We're getting there with these two. Taking some time is not a bad thing.
Author's Response:
im glad you're ok with it. Trust me there's alot more to come with them.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: May 12 2024 12:18 am
Not surprising. They were gonna be running into each other eventually.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2024 12:15 am
Hmmm...well, Danielle asked Brian the question, so now, here we go.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2024 12:14 am
OK, I feel for Larissa, I mean they way that the mom was just all cheesy with Brian was just sick and its b/c he's black please(rolling eyes) he's the one thats not only a playa , but is doing something very illeagle, and she treats David like a bug she stepped on, and he treats Larrissa like a queen. Her and David mom are just alike, juist b/c people are the same race doesn't mean that they are the same... and I bet that David's mom would love that HO Gabby.
Oh and to answer your question, I bet David's father would have no issue with Larissa b/c not only is she pretty, but she's smart and knows what she wants to do with her life. And she won't put up with and crap. But I have a feeling that David's father had a piece on the side and his mom knows about it.
Kendra and Jason are jut too cute for words... But I can't wait until they find her mother was the one that his uncle was in love and wanted to marry.
Author's Response:
You're so right about Larissa. Her mother is a task to deal with and so is David's. Let's hope her and David keep fighting for their love despite all of this.
Lmao off at your comment about Gabby. There's more to come with her.
And interesting thoughts on David's dad. Hopefully he gets out and makes up for lost time.
Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 08 2024 12:02 pm
Hmmm....I feel like Larissa put bad juju out in the universe with that comment...lol!
@NT: however you want to post is good. I'm taking it as it comes, no matter what :)
Author's Response:
@flickchick- aww thank you for your support, I will keep posting once a week then
and about Larissa's comment, which one are you talking about? when she told Kendra she hoped she didnt experience the parent drama?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2024 09:25 pm
I'm smiling so hard! So damn cute!!
Author's Response:
aww <3 we all need a Jason right lol
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2024 09:07 pm
Hmmm...glad Lisha's backed up. Don't need those issues at the moment.
Author's Response:
they sure dont! lol
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2024 08:41 pm
I agree with Larissa about the hypocrisy of it all. Its not fair and her mother is taking pleasure in her favoritism. Unfortunately, I think the joke will be on her when it all blows up and poor Danielle is a sad casualty. She's giving Brian praise he's yet to truly earn and criticism to David he hasn't earned.
And good for Larissa for just staying out of it. Keep that up. Just continue being a loving sister and don't have anything to do with it. At the end of the day, its not her business anyway.
Should be interesting to see this play out.
Author's Response:
lets hope that Brian is just misunderstood by Larissa and will acutally do right by Danielle, besides he is Reese's brother, so he may have a good intentions after all. Ms.Evelyn is a trip though.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2024 08:24 pm
I'm finally caught up,,, and there is going to be some drama coming,
OK David needs to beware of Ms, Gabby, that girl needs meds, she is not going to give up on David; I am glad that he did set her straight, maybe Larrisa needs to talk to her as well and Larrisa needs to trust David, Oh and I don;t like David's mother and her attidtude Latina women are not the only women that are strong and stand by thier man no matter the race, Maybe she needs to stop being a DOORMAT and let her hubby go if he's always in and out of jail.
As for Lisha, she needs to step back and look at herself she is so distrustful, Reese has never given her a reason to doubt his love for her and IMO she is gpingAnd to push Reese away And stay out of Brian's business what he does is not your issue, and Reese is right, he doens't agree with what is brother does, however he's not going to let you keep bad mouthing him either.
Whew, glad I got that all out LOL.
Author's Response:
Hopefully Gabby gets it through her head and lets the couple be happy. David's mother is experiencing some culture shock. Lets hope she gets over it and accepts Larissa. if you had to guess, how do you think David's father would react to his relationship with Larissa?
Yes Elisha needs to heal, I hope she gets that. Do you still feel like Reese is an undercover player?
Another question, how often would you like me to post chapters? A good portion of the story is already written, but I am still working on it. I dont want to overwhelm you all with too much at once.
Thank you for continuing to read and support me! I greatly appreciate it.
Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2024 05:20 pm
Awww....first date jitters....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2024 02:53 am
Loved that first date!!
