Yep! Thats what I was looking for. I wanted DeLeon to show her his humanity. And he did! Yay!
All these chicks need help. Cat is disgusting!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 12:28 am
Swoon is so right....Great update. Love how DeLeon just opened up to her. Way toove them in the right direction.
Reviewer: dorkygirl1983 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 13 2010 12:22 am
Yes, DeLeon is the bestest for Kendra, this is the bestest story and you are the bestest for your quick updates!
Thank you - I so love this story and can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 12:07 am
He is the bestest. He is as perfect a gentlemen that he can be with how he grew up. She has a whole town full of women hating on her. I crack up everytime he calls her crazy-ass. Sammy is no longer his dog, she has found himself a new owner. wonderful update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2010 12:03 am
You've started something with the quick updates. I know I'm greedy but I want one everyday, so more please.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 10:04 pm
Dax isn't the one and neither is Prince. Sammy loves her some Kendra, this could be DeLeon's way to get closer to her, if he learns how to talk to her. Cat needs to get a hint and be gone.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 08:59 pm
Team DeLeon: so much spice is in this story i love it =)
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 06:52 pm
I sense that some hot, butt naked sex is about to happen and I love it!!! It made me laugh out loud when De Leon thre that hobag skank Cat out of his trailor. What nerve she walked into his house and took off her close. Loving this story. I feel bad for Dax because Kendra ain't feeling him at all. Great chapter.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 06:49 pm
aww poor prince. he's still in love with her and she's "moving on" making new memories.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 06:26 pm
since the start i ship DeLeon and kendra. And the more i read this story, the more i'm sure of my choice.
I ust hope they will not have sex too soon. That they will have the stime to get to know each other better.
Update soon i can't wait ot find out more about their date time together
Reviewer: melanie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 05:49 pm
kendra and deleon are so hot together , i like the fact now he is thinking of someone else kendra .... dont even say a word to her ... hot ...
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 05:20 pm
oh gosh pleeaasee!!! let something happen, I can't take it anymore! They needed to get together like yesterday. And yes you are spoilling us. =)
Reviewer: fangirl, TEAM DELEON Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 05:18 pm
I think DeLeon and Kendra are just right for each other.. Kendra and give as good as she gets and that's just what DeLeon needs.. A woman that will not roll over and do what he says but will call him on his BS. I especially love when he calls her Crazy Ass.. They are too cute together.. Kendra fits in perfectly with Pa, DeLeon and Dax.. She's just what they needed..
Cat skanky ass need to sit her ass down somewhere.. Actually, she should go to the click and get a shock.. She's a walking firebomb..
Great update.. Looking forward to the next chapter..
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 04:45 pm
LOL! I think thats DeLeon's pet name for Kendra...Crazy Ass. Its cute and seems to like calling her that...hehe.
Cat...ughhh! Disgusting!!
Whatever happens will be interesting.....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 04:30 pm
Thank you for the update. I hope DeLeon and Kendra get on really well!!
Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 01:16 pm
after reading the reviews i guess i was the only one rooting for dax but seeing kendra's reaction to him i guess that ship is sinking and fast, lol! i'm not saying i'm in deleon's corner. that guy has some making up to do and now that they're alone in the trailer i guess anything can happen - thanks for the update and having prince in the previous chapter!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 10:39 am
First - thank you for updating this story as frequently as you do!
This is the chapter I have been eagerly waiting for - some alone time with Kendara and Deleon! Let the games or should I say action begin. More please!
Reviewer: katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 10:12 am
Well I sure hope SOMETHING happens! Lol Some talking -deleon and kendra speak as they get to know one another, some cuddling, some smoldering kissing wouldn't hurt either! A good connection would be lovely.
I love that Sammy is smitten with kendra too. The scene where they're walking hand in hand with Sammy frolicking at their side was sweet. And of course the moment HAD to be ruined by that snake! Get lost biotch, damn! Lol
This story is infectious (in a good way) and I appreciate your dedication in sharing your talent with us. One thing you should know...I'm a greedy heffa when I like something so another update asap would be fabulous! But take your time, I'll be right here when you return. :)
Great job lady!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2010 10:02 am
Yes, yes, yes. you spoil us and I love it! I cannot wait for the next chapter! You are an awesome writer. You are also a trip by saying, "What's gonna happen? I wonder," at the end. But since you are religously updating, I guess I don't mind waiting and guessing.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 09:21 am
Thanks for the updates.
Please let her end up with Deleon there is alot going against these two so the story will be nice and long!!!
DeLeon! DeLeon! DeLeon!
Reviewer: DeLeon All the way!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 08:10 am
Love the way Deleon's looking out for her. They definitely got some chemistry going on but I fear Cat will be out for revenge after this.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 08:06 am
Sorry, I don't think Dax is for her. I'm with DeLeon all the way! Is Prince Bi-saexual? If he is then he is not for her either. Yep, I'm team DeLeon...
Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 05:34 am
Wow, Dax made his move huh..... hmmm, wonder how this is gonna play out. Kendra is gonna be in a bind.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 04:31 am
I love Prince, but I really dont see him as more than a friend. Her very best friend, but firmly in the friend category. If he really wanted to make a move in that regard, he would have done it by now.
Dax, more like a little brother. Just dont see it at this point. He's kinda getting carried away with it, I think.
DeLeon is that rough around the edges, intense, dude, that once the walls are down, and he gets emotionally right, will most likely really bring in the bedroom and out of it. I can see it! and cant wait for it! How sexy was that smile and wink! Plus, the dog liked her. Thats always a good sign.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 04:22 am
WHY IS THIS STORY SO DRREEEAAMY?!?!?!
*sigh*
Lovely chapter ms intellectual titmouse. The kitchen scene when they were singing the hymn was so sweet. I love that I can feel the intensity between Kendra and Deleon, its delicious.
NOW SPEAKING OF DELICIOUS, I'ma need Deleon in my life, in my bed and lets be frank, in my panties
*dies*
hahaha
thanks again for this lovely story :)
p.s. i think it was a good idea not to have character pictures, I love imagining them :)
Author's Response: thanks for the support on the 'no pics' thing. lol i know people like to have that aide but . . . i like the imagination a little better. makes the characters more real for the individual.
Date: December 12 2010 04:16 am