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 01:04 am
Title: Hell of a Night

Why would Mercy believe anything that comes out of Riley's mouth? She is evil and jealous and those two things don't mix well.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 12:38 am
Title: Hell of a Night

I have to say that I liked the "foolish" chapter more than this one. Not that this chapter was bad or anything though. Because I did enjoy it. To be honest, I don't like how much power Riley has and now with her pregnancy and stuff it doesn't seem as if it will get any better. Fake or not I feel like the whole pregnancy thing is rather a little cliche. I don't know which route this story will take from here on. But I will still give it a chance.



Author's Response:

The Riley pregnancy storyline was going to happen eventually even if I had kept the Foolish chapter. I had dropped a hint about it when Riley wanted to talk to Gage about something in the parking lot of the bar. I decided to push the storyline up and out of the way instead of prolong it by waiting. But as Gage said, Riley isn't pregnant. She was merely trying to manipulate the couple into separating over the possibility of it. She did this under the assumption that Gage didn't know anything about the birth control. I hope that explains some things and I hope you continue to read the story to see where it goes.

 Reviewer: Ms. Starsz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 11:50 pm
Title: Prison for Fools

I tried to leave a comment on the last chapter, but it gave me errors. Honey, I am so loving your characters and their attraction. This love-hate thing they have going on is extremely intense. I can't wait to continue their journey. Oh and I agree with Mama Violet, if you're gonna get arreseted, then at least do something to get arrested for. Mercy should have punched Riley dead off in her mouth a few times. That would have definitely shut her up. The rating is only a 7 because I'm not finished taking this crazy-hot-steamy journey with your characters just yet.

 Reviewer: Sazaen Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 04 2017 07:37 am
Title: Prologue

I must say, the prologue for your story has me intrigued. I can't wait to read more about your characters and to see how this story unfolds for them.

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Date: January 04 2017 05:36 am
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

I guess I'm like everyone else, looking for an update. I have missed this story. You left us high and dry. Please update. 

Let us know what is going on.

 Reviewer: Kia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 05:27 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

PLEASE PLEASE update this story. It would ha good Christmas gift 😊

We we miss this story so much.

 

 Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2016 01:10 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

It has been so long since we have had an update. I really like this story. 

I hope everything is okay.

Please don't let this story drop. Hope to here from you soon.

 Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22 2016 03:54 pm
Title: Leading Cast

When will this be updated, I've been waiting patiently but miss it so much! 

 Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 07:08 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

I really miss this story. Can't, but have to wait on an update.

 Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 09:09 pm
Title: Open Seas and Olive Branches

Loving the new changes!!!

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Date: September 09 2016 05:45 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Can we get an update soon?

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 03:25 am
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Great update MJ!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2016 04:20 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Perfection! Mercy and Colton are so sexy and explosive together!! 👏😊

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 11:47 pm
Title: Needs

I always enjoy the conversations between the two of them.

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Date: September 03 2016 08:44 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Great update.

Can't get enough of this couple.

 Reviewer: Misty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 03:49 am
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

 

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Date: September 02 2016 05:21 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Steamy update. Love it.

What's next Gage?

 Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 02:14 am
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

This was an awesome update.

 Reviewer: Jan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 31 2016 02:47 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Can't wait for the next adventre Gage has for Mercy.

Please update soon.

 Reviewer: Candice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 02:04 pm
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Interesting... She finally gave in. I thought he was going to give her the business last night from the looks of it. If that's how she reacts to your head game, I'm afraid of what will happen when you actually have sex. Lol. 

Update soon! 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 06:17 am
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Now  that is what I am talking about. Gage and Mercy together.

 Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 03:51 am
Title: Heads, Beds, & Webs

Shucky ducky quack quack,  Gage is about to put it down.  

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 01:11 am


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