Wait...Miriam?!?!? As in Kendra's mom???
Author's Response:
thank you! im glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2024 02:50 am
Well, Reese and Elisha were going to end up having this fight eventually anyway. Cant keep making the guy pay for things he hasn't even done. He's fed up.
Brian...that's disappointing. Hope her sister doesn't get caught up in that.
Author's Response:
how often would you like me to post chapters? most of the story is written but i dont want to overwhelm you all with posting to frequently and posting too much at once. Let me know your thoughts.
Thank you for continuing to read the story and leaving your reviews. I enjoy reading the reviews so much!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2024 02:47 am
Ok, how he asked her out; too cute and sexy. I approve!!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks, I'm glad you thought so. Hopefully they both continue making progress and not let the shyness get in their way.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2024 08:35 pm
So, Larissa had her words with Reese about the situation. Leave it there. Reese was right; the rest is on them. Stay out of folks love lives because of that. Things can turn and suddenly you're the enemy!
And Gabby....David told her as simply as he could...not interested. I hope she doesn't make a situation ugly with a guy she doesn't even know that well. She would be making a fool out of herself. And no guy is worth all that.
Author's Response:
I agree, you do have to let people do what their hearts desire and hope for the best. Larissa just wants the best for her sister but has to also respect her boundaries and decisions.
I hope Gabby takes the hint and moves on and lets this couple be lol
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2024 08:24 pm
Hmm..well, as far as Danielle goes, she was warned. If Brian proves her wrong, great! If not, she was told Nothing else Larissa can do about it.
That mess with Gloria, stuff like that happens, too. Not much Larissa can do about that either. Nor that crap with Gabby. She told David how she felt and now her job is to keep trusting and believing him... and THEM. To keep her wits about herself and don't run her man into that heffa's arms with stupidity. Don't do the work for her! Wow, Larissa does seem to be getting the lion's share of problems at the moment.
David seems to have his mind and heart right concerning Larissa and her place in his life. He also needs to keep his wits abourt himself. That will go a very long way because he might have a battle in his own home with that. Being centered and clear within himself and Larissa is key.
They're teens, but they really are doing and saying adult stuff, so the sooner they mature with this, the better.
Kenya and Jason; coming along. I like his approach. A foundation for anything being built is needed.
Liked the updates!
Author's Response:
thank you for comment <3
yes poor Larissa has been bearing alot of burdens to be so young. I do hope Brian does right by her sister, we'll just have to wait and see.
You are so right about Larissa and David needing to stay focused on what matters most, their relationship. We will see where life takes these two.
Stay tuned for more! I promise it gets better and better.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2024 09:15 pm
Ok! All caught up. Man...did these two take the long way around or what? I hope that study session does the trick. I need a first date to happen here real soon.
Author's Response:
lol, dont worry its coming. I just want to portray the hesistancy and fear that people of two different races may have in expressing their interest in each other. But trust me its coming sis
thanks for reading <3
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2024 03:45 am
Supreb!!
Author's Response:
thank you for reading <3
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2024 03:17 am
Good beginning introduction for this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2024 03:16 am
I'm just loving Jason and Kendra more and more,they are just too cute for words. They are both just so shy and a bit insecure, hopefully one of them will take the plunge and just be go for it.
I see red flags with Reese, he's an undecover player, and he hides it well. Lisha IMHO is going to be hurt big time, she should not be OK with a man that can't express his emotions and has to "play" hard all the time. And Lisha is the girl that will take him back no matter how many times he direspects her.. I'm going to be watching those two.
Author's Response:
Aww im glad you're liking Jason and Kendra. I was cracking up on yoir comment about Reese lol. Only time will tell with those two. I am excited to give you all more, stay tuned!!
Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2024 01:12 pm
This story is cute so far, has a 90210 kinda vibe, it flows very well.
I'm already looking forward to Jason and Kendra's story; its so cute how they're both shy around one another, and Jason should find Eric and teach this guy a lesson (LOL)
Already dont like Larrisa's mom, that girl is crying out for attention and not what money can buy, David seems like a nice guy, but mom is just color struck, and dad is a wimp, he seems like he needs to put his foot down.
Awaiting more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. I have lot more to give you all and it's gonna get deep!
Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2024 11:18 pm