I love this story. What!! No, she should be with DeLeon. But, of course you will ultimately decide. I just feel that her and DeLeon connected when they first met in the clinic room and it is obvious that DeLeon is seriously attracted to her and her to him, when they aren't arguing. Dax has a crush, there does not seem to be any intensity behind his feelings for Kendra. Yes, I think that Dax likes her a lot but they way he likes seems high schoolish. Kendra needs more and DeLeon can give that to her. I just don't think her and Dax are a good fit. But oh well. Keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 07 2010 07:12 am
i choose Deleons for kendra i just feel that Dax is so cute and young and i think Deleon is all sexy and the chemistry between kendra and deleon is off the charts and i think with dax kendra has the friend/savior factor with him but alas i love this story please keep it coming!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 07 2010 07:04 am
Please, have pictures of the cast! This story's very interesting.
Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 02 2010 07:10 pm
Kendra is going to stay at the farm with DeLeon?! LMAO!!!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2010 11:43 am
LOL! Not surprised at all here. Just like I thought; thats how they are gonna roll. Its too funny though!
That skank and her skank momma need to go somewhere.
Nice.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2010 11:14 pm
Oh good lord, thank you for updating. Oh my gosh this is good stuff!!!!
Reviewer: mimi Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 29 2010 05:46 pm
Great update.
I think Cat and her mom is loco.
They better not hurt Kendra, or else
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2010 01:33 pm
Oh those skanks just aint right! Hope Kendra will be alright but I can see the drama coming. Loved the update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2010 07:45 am
nice...can't wait for the update
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2010 06:23 am
i. love. this. story!! my secret passion a hot good 'ole boy! and he's mean! love it. hey, can ya have him tinkering on a car all dirty and stuff?? (wink, wink)
Author's Response: LoL DeLeon is definitely works with his hands and well, as you'll see in upcoming chapters.
Date: November 29 2010 02:17 am
Oh boy, I sure hope DeLeon sees these two psychos before they can hurt Kendra. And I love him carrying over his shoulder Fireman style. LOL.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2010 01:47 am
I cracked up when you said he carried her out of there over his shoulders. He needs a whole lot of work on how to treat a woman. Love him though.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2010 01:32 am
Glad she has Riley on her side. The towns people are sure spooky. Deleon is abit rough but hopefully he tunes it down some.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2010 07:58 am
Enjoyable, but DeLeon is scary. Prince better show up soon to save Kendra, and if she's so beautiful, why is her boyfriend such a douche....thanks for the chapters.
Reviewer: johnandvan Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2010 07:13 am
DeLeon's a mess. He needs some lessons on how to treat a woman.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2010 03:04 am
LOL! Funny!! Nothing else to say because I think thats just how they're gonna roll.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2010 09:54 pm
now were getting somewhere hee hee! thanks i.t.!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 27 2010 08:52 pm
Alright! Kendra and DeLeon finally have some alone time together that results in a confrontation...as expected. But it also results in sexual awareness. I hope DeLeon doesn't back off...she needs someone like him in her life. If they every really get together, I don't think that DeLeon will continue with his roaming eyes and ways. And I supect that he will be fairly possessive with Kendra, which will be a new feeling for her, except Prince is possessive, but in a nonromantic way. She needs it in a sexual way.
Now its getting REAL interesting....I can't wait for more Updates.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2010 06:53 pm
this is really good . cant wait till you post again. i am loving dax. deleon not so much lol.
Reviewer: NOONA Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2010 06:52 pm
This story is hilarious! I absolutely love it - can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 27 2010 05:19 pm
That is not the best way to win Kendra over, De leon. This story has made me laugh out loud when I read. I love it. Looking forward to chapter 12.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 27 2010 05:02 pm
DeLeon sure is charming - not! Thanks for th eupdate! Really happy to see more updates from you - keep it up!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2010 04:58 pm
Ok....I knew there was a story with DeLeon! He seems so tortured, I guess, in a way.
Dax...lol...grinning like a damn loon!
I really love Pa, I just have to say.
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2010 03:32 am
whoa so what happened between deleon and trixie? he couldnt get it up or something lol? can he just go to the hospital already????? thanks for 2 updates i.t.! been missing this story oh and one more thing dax = NOT for kendra mmmkay??? SMOOCHES!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 25 2010 02:46 pm
Character pics??? Interesting story!
Author's Response: i actually kind of addressed that in chapter 10's chapter notes. thanks for reading!
Date: November 25 2010 09:27 am