Title: Chapter 22

thanks for the update but could we get to the loving already lol..happy holiday

Reviewer: marleanpat@hotmail.com Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26 2010 12:52 am

Title: Chapter 22

LOL....ok...it's just how they roll!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2010 12:34 am

Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update, so happy they finally admitted they care for each other. Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2010 11:24 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Hmmm, makes me wonder if its really Dax's baby.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2010 07:55 am

Title: Chapter 21

i love this story =) thx 4 the updates

Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 25 2010 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 21

Awww...you settled the Dax (would be) triangle beautifully, and flawlessly, I might add. Nobody gets hurt this way. Dax seemed to have settled in with that after seeing Tabitha as well.

Pa' is too funny. Tabby does have a lot to explain though.

 

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2010 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 21

*SCREAMS*
THEY'RE SO HOT!!!
*psst hey, Deleon, over here, I gots something to tell ya........I WANT YOUR BABIES!! MMHMM YUP, AIN'T GONNA LIE. (Yes I'm crazy, don't judge me) LOL. So excited for the next update yaaaaay. Is it bad that I don't want Prince to find her?!

Author's Response: it's not bad at all that you don't want Prince to find them at all! LoL

Reviewer: alphabet_girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 21

oh im loving this story!  and can it be another woman that's gonna kill poor kendra!  ha!  that woman is rackin' up some enemies!!  any way i google your leleon and i must say he is hard.  i like him hard too.  i pictured him older though.  closer to 30.  anywho, cant wait for the update if i reading what i think im reading in your update. teeheehee! 

Author's Response: whoa! kill Kendra? LoL and yes, Chris is much younger-looking than i would like for DeLeon, but you feel me on that 'Perfect Getaway' pic though. ::sigh:: DeLeon is 32 in the story though so yeah i agree about the baby-face. lol

Reviewer: kamla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Thank you for the update.  Dax is going to be a daddy, I hope he makes up with Tabby.  DeLeon needs to man up and accept he likes Kendra and do something about it.

Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Dax actually noticed that there's something going on between DeLeon and Kendra. 'cause he seems a little simple sometimes.

Yep, I knew he still was in love with his ex.  Hopefully, he'll get to talk and resolve things with her soon.

And now Kendra's old life is about to collide with her new one. I have no idea how that will turn out. Will DeLeon retreat even further?

You know, the more I read, the more I want. Looking forward to your next post. Thanks for doing this over the holiday.



Author's Response: thank you so much for your kind words! i hope to update, maybe tomorrow. oh, snap, Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 08:49 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Grab and kiss her, please. They need to put each other out of their misery.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 08:43 pm

Title: Chapter 20

DeLeon is sooo fucking hot love him badly...please at least let him and kendra do the deed because i soooo believe he is going to rock her world some kinda awesome...great update

Reviewer: marleanpat@hotmail.com Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 06:24 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Deleon and Kendra all the way. It's too late for her and Prince now.

Please let Prince come before these 'bitches' try and hurt her.

Great update.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Even though this was short, it was very effective. Will Kendra be the one to make DeLeon confront his feelings? She's going to be really frustrated by his refusing to go there as long as he thinks Dax is interested, even though he really wants to be with her. I'm thinking Kendra will force the issue at some point.

Never knew that batter could be so sexy. LOL

I'm loving the tension between those two. And there's a lot of it. This dance that they're doing is really a joy to read. Something's or someone's going to blow. I'm really liking the pacing of their budding relationship. I can wait for them to get together, because you're making the lead-up to it so very interesting. So, give me more.

Dax still loves his ex-girlfriend. 

The pic of DeLeon is not what I saw in my head, but damn, I can get with that. *growl*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 03:56 pm

Title: Intro

Paging Maury Povich ... I hope Dax doesn't let his good guy side staple his common sense shut (take a page from your brother, please) .  DeLeon must have one doozy of a backstory (that I will patiently wait to read) for him to always pull back.  Don't forget Pa, he cracks me up.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Luciana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Dax and Kendra 4 Life!

Reviewer: CooperationIsKey Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 02:34 pm

Title: Chapter 20

i sure hope so cuz stopping right there was just wrong on sooo many levels!!!! loved it!!! thanks for the update!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 01:27 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update.  I hope DeLeon and Kendra get together.  The picture for DeLeon is HOT!!!

Reviewer: bookachoholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 01:03 pm

Title: Chapter 20

hey,been waiting on this update for sometime now.i seriously squealed like a little kid about to get their fav treat!.as you can probably tell i love this story...but this update was so shorrrrrt???.Hope something happens between deleon and kendra before the cavalry comes to town.update soooon pliz.
p.s
that cast pic of deleon is perfect!having no problem visualisinng that,hehe.

Reviewer: greencrescent Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 08:20 am

Title: Chapter 20

What bee flew in Kendra's bonnet now??!!! I hope Dax don't let Tabitha fool him. He needs to get a DNA test before accepting her word as gospel truth about anything especially as she's also been running around with his best friend, the idiot!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for the update begging for a longer one you got a sista all hot and bothered then didnt deliver the goods!!! not fair!!!

Reviewer: Nothing but a Teaser!!!! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 06:30 am

Title: Intro

Ok I take it back, I saw some more pics of him --Chris Hemsworth--and hot damn this man is FINE!!! Yup definately  a Deleon!

Reviewer: fangirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 20

Oh please do update soon. Not too sure about the picture though (pictured him a little older),  oh well i've got my imagination.

Reviewer: fangirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 20

I like the pic of Deleon. Is Dax going to be a daddy or is she using him?

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 05:57 am

Title: Intro

I love this story - can't wait for more Kendra and DeLeon.

No pictures needed for me - I actually prefer no pictures, as it lets me draw my own conclusions on how I picture the character.

Please update soon - I mised this story over the last week!

 



Author's Response: yay! now that you wrote that, i may take that intro down! lol

Reviewer: katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2010 05:41 am



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