Title: Chapter 29

i hope she gets with child...giggle sigh

Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 04:48 pm

Title: Chapter 29

I love love love this story. I don't know if I've been this interested in a story like this in a while. I'm glad that Kendra and Deleon admitted their feelings and decided to pursue something and I really hope that they can find a way to make something work when and if she gets back in touch with her friends and family. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 06:33 am

Title: Chapter 29

Loved the update Prince and company are getting close to finding her. Can't wait to see what happens when they do.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 07:31 am

Title: Chapter 29

Is it wrong, that I'm kinda looking forward to the impending heartbreak? Great move forward with the story.

Symph.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 29

What the hell is wrong with this sheriff?

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 29

Oh, Lawdy.

So, where did DeLeon go, if not to Germantown? I feel like I missed something.

Interesting that they all believe that the end is near. I wonder if Kendra feels the same? 

LOL. Cat and Donald! What is it that Kendra has that sets all the men's hearts aflutter and brings other parts to attention but draws the pointy claws of most of the women???

I see a plot to chase Kenny outta town about to be hatched.

Thanks for the extra chapter.



Author's Response:

LoL you didn't miss anything; DeLeon just didn't go anyhere. hopped in his truck and took a ride so he didn't have to see first-hand Kendra disappear from his life once she had the phone back linking her to her past. he was sure she was goner.

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 29

Oh, Lawdy.

So, where did DeLeon go, if not to Germantown? I feel like I missed something.

Interesting that they all believe that the end is near. I wonder if Kendra feels the same? 

LOL. Cat and Donald! What is it that Kendra has that sets all the men's hearts aflutter and brings other parts to attention but draws the pointy claws of most of the women???

I see a plot to chase Kenny outta town about to be hatched.

Thanks for the extra chapter.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2011 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 29

Oh, sookie, sookie now! Donald, don't do something you're going to regret... And Kat, get a life! DeLeon isn't your man; you were just too stupid to believe you actually had something with him.

I love where this story is headed and I know that we're going to have a "crash" moment soon. Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter 29

Good   i   Love     IT     bhdhewhsxcsbha

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 28

Yay, an update!!

I don't have to stalk anymore.

Well, isn't Kendra as hapy as a clam with DeLeon. And she seems to fit right into the family. I loved Pa's reaction to the news. Then again, the three guys have all had little crushes on her.

There hasn't been any overt racism by anyone who wasn't upset about her and DeLeon; but I probably still wouldn't be comfortable in such a small, all-white town.

And bless Prince, Ralph and Victoria for their efforts to find Kendra. Their encounters have been a learning experience.

That Tabby is quick. Great cover up. lol What a dilemma they believe they've stumbled across. 

On to the next chapter.  

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 10:23 pm

Title: Chapter 28

Great Update.  I guess we are getting closer to Prince and company finding Kendra.  I really like her and DeLeon together.  They complete each other.  Prince is also important to her, but not as much as DeLeon, I think.

DeLeon is going to explode when he learns Kendar has a mother-in-law.  Can't wait. Although, it will also break his heart.

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Kendra's not married; the Ellion's just say that to put weight to the search. but thanks for reading and all will be . . . interesting in a chapter or two. lol

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 09:21 pm

Title: Chapter 29

Love the update...also Lovin your other story drought. What the hell is going on with the people in this time. I'm still thinking everyone has some serious secrets that need to come to light. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 29

I love this story, especially the interactions between Kendra & DeLeon.  I get so excited when I see an update.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 29

Maybe Cat and Sheriff Hope need to get together. Poor Deleon he is scared to death about losing her. Little does he know Ken is not tied down to anyone, so she is all but his.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 08:46 pm

Title: Chapter 28

These country bumpkins aren't ignorant, Tabbie knew how to cover Dax's outburst. Kendra got the phone and it's working I'm assuming but not once on the ride back did she look at it to see what was on it in order to help her get more of her memory back. She's starting to remember, since she knew what kind of work she did, but it looks look like all she was excited about was coming back home to Deleon. I doubt Deleon really had work to do that prevented him from going to the mall with them, but was too afraid to go for fear that she would remember. Remembering means he would be losing her back to her old life with the first call from her phone or first name from her phone that she recognized. Could that be why pa didn't want to go either, he would be losing a daughter. Love this family.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 02:45 pm

