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Title: Chapter 3

Yup Pa and the boys are gonna help her. Oh this is gonna be good.

 Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 06:14 pm
Title: Intro

i like deleon's concern over her, even when he didnt know her..please update soon

 Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 05:40 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Oh no now she has amnesia...stuck in the back woods of West Virginia and she doesn't remember who she is and why she was in this neck of the woods.  I am looking forward to reading more.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 12:18 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I hope that Dax and Deleon and Grandpa all are romantically interested in the Negro-gal.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 12:10 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Grandpa is a mess.  Dax seems dense.  A guest poor Negro-gal has landed herself in a right pickle of a mess.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 11:56 am
Title: Intro

Poor Kendra lost and now she is hurt.  Good start to the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 11:45 am
Title: Chapter 3

...Excellent!  I am loving this, the grammar is hilarious!  Reminds me of the folks in my parents hometown!  Keep at this!  'Tis brilliant!

 Reviewer: WhatsInThePot Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 10:12 am
Title: Chapter 3

Love it!! More please!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 08:55 am
Title: Chapter 3

Ohhh, this is a REALLY GOOD start.  I like it.  And I can hardly wait to find out where you take us with it.  I like Dax, he seems a sweetheart.  And Pa, he's a character.  But DeLeon, well,...it seems that he and our heroine are going to set off sparks. LOL.

Please update SOOOOONNNNN!.....

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 3

Now I wasn't expecting that! Pa is kinda crazy...lol! But cute. Dax is just plain cute! DeLeon is just intense! I think he likes it that way.

Awesome!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 06:38 am
Title: Chapter 3

I guess she won't remember hating Chase for awhile.  I love's me Dax already!!!

Author's Response: isn't Dax adorable?! love him!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 06:25 am
Title: Chapter 3

Got to love an amnesia story...Hells yeah.

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 03:59 am
Title: Intro

You are a very creative writer.  I like this story.  Please up date again soon, if you have time. 

I AM SO LOVING PA, reminds me of my father, God bless his soul.

THANK YOU.

 Reviewer: VERY HAPPY!!!!!! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 02:50 am
Title: Intro

LOL

I LOVE IT!!!!!

Please let someone in that town be smart enough to read her ID card.

I am so looking forward to seeing how where you take the story. 

I am so loving Pa, he in my hero in the story thus far.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 02:45 am
Title: Chapter 3

ooo me iikey cant wait to see whats next

 Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 02:08 am
Title: Intro

I love Pa.. He used my favorite line.. "Spell it" Hahaa...

 Looking forward to the chapter.

 Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 01:38 am
Title: Intro

OMG, that's where you left it? Please post more soon. This story is really good.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 12:50 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm really intrigued as to where this story is going.  Please continue soon!!

 Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 07:14 pm
Title: Chapter 2

These guys are too funny . Can't wait to see what happens next .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 05:39 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Why did you stop there it was just getting really good update soon.

 Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 04:03 pm
Title: Intro

I am lovin your story, had me laughin. Keep it coming on the regular. PLEASE

 Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 02:29 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Hahahaha this trio is downright hilarious! Loving it and I have no problem with the build-up since you're right - this is going to be a wild and funny ride =D...thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 11:48 am
Title: Chapter 2

LOL..they really are special, arent they?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 07:05 am
Title: Chapter 2

LMAO that family is hilarious. I love this story already. Can't wait for the next chapter! Peace.

 Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 06:33 am
Title: Chapter 2

lol again I <3 Pa. He is the MFIN shit. Got his good teeth in and everything. I do have a feeling this family is gonna "help" her get better.

 Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 06:24 am


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