I LOVE YOU!!! You are so funny and crazy. This story can only get better, short of you fixing her up with Cass(ChaSE) dufus again you can do no wrong. NOW UPDATE!
PLEZEEEEE!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 28 2010 01:25 pm
I am liking her more with DeLeon. I like Dax but I don't think Kendra right for him. He's sweet, but he nneds someone just as sweet as him. He's almost innocent and child like and he needs someone similar to that. But for some reason the dog think pulled at my heart strings. I love dogs, and DeLeon was willing to save the dog if he could and didn't give her crap about it when she fell apart over it dying.
Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2010 08:00 am
That was hot!! Reading that update had me sweating! Phew!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2010 05:40 am
Um, DeLeon, the reason to BUY condoms is to USE them!!! LMAO!!!
DAMNNNNNNNNNN!!! To use an overused Paris Hilton saying, "That's Hot"
Kendra is going to get pregnant. YAY!!! DeLeon will lose his damn mind if she leaves him [he already expects her to]. *sob*
btw, I had to use the big font while reading. I didn't want to miss a damn minute of this. I was so happy for DeLeon. He seemed so happy; almost lighthearted. I just know the other shoe will drop.
I'll have to read this again and savour the festivities. Kendra is something else. I'm seeing more in common with DeLeon every minute. He's in love with his "crazy ass" and Kendra loves her "asshole". How endearing. LOL
I'm just so glad for them both, but particularly DeLeon since he doesn't seem to have had much joy in his life.
Chica, you truly delivered. DAMMNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2010 03:10 am
TOO HOT. TOO TOO TOO DAMN HOT
*dies*
I can't say anymore than that *drools* LOL
p.s. you are so wrong for writing 'The End', I thought I was munching on some coronary arteries the way my heart jumped into my mouth LOL.
Anyway you know I love this story, well done :)
Date: December 28 2010 01:59 am
Damn! - that was one HOT chapter! Me likey! Me want more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 11:53 pm
OMG! Do not play like that. At the end of the chapter you wrote, "THE END." I thought WHAT! But then I read the rest and realized you were joking. I could not bring my eyes off of that declaration. I was like is she for real. Anyway, great chapter. DeLeon and Kendra finally got together ---Awesome. Thank you for making it happen. Cannot wait for more.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 11:51 pm
Hell yes, that was hot!! Love me some DeLeon!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 11:50 pm
I really ldon't like when he call her crazy ass. Just an odd nickname. Loving the story though.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 10:14 pm
Cool beans. Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 10:10 pm
deleon and kendra now thats hot and wow
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 09:45 pm
love it! but was I the only one that noticed, they didn't use a condom =)
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 09:43 pm
DAMNNNNNNNN THAT WAS SOME SERIOUS BACK BREAKING LOVING WHOOO I LOVE DELEON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 09:12 pm
I knew they were going to explode sooner or later.. Glad it was sooner than later.. Prince is going to have a royal fit when he meets Deleon.. I can only imagine what DeLeon, Pa and Dax will say when they meet Prince.
Great update.. Can we get another please.. Hopefully, we can sqeeze another snow day out of the snow storm.. You know after effects.
Author's Response: Lmao. i'll see what i can do. Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 27 2010 08:58 pm
Hot like HELL! Thank for the update!...seeing how these two are going to go at like rabbies i wonder if a baby or two will pop out, lol!...things are going to be very very interesting when Prince comes - thank you again!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 08:35 pm
Wow, talk about instant combustion. Those two hot like fire. Can't wait to see what'll happen next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 01:27 am
Thanks for the update. At last Kendra and DeLeon have made a connection. Hope you can update again soon. Happy Holidays.
Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 10:07 pm
This story is great ...Just read it. It is funny as well.
Nice!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 03:18 pm
thanks for the update...please let her world be swirled in tanned hands and chocolate sighs
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 10:55 am
Merry Christmas!!! Thank you for the wonderful yet short chapter.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 04:48 am
Wow. Don't really know what to say other than that...oh yeah, where the heck's Prince!?!!!
Reviewer: Shan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 04:10 am
aw man!!!!! family?? who needs family?? more please!!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 03:19 am
Finally, Deleon opens up a little. dam, it's like pulling teeth with this guy.
More update, please.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 02:59 am
Way to make DeLeon face up to wanting and loving you, Kendra. Telling him he's worth having something loving and good in his life. This chapter had me smiling from ear to ear. This was an exremely powerful chapter. I had to read it 3 times.
"Wanna do it again?"
"Hell yes." She rushed forward and jumped up in his arms, causing him to bust out laughing as he stumbled back into his recliner, her lips all over his face.
uh oh, they may burn down the trailer!
I felt sad for DeLeon because he was so tortured. He will not be able to let her go now. No way in hell. But, how can they be together? Is she willing to move to be with him? They seem at different class levels. There seems to be so much, on paper, that makes it hard to believe that they will end up together. But, romantic me sure as hell hopes that's what happens.
Chica, you are so gifted. You draw me into this story more and more with each chapter. Please let them have a little alone time for some hot butt nekkid lovemaking. OK, yeah, I just went all superficial, but I think DeLeon needs to make love to [not just have sex with] the woman he so clearly loves. Tis the Season!!! LOL
*off to read yet again*
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 02:53 am
Well, hot damn!
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: December 26 2010 01:17 am