That was interesting. I wasn't expecting actually.
Author's Response: Flicker and Sparkle, I'm glad you found the story interesting. Thanks for commenting! Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed
[Report This]Date: July 08 2010 02:36 pm
Glad to see you back posting, Suprina...that was great...and I'm so glad at the end that Connie realized the best 'revenge' is living well...she chose her...and she took back her power from a worthless man and did what was best for her...glad she had the foresight to protect herself...who knows what he could have given her and she certainly doesn't need a baby to complicate things...I love actualization stories when women can finally see the forest for the trees...good going, Connie...you're right...you're better than that!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, living well is the BEST revenge, Attheritz. And I'm so glad to be back posting on this site. It's been about a year, I think. Wow! What a difference a year makes.
Anywho, I'm all for a person taking back his/her power from others. Especially worthless others. And that subtle condom insertion was my way of having Connie use her common sense. Ain't no telling who else that fool was cheating with. Real talk.
Thanks for leaving a comment!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2010 05:49 am
WOW!!!! Prina you already know what was running through my mind when I read this...I loved it...Great Job!!!
Author's Response: Oh yes, girl, this one right here was VERY close to home. Thanks for leaving a comment! :)
[Report This]Date: July 08 2010 02:50 am
I'm happy she took a minute to realize that he was no longer worth giving a second thought about! It is now time to focus on her happiness! Glad to see you're back!
Author's Response:
Yes, it was time for Connie to focus on her own happiness. Better late than never. I'm glad to be back.
Thanks for leaving a comment!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2010 01:12 am
I am glad that she realized that he really wasn't worth the effort. Thanks and Welcome back.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the welcome back, Divsionred. It HAS been a while. And yes, Connie had to realize that very important lesson.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2010 01:01 am
Haahhha - great shortie!
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting!
P.S. I'm loving your user name! Very cute.
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 08 2010 12:54 am
Nice
Author's Response: Thanks for the short, but sweet comment, Cali2mt406! :)
[Report This]Date: July 08 2010 12:26 am
Damn, that was rough!! Too bad she had learn her lesson until after she gave herself the nimrod!!! Excellent story.
Author's Response:
Pmgayles, yeah that was a bit rough. But hey, a lesson learned is a lesson learned. Connie won't be with the nimrod ever again that's for sure. lol.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2010 11:30 pm
This was good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and for leaving a comment, DirtyDiva! :)
Date: July 07 2010 11:12 pm
i loved it though i am a little disappointed it had to end so soon!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! :)
Yes, Salethia, it was a shortie this time. I may extend it at a later date. Shrugs. We'll see.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Salethia Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2010 10:50 pm
i really enjoyed the story very interesting thought it would be longer but as usual you always do a good job. Suprina i really enjoy reading whatever you write.
Author's Response:
Black Princess, I thought about making it longer, but I didn't want to go over the 1,000 word count challenge. I'm thrilled that you enjoy my work so much. Kudos to you for taking the time to tell me that precious nugget. :)
As always, thanks for leaving a comment.
Reviewer: Black Princess Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2010 09:56 pm
You know, I was scared of where this was going but really liked the destination. It was raw and hopefully cathartic. Well done.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked where the story went. I wasn't too sure how to end it at first, but decided to finish on an up note with Connie having a few life-changing revelations. Had the story been longer, she might have done all kinds of truly wicked things to her hubby. lol.
Thanks for leaving a comment.
Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2010 09:40 pm
Wow. I'd just stick to getting a bulldog lawyer and cleaning his ass out in a settlement. XD
Author's Response: tee-hee. I'm with you, Leo Princess. A bulldog lawyer might have been a better use of her time. Thanks for leaving a comment.
Date: July 07 2010 09:36 pm