Kendra, the dog whisperer! LOL
Well the two women in DeLeon's life have met and really like each other.
Dax and Kendra are friends. Hopefully, he will come to see that. I don't think DeLeon will make a move unless that gets cleared up. Or he can't help himself, which will further piss him off.
I feel so sad for DeLeon. He is stuck in the anger phase of grief and it doesn't look as if he's going to leave it any time soon. I sure would like to see Kendra be the one to ease some of his pain. Poor baby. I'm liking him so much, even though he's being a jackass to Kendra.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: December 12 2010 03:24 am
Like I have said before, Dax seems like a cute, sweetheart but not the one for Kendra. Maybe if Kendra had not got into an accident and met DeLeon and his brother and grandfather, I could see Prince and Kendra together, but since you did not write the story that way, Prince is out too, along with Dax. As far as that kiss that Dax gave Kendra, the feelings were not returned. It probably felt like a family members kiss which was uncomfortable since it was on her lips. She needs to nip that in the bud before Dax's feelings are hurt more than necessary. I really do like Dax but not for Kendra. I wish Kendra had a baby sister or something. Well, maybe you can make another story with Dax going to New York and meeting someone once Kendra and DeLeon are together.
Kendra and DeLeon are both stubborn, so I get the feeling that it's going to take a while before anything sizzly happens between them besides the longing and intense looks and occassional flirting. That is fine by me, just as long as it happens. DeLeon and Kendra just seem to fit. If you had not made DeLeon sound so gorgeous, rough, and intense in your writings while introducing him, maybe there would not be such a fan club for him. I love DeLeon and am glad you wrote him the way he is. Keep it coming, cannot wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2010 02:20 am
I find Dax extremely cute and so sweet...but I want Kendra with DeLeon. I feel the tension when you write about these two. There is just something there. And although I do like Prince, he kinda is in the too little too late pile for me. All in all a great story. Looking to the next update.
Reviewer: dorkygirl1983 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2010 02:19 am
maybe prince and dax together but kendra need a mean country boy with a good heart deleon
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 11 2010 09:02 pm
no, no, no, noooo. prince is not in love with her, and neither is dax for that matter! prince is just worried about his good friend and those emotions have spilled into a confused little mess. and dax--he just saw her naked, now he's just hynotized by brown boobs. and saying all that it makes no difference who is attracted to her, she's hot for deleon!
Reviewer: kamla Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 11:14 pm
TEAM DELEON
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 08:01 pm
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. It just seems like to me Kendra has already chosen her man via that self-pleasuing encounter in the tub with her fantasy lover, Deleon. Deleon for all his "manhoring" ways is looking for a woman who can help make him a better man. He needs her more than the other "suitors." Well, you are writer thus continue to follow your muse to whomever you decide to match her up with in the end. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 05:03 pm
I LOVE PRINCE!!! And i thank you again for the beatdown. that part made me smile widely and no i'm not a violent person just when it comes to Chase, lol! though i have to ask is Prince white or?...another great update. you never fail to deliver. interesting part about a black family that used to live there and the couple that died because of it - Dax & DeLeon's parents?...i know i voted for Dax but Prince is starting to catch my eye, lol!
Anyway thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 04:20 pm
I think Kendra and DeLeon would be really really Hot i am so shipping them as a couple right now..I think Prince should remain her friend its good to have a frienship like like they shared without it be sexual...i love this story by the way waiting axiously.
Reviewer: marleanpat@hotmail.com Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 01:13 pm
So, I'll admit it. I'm smitten with DeLeon. I'm only one step away from scrawling his name over my science book cover with hearts, rainbows, and our cobined initials! Sigh... So dreamy, so misunderstood...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 01:05 pm
so finally someone to actually tell deleon to go for it huh and prince does want kendra? man oh man my head is spinning!!! how would kendra feel about prince if he really did want her like that? would she reciprocate? can she please have just one more encounter with the sheriff? i know its wrong but the two of them just had some serious chemistry and who are dottie and james? wait are they dax and deleons parents?!?!?!?!?
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 12:50 pm
I like Ayy's relationship with DeLeon. It gives some additional insight into who he is. And Sammy! Figure he would have a horse of a dog as a pet. And he wants Sammy to meet Kendra, that's serious. I can't wait for this dinner. How will Kendra react considering she just got off thinking of DeLeon.
Dang, Kendra is making more enemies than she even knows about. And the Sheriff needs to back the hell up. He needs to remember that he's married and is not an option for Kendra. gah...
Prince being all Alpha is a real turn-on...
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 10:31 am
Prince's mom is not to be f'd with. Whew, she's a woman after my own heart. And stepdad is no slouch either.
Kendra thinking Dax is adorable speaks volumes. Perfect description of a puppy. Her thoughts about DeLeon speaks volumes also and he's definitely not adorable.
I'm conflicted; because Prince seems a perfect fit for her. Too many men, too little time.
The punch to the face was so needed. I'm love with Prince, although my heart belongs to DeLeon. Wonder if he'll get to meet Chase? Would love to see Pa, Dax and DeLeon get their hands on the prick.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 10:17 am
TEAM DELEON ALL THE WAY!!!
cheesy? I know, but I just can't seem to stop smilling. Oh my goodness please update soon.
Reviewer: fangirl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 10 2010 08:09 am
Everybody is loving Kendra and she has no idea. DeLeon is a goner. Sammy may be his ace in the hole with her.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 06:50 am
I really like Kendra and Deleon but I do have a sweet spot for Dax. Dax doesn't stand a chance as Kendra is feeling her Deleon. Thank you for the new chapter and I am looking forward to reading more this weekend.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 06:07 am
Caint wait for the food and everything else to be served
Reviewer: I'm hungry now Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 05:37 am
I agree with Amy. Wow, I can see the drama coming especially if and when Prince finds her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 05:12 am
i loved it how i finished one chapter and the next one was waiting for me =) love the story by the way DeLeon is H.O.T.T.T hottt...
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2010 04:42 am
Please give DeLeon a chance with Kendra, she has a strong connection with him. Can't wait for the net chapter.
taisih
Reviewer: taisih Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2010 10:23 pm
Loved the update. I hope DeLeon becomes the main love interest for Kendra. I love how Prince just decked Chase, excellent.
Reviewer: Bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 09 2010 10:18 pm
Ok, so I've only ever reviewed one other story, but this one has my heart, so Ima say what I have to say
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FOR THE LOVE OFF ALL GOOD THINGS ON THE WORLD, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET IT BE DELEON.
HE NEEDS HER DAMMIT! LOL. I'm on my proverbial knees. If not my literary heart will wither and I'll fall down in a circle and die lol.
LOVING THIS STORY, YOU'RE AMAZING!
Author's Response: Lmao. thanks for reading and ur vote has been cast. lol
Date: December 09 2010 10:15 pm
thanks for the update..since i've decided that you will be publishing this story...kendra and deleon and dax and as friend from her past
Author's Response: LoL thanks! i'm glad you think it's that good so far!
Date: December 09 2010 09:47 pm
I guess I'll thhrow in my 2 cents and say I'm for Prince and Kendra.
Author's Response: woooow! that's interesting! thanks so much for switching it up a little bit here!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2010 07:18 pm
I sense a disaster waiting to happen, I think that Dax has developed some feeling Kendra as well. I sure hope not, because Kendra is gone over Deleon. Me like this chapter. I want Chase to get his ass kicked and bad!!! I love this story, you rock!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 09 2010 06:08 pm