Pictures? Why are there not any pictures here??
Author's Response: ::sigh:: i'm sorry, but i don't do pics. i've addressed it several times, even in chapter intros. i hope it doesn't deter you from reading.
Date: December 22 2010 04:53 am
can i tell you, i love your story. i have been putting way to much thought into this story but i cant help it i really do like it! i've been reading some (all) of the other reviews and although i usually dont read stories without pictures, (the pictures are one of the best features of this site) your story pulled me in. as i've said before i have a real weakness for the good ole boy and when i saw that it in the story, i was excited. i was disappointed for a hot second that there were not pictures but i got over it quickly. i mean really, that's how stories have been read for years right? Having said all that ---i got the perfect deleon! Will Mellor! google him ladies! he's rugged, can play mean, older (but not to old), hot and---and is married to a woman of color!! (swoons)
Author's Response:
thank you, thank you, thank you for your encouraging words! i'm so glad that the story has really pulled you in and kept you reading. like i've said i hate casting because i feel like it limits my character as far as writing him/her and the reader's input as far as his/her imagination. plus, i can never find all of the cast that meets my criteria. lol.
Will Mellor is an excellent choice! though i do have to say, i was seeing DeLeon with more plush lips. check out Chris Hemsworth, specifically from the movie 'Perfect Getaway.' now that's more DeLeon. but with dark hair. mm. ::shudder::
Reviewer: kamla Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 20 2010 02:38 am
I'm really loving the intrigue...not to mention the tension between Kendra and DeLeon! Please keep the drama coming. Thanks!
Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 17 2010 02:11 am
Please update soon I'm like an addict and this story is my crack!!!
Reviewer: Missing my favorite story !!!!! Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 16 2010 03:54 am
Hey, I really like this story but I'd really appreciate if you could add pictures of the characters? Please update when you can!
Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2010 03:20 pm
So far I am enjoying this story. It's a little different for me. I hate not knowing which guy Kendra will fall in love with (if either of them). Am I the only one that thinks Prince seems like the best choice?
Reviewer: Mickie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 09:50 am
I loooooove this story!! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Lovely! Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2010 05:34 am
Love the story.. Please continue doing what you do... The story is not predictable..
Author's Response: thanks :-) Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 03:06 am
IT, regarding the negative nelly, just brush it off. This story IS different and I'm loving every frickin minute of it.
Author's Response: thank you so much for the encouraging words.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 03:00 am
Love the update.
Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 09:38 pm
My I do hate predictability! I'm finished now as this story was entertaining for a bit and I hoped that you would try something new but it looks like the same ole same ole boring tale.
Author's Response: please tell me how it's predictable. every story has been told, of course, there are just different twists to it. i understand if you don't enjoy the story, but to write something so vague and borderline confrontational is rude and not very productive. unless you have suggestions, or better yet, write your own stories, please refrain from being so . . . mean, to put it nicely.
Date: December 13 2010 05:08 pm
Is Cat crazy? Something real bad needs to happen to that woman and I mean quick, fast and in a hurry!! Loved the new chapter most excellent surprise.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 05:08 am
She hurt him without even realizing it!!!! :( My poor baby
And those crazy heifers need to be cut down to size before they do anything stupid!!!!
Reviewer: Poor DeLeon!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 04:51 am
Wow, Caroline is evil and the most vicious out of the group of those vipers. Hope their plot is ruined.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 04:39 am
Loved the updates! I love how this story has a bit of...grit to it. Many thanks and update when you can.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 04:36 am
quick question is Prince bi? im kinda lost where he is concerned i mean i know he has a thing for kendra but..
Author's Response: yes, Prince is bi-sexual. and, without spoiling my delicious plans, his feelings are a little muddled because kendra's "missing" but there will be clarity on that later.
Date: December 13 2010 04:31 am
What is the big secret in this town? I cannot wait to find out! Lovin Kendra and Deleon. Great update.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 04:09 am
What about me, Kendra?
Yeah Kendra, could you answer that one for us? You know you want him. Glad she said exactly what we've all been saying. She put it all out there for him. Now what will DeLeon do?
OK, Coraline needs her ass handed to her. She's willing to kill Kendra. Un-frickin-believable!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 04:03 am
Now firstly let me say I LOVE Deleon But I ADORE Prince. Seriously I can't choose between the two of them! Dax is like the kid brother of your friend who you think is adorable but you never get beyond that.
That said what is wrong with those three women? The two morons are just stupid but Coraline? She's a bit psycho. Lol, anyways I love this story and you're a great writer. I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Shan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 04:00 am
yep, I swooned at this chapter. A glimpse into a happy DeLeon. yummy. It would be a crime if he ended up alone.
That Cat and her damn mother need a good ass whuppin. And they'll have an ally in Mrs. Hope. Just because her crazy ass husband fantasized he was banging Kendra while in bed with HER. What an idiot. He's about to cause all kinds of problems for Kendra, who hasn't actively tried to entice any of these men, except, maybe DeLeon.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 03:52 am
That's a bunch of evil ass women. Well they will not be getting the opportunity to do away with Kendra, too many people will be looking out for her and that includes their own men. With all the updates you gave us this weekend, you will not get a complaint from me this week about not having an update. Enjoy your week!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 03:25 am
I love love love love this story!!
I hope you don't think it presumptuous of me, but I noticed that you didn't have pics up and thought I would share who I was kind of picturing:
Rihanna as Kendra
Ben Barnes as Dax
Jensen Ackles as DeLeon
:) Yes? No?
Author's Response:
that's the wonderful thing about not posting pics; the characters look like whomever the reader decides. the closest of whom you put up would have to be the casting for Dax. Ben Barnes is pretty fit for it. as far as for DeLeon, i was picturing someone a little older-looking and rougher.
and rihanna? no words. lol but she's not my cup of tea.
but thanks for the suggestions! those are great, but i decided to not post any pics of anyone for this story. i hope you keep reading though.
Reviewer: Gabriella Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 02:29 am
YAASS, 2 NEW CHAPTERS!!!
*victory dance*
This story has me waiting for my next hit like a crack-addict. Ooo the sherriff is in trouble, shit's about to get real. Can't believe he said her name! Kendra is sooo lucky, all these FINE men *sigh*. She needs to bottle and sell whatever it is she's doing coz I need some of that lol. AND DELEON, LORD YAAASSS!!! He has me screaming over here like a fan girl *throws pants onstage* LOL. I'm putting in a bid to have his babies, #jus'sayin.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING! You're such a fabulous writer, I feel as if I know them in real life :D
Date: December 13 2010 01:35 am
no, you are the best!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 01:27 am
Loved that the softer side of Deleon is shown. He was so sweet! Unfortunately for Kendra, some of the women don't take to her and now will be gunning for her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 01:13 am