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Title: Chapter 31

Well I can say his parents are definitely going to remember Tabbie and Dax from the mall. Pa is going to have one drama filled fucked-up birthday.lol

I want Kenny/Deleon not Kendra and Prince....I already got my names picked out for Kenny/Deleon-Keleon or Denny or Dendra. 

 

 Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 06:08 am
Title: Chapter 30

Deleon and Kenny are killing me here. Please don't let that be the last time for them. They're so damn prefect for one another, and his family loves the hell out of her.

 Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 05:47 am
Title: Chapter 31

ooooo, running round room!!!!please update and please let deleon marry her please

 Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 06:02 pm
Title: Chapter 31

Absolutely unacceptable and complete rubbish that you leave us with these great updates and then leave us hanging there. UGH, I've waited so long for this story to be updated because it's so good and I was no dissapointed. I just hope the next update doesn't take as long.

I wonder what Prince is going to say when he meets the Halperns. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 02:16 pm
Title: Chapter 31

Welcome back!!!

I've missed this story!!!

Wonderful updates!

We knew this day was coming, sooner or later.

I hope Kendra and Prince's reunion doesn't ruin Pa's birthday party.

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 01:34 pm
Title: Chapter 31

Holy guacamole! Another chapter?!!!! Ah sookie sookie now, I'm loving it!  DeLeon just does it for me; he’s mysterious and complicated and an open book all at the same time. Loved that she’s not walking away from him and the fact that she’s allowing him to be by her side as she faces her other reality.

I'm really wondering what happened all though years ago, wondering what the ‘town’ did to their family. I'm curious as to who the baby was…was it a brother or sister of Dax and DeLeon or someone else’s innocent child.

Interesing.

Here’s my favorite part:

 

He shifted her until she was on her back, her legs spread, his body nestling in between them as he rubbed his nose on her neck. He'd felt the wetness of her silent tears, knew what they were, but didn't ask.

"Promise me you'll call 'im," he whispered, his voice still sleepy. "No matter who it was. Just call 'im. Then we can move on. Together."

…and then he says…

"Promise me, baby." He kissed her neck and she popped a sob.

"I promise," she croaked.

 

Now that’s real!  Gotta love that man!!!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 11:07 am
Title: Chapter 31

I wonder which man Kendra will  decided upon.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 08:37 am
Title: Chapter 31

Oh, I'm so nervous for these two. Like dreading these next few chapters, but SO hopeful that it will all work out. SO hopeful.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 06:23 am
Title: Chapter 31

Poor Kendra, poor DeLeon, poor Prince.  Although I'm on Team DeLeon, I can't help but pity Prince.

 Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 31

This is going to be a hot mess with all of them. Awesome update.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 31

I hate these next few chapters as well...what happened to her being with Prince....damn. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 03:51 am
Title: Chapter 17

I wonder to what is going to happen.  I hope that she doesn't fall for Deleon because she belongs with  Prince.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 03:49 am
Title: Chapter 16

Oh. oh, Kendra  is definitely not feeling Dax.  Damn.  Ok, still team Prince.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 03:22 am
Title: Chapter 6

This is getting good!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 02:42 am
Title: Intro

 IT--  Damn! You've don it again!!! I LOVE this story!  I can't believe that Kendra is acting like this.  Girl, you know you love DeLeon! Just have Prince come, show him you're okay, and stay with your BABY DADDY! That's right!!! You know her ass is prego!  But WTH, there are crazy ass racist bitches out there ready to take you down!!!!!  Clear it up with your man now so he can be on pont to protect his new family!!!!

 Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 02:22 am
Title: Chapter 31

Damn i am hooked again on this one whoo!!!!!!!!!!!1

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 01:57 am
Title: Chapter 30

I have missed this story something fierce! It's been long overdue. You've jumped right back in the saddle and made me fall in love with the Halperns (Kenny included) all over again.  Pa is just the best guy who doesn't seem like he's over eighty at all. (For some reason, i envision still-fine-as-hell James Brolin as Pa.)

Dax and Tabbie really seem to be on track again but I think there will always be a special place in his heart for Kendra.  Can't wait to see what baby Dax looks like.

Prince.

I still have reservations about his relationship with, and feelings for, Kendra. They're good questions though, make no mistake about it…I think Prince is a positive in Kendra’s life; I'm just not quite sure how they define their friendship.

Ahh, save the best for last…

DeLeon and Kendra.

How can two people become one in less than a week (I guessing at the timeframe) and it totally not be weird or fake? It’s as if they’ve been a couple for a lifetime. The answer is simple: they were simply made for each other; they’re perfectly matched in every way. Loved the dinner Kendra cooked. Who knew baby-girl could burn.  See…that right there just proves she and DeLeon belong together…they both can cook!  LOL

IT gurl, thanks SO MUCH for updating. I read the chapter three times already! It was definitely worth the wait.

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 12:52 am
Title: Chapter 30

That was sweet, she isn't going anywhere DeLeon.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2011 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 31

I thought that Kenya had been dating Chase, she's not married to Prince. But Prince sure is in love with Kenya.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 11:51 pm
Title: Chapter 4

OooohWee dax a lil sweet on her....

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 11:06 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Oh no she has amensia..

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 30

Kendra will eventually pick up her cell phone, I believe her memory is back.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 09:08 pm
Title: Chapter 2

They are a riot!LOL

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 08:44 pm
Title: Chapter 29

Deleon know that they are looking for Kendra, thank you for  the update.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 08:27 pm
Title: Chapter 30

OH man! This is killing me!! Let her answer to phine already...lol!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2011 06:49 pm


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