Hiya. I had a huge smile when I saww thiis update. I just have one questtion...did Lisa threatened John as well when he dated Evangelne? Why does Victor get the third degree while John gets a pass? (I'm a little protective of Victor). Lisa and Viki are both first place contenders for my least favouite characters.
I can't wait to see who's Layla's secret fella.
Have a great week.
Author's Response:
Hey Sarah I hope you are doing well
LOL Oh No not Lisa and Viki in that category together. Victor and Evangeline are married now so I knew Lisa would come with guns blazing but I do believe Lisa has a healthy respect for Victor..
As for Layla, I wanted to give a glimpse into her life (it's not that she is alone). Although I'm on the fence about whether I should develop this character knowing that the story can't go on forever :)
Thanks so much for reading and leaving an awesome review. Have a great week as well!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01 2025 07:09 pm
Great update. I smiled when I saw this update. I hope Molly finally gets her comeuppance. 'Sigh' Evangeline's mother is coming to town. If Victor doesn't have a drinking problem noow, he will by the time she leaves. Good luck Vic. I hope they are expecting a bundle of joy..wink, wink, nod, nod.
Have a great week.
Author's Response:
Hey Sarah!!!
I don't believe Evangeline's mother is that horrible, at leasts not the way I'm writing her..LOL!! Victor can definitley hold his own this time around ;)
As the Creoles in my country say, Tek yuh time...LOL!!!!
Have a wonderful week, Sarah! Thanks so much for reading, enjoying and leaving an awesome review!!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 28 2025 02:51 pm
Thnx for the update. I appreciate it.
Author's Response:
And thank you so much for leaving a review!!!!
Reviewer: Magensby Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 16 2025 05:09 am
Hi, welcome back. Awww. I want a Victor. Now the drama will begin in the form of Blair, Vicki "The One Who Thinks She Knows It All", and possibly Evangeline's mother. I can't wait for the firm to be brought down and everyone get their comeuppance especially Malicious Molly and Thickhead Thomas.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Author's Response:
Thank You Sarah!
I want a Victor too but in my country it's barely possible :D
The drama with S & L is about to get real as well as Victor and Evangeline's family ties ;)
I see that you are following my alliteration lead LOL
I'm always looking forward to and indeed grateful for your reviews!
A wonderful weekend and week to you as well!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 06 2025 03:25 pm
Hi. Thank you for another great chapter. Wow! There're married! I thought they were engaged. You got me. LOL
I can't wait for that firm to crash and burn. Oh and Viki as well, lol. (I can not stand her in this story)
Have a great week.
Author's Response:
Hey Sarah!!!
It's always great to receive a review from you! :)
Yeah they were engaged for a hot minute but remember Victor had a bright idea on the way home and Vange went with it LOL!!!
Maybe I should title the next chapter Discovery because its about to get serious.
Thanks again for reviewing and have and awesome week!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 10 2025 01:43 pm
Really enjoyed this chapter! Thnx for the read. Looking forward to more soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Magensby for enjoying and leaving a review!!! I truly appreciate it!!!
Reviewer: Magensby Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 15 2025 11:47 pm
Happy New Year. Hi. Welcome back. I can't get enough of Victor and Evangeline stories, especially when you do the writing. Why do I get the feeling that a surprise secret wedding is about to take place? (Hint, hint).
I can't wait until those in the firm get their comeuppance...here's to looking at you Molly. I am especially looking forward to Vicki's reaction. She might give literal meaning to term ' drop dead from shock.' LoL.
May this New Year bring you, love, joy peace and an even closer relationship with Christ. Have a wonderful week.
Author's Response:
HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU SARAH!!!!
Yeah it took it more than a moment to update this story especially to this being our busy time at work (and it still is LOL) I'm also happy that you enjoyed reading!!
I can't do that to Viki, right...hmmm :)
Sarah you understand, I'm not a true writer like others on this page and just consider it a little hobby. If two characters catch my attention then my mind starts to write before I ever put fingers to keyboard so I really appreciate when a reader enjoys what my little story.
Every year Jesus and I are working on it LOL. I wish you all of God's Blessings and grace for this year as well!!!!
As always, thanks so very much for reading and leaving and awesome review!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08 2025 03:19 pm
Hiya. I smiled when I saw this update today. Finally someone called out Viki on her behaviour. I have to wonder myself if Viki is a closeted racist. She'll actively encourage Todd and once upon a time Victor to be with Blair, who can give Heidi Fleiss a run for her reputation. However, she has a problem with Evangeline, who is a babe in the dating world compared to Blair. Why doesn't she concentrate on bringing Todd to heel when it comes to Victor?
I hope Victor can bring the firm down and Evangeline needs to learn to lighten up.
Have a great weekend.
Author's Response:
Hey Sarah!!!
It's so wonderful reading your reviews!! I'm so glad you took time out to post one which makes me feel awesome!!!I always read your synopsis very carefully. When it comes to Evangeline I believe she is lawyer mode at the mode considering her meeting with ACE..lol.
Have a great weekend too!!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2024 04:37 pm
Thank you for the update. Awww...he came to see her. I love their relationship. "Saint Viki" who can try the patience of an actual saint. I think part of her dislike for Evangeline is her feeling of being replaced as the only woman who can keep Victor on the straight and narrow. The only woman whose opinion matters most to him. The one who has the most control over him and most definitely the one for whom he'll do anything.
I really hope Molly gets her comeuppance, in fact that entire firm needs a good shaking up.
Keep up the good work. I just have one request...can you revisit Celia? Please, please. Sara is another whose commeppance I would like to read .
Have a wonderful week.
Author's Response:
Sarah thanks so much for reading and leaving a lovely review!!
And I totally agree with your assessment of Viki. She is who she is and I can't write her any other way. Thanks a lot OLTL LOL!!!
Do have a wonderful week as well!!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous




Date: October 02 2024 01:56 pm
Welcome back. You've done it again. Your talent for writing Evangeline and Victor is amazing. I hope both Molly and Robert get their comeuppance. What is with Viki and now Lynn has joined the dance.
I would like Vic and Vangie married with a couple of sprogs :)
Have a great week!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for welcoming me back! I've always enjoyed writing about these two because these two characters inspired me to write fanfiction. I'll take your suggestions into careful consideration.
Thanks so much for leaving a review and have a great week as well!!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 19 2024 07:10 pm
Glad you update this story, I have been missing your stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm very appreciative of your review!!!
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous




Date: September 01 2024 07:42 am
Good Start!
Author's Response:
I'm grateful for your review and happy that you are enjoying it so far!!
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous




Date: July 08 2024 12:16 am