Title: Chapter 28

And so real life is about intrude on the new couple. *le sigh*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 01:18 pm

Title: Chapter 28

You know…I’m sitting here wondering why DeLeon didn’t take Kendra to the mall himself.  He’s so protective of her –hell, he practically carries her everywhere she goes so why all of a sudden he’s going to work? Hmmm, you know what I think? I think he was giving her an out…maybe…or possibly scared that she’d want to leave him, return to her life once her phone was repaired and he was afraid he’d never let her go. DeLeon knows her memory is back, and he loves her enough to do the right thing. But there she is, literally running back into his open arms! Oh man, I love it!  Even if I’m WAY off base, she still came back to him and that’s all that matters.

It’s obvious she doesn’t want Chaz, Chad, Chump, whatever the hell his name is. He’s a fool for cheating on Kendra. Did she know of his whoring activities? I’m sure she does. If this was supposed to be a romantic weekend then why didn’t Kendra have sexy underwear or lingerie in her luggage?  She was pissed that she didn’t pack anything enticing when she and DeLeon first made love so that little snippet right there gave me pause as well.

I dunno, it’s late and I’m over-thinking things (as usual) but I love reading stories that makes ya go hmmmm, that’s interesting. Your story is no exception.

I'm glad Dax and Tabitha 'protected' her. DeLeon is going to be pissed though. 

My fav scene was of Kendra schooling the kid as he played a game. That was cute.

As always, fantastic writing I.T.



Author's Response:

thanks, JV4ME. and you are quite on base. lol very insightful feedback. and i loved your msg with the song suggestion. i've got a playlist that i listen to everytime i write this. that would be a great addition. right now, it's got Taylor Swift's 'Innocent', Abra Moore's 'Sugarite', Sensation Junkies' 'Olalla', and Peter Bradly Adams' 'Darkening Sky' as well as a bunch of Mumford and Sons and Beirut. strange list and a little all over the place, but it works. lol.

thanks again so much for the positivity. got some rather negative feedback on this one and as well as my other story and was a bit down about it. reading this made me happy.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 09:40 am

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2011 07:23 pm

Title: Intro

I think I posted a comment before but I am not sure.  Off to a good start.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2011 03:46 pm

Title: Chapter 27

Loved the updates.  DeLeon and Kendra are so well matched.  I wonder how Prince is going to handle that Kendra has met someone special.

Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 11 2011 09:21 pm

Title: Chapter 27

Wow! I read and read until the end. I don't know when you started this story, I started yesterday. I would have paid to read it! I really like "Kenny" with DeLeon, I know Prince is an option, but at this point I can't see it.

I can see angst for DeLeon once Prince shows up to claim Kendra, but I think the endgame will be Kendra and DeLeon.  Prince had his chance and DeLeon is healing, so....

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2011 04:54 pm

Title: Chapter 27

You are killing me over her. Prince can have Amy I like her and she sound like she needs a little bit of love in her life. I can't take a Prince and Kendra relationship as anything other than friends. It's like I said before I like Prince just fine, but not with Kendra. If you think De'Leon is giving you trouble now, just wait until he finds out what you're trying to do to his new found happiness. Hell the way the town carries on about him being horrible and stuff. I am afraid of what he'll do if he lose Kendra. I like Tabbie she's just right for Dax. I like this new De'leon just as much as the old one, and I am looking forward to finding out more about his past before Kendra. I am also looking forward to reading the conversations between them. If you're looking for a way to speed up them getting to know one another. Have Kendra and De'leon play 21 question in bed after making love. It's a simple game but it serves it purpose.

Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2011 08:41 am

Title: Chapter 26

Okay, I like Prince just fine, but he can't get with Kendra. I love her with De'Leon to much. Prince needs to go vibe with someone else and let Kendra be. Great addition.

Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2011 08:13 am

Title: Chapter 27

deleon will fight to keep her...

Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2011 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 27

Great update.

Dam!! Prince now is not the time for you own up to your feeling for Kendra.

She's someone else now.

Please don't let Deleon get hurt in this

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2011 06:13 pm



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