Why do people keep saying "what she's gotten herself into", huh? She accidentally made a wrong turn. Why are they all acting like she's some pod person? It's weird.
I think my respect just took a nose-dive with DeLeon. He was messing around with that fool Cat? Ughh! And is he like the unspoken golden boy around town or what?
Nice.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2010 12:32 am
Great story ! Can wait to read more.
Reviewer: Priscilla/mountaingal Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2010 11:46 pm
Kendra has no idea what she is going to be in for when she heals. She has three men looking at her with more than friendship on their minds and one mean lady. Great update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: October 09 2010 11:07 pm
I'm so happy to see an update on this story. I'm really enjoying it so far and looking forward to see where you go with the characters.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2010 10:38 pm
kendra girl wake up, please some tell her who she is.... update soon im hooked on this story
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2010 09:53 pm
Thank you for the update! You're downright brilliant - take care and get better!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2010 09:37 pm
Dax or DeLeon. Dax may want more but I don't think she is looking at him in that way.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2010 11:44 pm
DeLeon is checking her out. Pa talks a lot but he seems like he is going to be gentle and caring with her. Great update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2010 11:32 pm
They had to get cleaned up and looking purty to go and see the strange woman. Who will fall for her? Awesome update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2010 07:18 pm
Hilarious how they talk to each other.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2010 07:17 pm
Loved the intro. Will she ever make it to Chase or will this be her new home?
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2010 07:11 pm
WOW i.t. another stunna!!!!! i love this already!! cant wait to hear whatS going thru deleons head lol!!! looks like this is shaping up to be a nice little triangle of sorts!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response: aw, thanks, brown! i know i've been neglecting my other work lately so it means a lot that you've followed me here. thanks, bud!
Date: October 08 2010 01:27 pm
She doesn't seem to be all that fond of Chase. Great beginning.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2010 04:29 am
I really like this chapter. That scumbag boyfriend is worried but he is still an a**! Look likes Kendra might have found someone better for her.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 10:19 pm
I love this story so far.
I see the town is racist, but that's ok because DeLeon will kick everybody's @$$ when it comes to Kendra,I can tell already.
I don't think Pa is interested in here, but I do think he is going to try and hook her up to one of his grandson, I think he is behaving like an old southern gentlman, then anything.
Poor Dax has a crush on her but I have afeeling she is a little to old for him.
As for the so called boyfriend I hope he gets pushed off a cliff. Want to f anything with a whole. I bet if she asked if they had an open relationship and she could sleep with other men, he would lose his mind.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 06:42 pm
Great story so far.
I'm thinking that Kendra is feeling like Alice, when she fell down the rabbit hole.
I think that Deleon might be more her speed that Dax.
Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 05:51 pm
Very nice update . I think I like the way this story is moving.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 04:18 pm
Great chapter... Too short!
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 04:03 pm
I like this story... charcaterization is great so far
Reviewer: ebonidoll Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 07:43 am
Who put a bug up DeLeon's ass? This is going to be interesting. It's hard to fathom that there might be something between him and Kendra. But I'm sure you'll work it out. And it'll be most entertaining along the way. Or maybe she'll fall for Pa? good lawd, LOL.
Author's Response:
yeah, DeLeon's a bit of a dick, but all these characters will grow along the way. picture her falling for pa! Lmao!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: October 04 2010 05:37 am
If this is your first posting here then I'm really excited about what's to come. Really enjoyed this story so far and looking forward to updates.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 05:10 am
Oh, this is good.
And you've got the rural southern inflections just so! This is just so fun to read so far! Can't wait to read more...!
(and just for the record, Dax sounds just adorable!)
Reviewer: alices Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 04:35 am
Already loving this story - can't wait for more, and maybe some cast pic...?
Author's Response:
i'd love to put up cast pics but i can't figure it out for some reason! terrible i know! but somewhere there will be some cast pics. promise!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2010 12:34 am
They may not have any blacks in their town but Pa and his boys look like they are going to take care of her not harm her..
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 03 2010 09:28 pm