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Title: Chapter 9

Darn!!! What's with all these men lusting after Kendra??? What's up with that??? I hope they brothers don't have a fall out b/c of her.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2010 07:14 am
Title: Chapter 9

LMAO!! WHAT?!! Oh, come on now!! I'm all set on DeLeon...sort of, then you go and do this?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2010 07:08 am
Title: Chapter 9

 They both want her, what is going to happen to the brotherly love for each other?

Author's Response: that'll be one of the more interesting conclusions, won't it? i'm excited too! cuz honestly, i'm not sure how this will end. these characters are a little volatile right now.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2010 06:32 am
Title: Intro

Thank you for the update! She better end up with DeLeon. Dax is a little young isn't he? I mean he may be a few years younger but that's not the point. Her and DeLeon seem to be connected some sort of way and just does not know how to act on it yet. Dax is great but just not with her, you can create another story with Dax.

Did Dax really think she was thinking of him when she started touching and feeling on him? I think he did, which proves my point -- he is too young in mind. I love this story. DeLeon and her just connected and are at the point to where they do not know how to act on it. I think the intensity between her and DeLeon could be off the charts once you get started on them.  Can you post some pictures? Thanks for the update. Enjoy your Thanksgiving!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2010 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 9

no but deleon better touch kendra, he needs her to help him grown up and become the man he was ment to be... please update

 Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 25 2010 05:48 am
Title: Chapter 8

DeLeon really name is INTENSE and FREAKIN DANGERLOUS! Glad to see 2 updates from you - thank you!!!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2010 08:04 pm
Title: Intro

sure would love an update for thanksgiving!!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 23 2010 01:26 am
Title: Intro

I want another update!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2010 01:59 am
Title: Chapter 8

WOOHOO youre back!!!!!! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! would like a little less kendra/dax and a lot more kendra/deleon, kendra/sheriff and kendra/anybody but dax lol! hes sweet and all but um no not feelin him for my girl. more please!!!!masterful as always!!!THANKS!!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 16 2010 04:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

"Well, ain't'chou the dumbest shit still floatin'!"

 

ROFLMAO!!!  For some reason, that one-liner just cracked my ass up!  weeedoggy!

 

Great start!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2010 12:23 am
Title: Intro

I simply in like with this story. I'm on team Deleon for Kendra's soulmate. There is already an attraction brewing between. Dax is nice but a little too young for her emotionally and age wise. Team Deleon all the way!!!!

 Reviewer: LoveDrama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 09:26 pm
Title: Intro

god i love this story. thought you gave up on it...please don't give up on it, this is really good. I don't come across stories like this. i kept checking everyday for this story soo thank you.

 Reviewer: MIMI Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 08:11 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the updates.  I'm really enjoying the story.  Glad you were able to update and looking forward to more.

 Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 02:03 pm
Title: Chapter 8

MORE....WE NEED MORE!  This is just getting interesting!

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 08:11 am
Title: Chapter 8

Deleon needs some brown sugar bad..Kendra girl you need to help him calm down and show Deleon love.. thank you for updating this story thought you forgot about us. thanks so much love this story. update soon please

 Reviewer: brownie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 06:21 am
Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the two updates.  DeLeon is a mess, but I like him. I like Dax too, so it'll be interesting to see what happens. I have a feeling Kendra will end up with DeLeon, but I want Dax happy too. Thank God, Kendra had Prince in her life and that he cares about her, so she at least has someone searching for her.

 Reviewer: Tootall Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 04:18 am
Title: Chapter 8

Loving Prince's parents. What is the deal with DeLeon...for real.

Nice!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 04:06 am
Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!! Deleon has some serious issues. He definitely has a lil something something for Kendra. What's a girl to do with all that attention???!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 03:25 am
Title: Intro

I love this chapter. Girl, you had me laughing out loud.. I love the way Pa and his boys talk to each other..

"Fuck happend here?" Pa said as he came ambling back. His face scrunched. "Smells like piss "Dammit!" He immediately patted the seat of his pants. "I pissed maself?" Too funny..

Can't wait to see what happens once Prince and his family find her.. This will be too funny cause Pa will definitely have something slick and funnu to say..

Looking forward to the next chapter.. Girl, don't make me stalk you.. I'm not afraid to do it either.. Hahaha..

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. Wondering who she will eventually fall for. DeLeon is pining for her as well as Dax, but right now she seems more interested in Dax.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 02:22 am
Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. Wondering who she will eventually fall for. DeLeon is pining for her as well as Dax, but right now she seems more interested in Dax.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 02:22 am
Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Hope she remembers soon.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2010 12:39 am
Title: Chapter 7

I can't but like DeLeon even though he's kind of harsh and brash.

 Reviewer: thicknsweet88 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2010 11:31 pm
Title: Chapter 7

DeLeon is afraid to be around her because of how he is starting to feel for a complete stranger.  Everyone in town is enamored with  her. Great update.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2010 09:47 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Well, that was different. Whats Hope's problem anyway.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2010 09:22 pm


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