Title: Chapter 7

so happy to see you back!!! and this story - damn, Kendra has every guy falling over their feet, lol! look forward to see what's happens for now on - thank you for updating!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2010 07:08 pm

Title: Intro

hey i,t.!! its now tuesday just in case you were wondering lol!!! cant wait for the update!!i think im most looking forward to more interaction between kendra and the sheriff.

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 09 2010 11:55 pm

Title: Intro

hey i.t.!!!!! its the weekend....just sayin........:-)

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 07 2010 04:38 am

Title: Intro

hey i.t.!!!! hope everythings ok. im really missing this story! please update soon!!!!!!!



Author's Response: hey, woman! everything's okay. was in a little funk for a bit but i will get back to this story, promise! hopefully before the weekend's out i'll have a new chapter!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 28 2010 04:38 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Hey,

I really like this story a lot. It's hard to find a story where the heroine has a lot of potential love interests (excluding Pa of course), that I am so drawn to this story. It is very well written, no mistakes as far as I can see. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!!!

-FREEDOM3334

Reviewer: FREEDOM3334 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2010 08:57 am

Title: Intro

please come back!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 22 2010 04:27 am

Title: Intro

i.t. im dying over here!!!!!! please update!!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 17 2010 06:43 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2010 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 6

Chase Chase Chase *long sigh* What an idiot! *roll eyes* I hope Prince stays true to his promise because that dude is an embarrassment, lol! I've to admit that the Sheriff sounds very hot and it's a pity he is married, lol! XP...thank you for the update! Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 06:38 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for a great update.  Can't believe that Chase left...what an asswipe.  I hope that theyPrince finds her soon before all hell breaks loose in this little town of almost 1000 residents. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 04:55 pm

Title: Chapter 5

The plot thickens.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 04:41 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Chase is a conceited ass wipe.  The fact that he was seen with woman that looked better on his arms than her is just nauseating.  What a creep.  I like Dax and I hope that he wins her heart not his brother Deleon.  Who sounds like Chase.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 04:25 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Nice update.  I like Prince. Chase knows she is supposed to meet him there, I don't understand why he wouldn't check to see if something happened to her once she didn't show up.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 03:49 pm

Title: Intro

so im thinkin maybe a younger jeff bridges for the sheriff only waaay more muscular!! what do you think i.t.??

Author's Response: Lmao! yeah that's kinda along the lines i was thinking too.

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 02:09 pm

Title: Chapter 6

i.t. youre killin me with these snippets of wonderfulness!!!! the sheriff sounds kinda hot lol!! too bad hes married hee hee. shes casting a spell on the whole town!!!!! more please and next time make it looooooonnnnnngggggg!!!!! :-)

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 01:16 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Hmmmm.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 11:41 am

Title: Intro

Well, that was a sweet update.  I am glad that she now knows who she is, but besides being attracted to her what is the Sheriffs problem?  Loving me some Dax!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 6

Well, at least she knows her name now.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 5

why are these post so damn short!

Author's Response:

Lmao! i promise, that's not on purpose. i just write and write until i think the section's exhausted itself. then when i post it, i realize the brevity of it. lol i'll try to make them longer. but i'm glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 5

I'm from the deep South, so that kind language is not shocking to me.

That Cathleen seems like a right proper bitch. She could be quite dangerous to Kendra. I mean she looks like the type who would be right at home with good ole fashion lynching. But I think Kendra can more than handle this chick on a one on one basis.

The company DeLeonis keeping does not speak well of him. I'm interested to see how he and Kendra interact before I comment on their suitability. Dax just seems like a little puppy dog you want to pet and cuddle. Not someone you'd have intense feelings for. We'll see.

Errbody seems to be enamored with Miss Kendra. She's going to have numerous suitors. This is going to be too funny. 'Cause something tells me that DeLeon might be possessive in this case. :-)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 5

ooooo i.t. you are sooo wrong for ending right here lol!!!  MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! is the whole town gonna be in love with her!?!?!?

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 5

that trashy no account rascist  slug deanna is disgusting waste of space.. Wow pa and his boys are so taken with Kendra it is so funny i absolutly love this story!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 03:55 am

Title: Chapter 5

Chase is an ass, I had to get that off of my chest.  I am pulling for Dax, he seems like a good catch.  Loving this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 03:51 am

Title: Intro

Excellent story and very good update. Could you include a cast? I know finding the right cast may be hard, so there's no rush.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 5

Okay...that was short and sweet.  Sorry to hear you haven't been feeling well...but I sure hope you feel better REAL SOON! LOL.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 01:44 am



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