Title: Chapter 25

I love this story, but when is Prince and family coming to town to rescue her?

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2011 01:41 am

Title: Intro

okay...so this is ah-maze-ing.

I love it. It feels real.

cannibalistic hicks..you made my day.

Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: Petitemarie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2011 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 25

I like Amy she seems cool, my only problem is why so short of chapters. I am enjoying this story and hope it gets an ending.

Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2011 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 25

Awww...Kendra met the rest of his fsmily. She's in good now.


DeLeon does need to stop all the damn growling and hollering though! Geez!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2011 09:30 pm

Title: Chapter 25

I just love Deleon and I am so glad that Kendra finally gave into her attraction.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02 2011 08:20 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Kendra's making new firends all over the place. Sweet update. Love how protective Sammy is with her too.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2011 04:49 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Nice update.  Well, it has only been three days.  Wow! I thought it was more.

Who is Amy?  Is Jeremy his child? 

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2011 04:49 pm

Title: Chapter 25

deloen wow... update soon my peepers are loving this story.. happy holiday

Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2011 02:23 pm

Title: Chapter 24

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

Lots of air was cleared in that short but sweet chapter.

Wow! Deleon is taking Kendra to meet Amy. That would be like taking her home to meet the folks in regular circles.

Can't wait to read what impression the two ladies make on each other.Deleon? He's ga-ga and quite whipped. lol

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 10:48 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Whew. Sounds like they damn near broke the bed. lol

I love Deleon's little pet name for Kendra. "crazy ass."  It actually fits them both.

What a great love scene!!

On to the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 10:32 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I am so glad to have found this story. I am loving it! Kendra and Deleon are a sexy duo. I keep picturing Kendra as a kind of Keri Hilson look-a-like.

Reviewer: Shea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I really like those two. They really are good together and for each other. I can't wait to see how things will work out.

 

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 05:48 pm

Title: Chapter 24

So I just read it again and I love the conversations between them and how they feed off eachother, so funny. I also loved the bit where he carried her over his shoulder and she was tapping his butt-cheeks haha and he didn't bother asking coz he's comfortable with her weirdness lol, so sweet.
SHE'S GONNA MEET AMY!! Pretty big deal huh? Deleon must be serious :)

Reviewer: alphabet_girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 24

sigh
*swoon* I love these two muchly. Thanks so much for the update. And a happy new year to you :)

Reviewer: alphabet_girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Thank You

Happy New Year! 

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 02:28 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update.  Happy New Year to you.

Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 10:07 am

Title: Chapter 24

See, I'm loving that she makes him laugh! It's just plain sexy, I have a feeling that very few people can do that to DeLeon.

The sex...good gravy! I knew he could bring it! And Kendra was loving it!

Loved it!! Happy New Year!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 07:19 am

Title: Chapter 24

Sounds like a plan. Thanks for the update. Happy New Year.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 06:09 am

Title: Chapter 24

Yay!!! They have christened the trailer. And it only takes one time to get preggers. LOL

Happy New Year! Thanks for the post. I was jsut wondering where this was. I'm addicted. Have a safe New Year, Chica.



Author's Response: thanks, boo! i have pretty much the rest of the entire story mapped out, just about finding the time to write them. there's a lot more than i thought too! thank you for sticking with the story and giving such encouraging reviews.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2011 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 23

O-O-O-OH MY GOD. Girl you got me singing Usher. I love them as a couple if you must sperate them please allow them to find one another again someday. I also happen to find Tabbie and Dax cute so I am hoping they'l work through their issues. But I am begging you to allow DeLeon and Kendra to be happy for a while before the drama begins.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2010 01:55 am

Title: Chapter 23

Out-flipping-standing. 

Damn, but DeLeon is hot.  

Reviewer: alices Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2010 07:22 pm

Title: Chapter 23

OK just 1 more.  Can you hook up Prince and Barry? Maybe then he would have found someone of his own and he can stay in town or more on and just be good friends. I would prefer being friends and he can show him the ropes :0). 

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2010 02:24 pm

Title: Chapter 23

OK, NOW That I read that again for the third time to make sure I didn't miss any of the HOTNESS That is crazy ass and asshole question WHAT HAPPENED To the XXL Condoms. I hope they are ready for baby make three. Because I am sure they won't STOP AT JUST ONE. HAHAHAH!!!!!  HOT                    HOT               HOT     HOT          

HOT                      HOT               HOT!!!!!!

 This HOT is to symbolize THAT IT IS HOT ALL OVER THIS PAGE !  RATING: 10 x 10

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2010 02:19 pm

Title: Chapter 22

ABOUT TIME!!!! THe first step is always the killer. I am glad there ran blindly thru it. Thanks :0).

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2010 01:59 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Gurl your done lost your mind talking bout THE END. WE want more Deleon, more fire and lots more HEEEAAATT. You can throwing some drama in too. OK ? if they are getting together where they gone live,how. What is she going to do about her job. If possible maybe someone can give them an inheritance to set them up for life maybe? ??? sure am glad you have all of this already figured OUT!

Signed Your,

LOYAL FAN

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2010 01:50 pm



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