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Title: Chapter 2

omgee... Please don't let Kendra go home with Pa and the boys. This can't be good. but it's funny as hell... The description of Pa was damn funny. and all the pig references does remind one of Deliverance. Duelling Banjos, anyone? LMAO!!!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 05:46 am
Title: Intro

This is almost like an updated version of Deliverance... What in the world is she going to do with those Hillbillies.. They probably will scare her half to death... Pa, is too funny... Pa, got his daisy in his tin can and gone off to visit that little negro gal.. LOL!!!

 Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2010 05:20 am
Title: Chapter 1

Looks promising. This is a good start and I think I'm going to love this story. Not much interacting yet but I'm interested to see how these two will react to each other. ^.~

~Ana~

 Reviewer: Ana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2010 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I've read some of your other stories and you're very gifted. This one looks to be a hoot. Grandpa is a trip. I can hear the banjo music as I read.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 30 2010 10:19 am
Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm, this story continues to get interesting.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2010 08:21 am
Title: Chapter 1

LOL! Who are these people!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2010 05:37 am
Title: Chapter 1

I cant help it but I love Pa. "Negro-Gal" Only old people can get away with that.

 Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2010 04:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

This was an unexpected surprise.  Where in the hell is she?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2010 03:27 am
Title: Intro

LOL....awesome intro!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2010 01:00 am
Title: Intro

Well written intro...looking forward to more character development

 Reviewer: ToriLu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 10:40 pm
Title: Intro

That is an interesting beginning.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 09:19 pm
Title: Intro

good start! I'm intrigued. I want to know more about this Chase dude and why Kendra 'hates' him! more please!

 Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 09:01 pm
Title: Intro

Good start!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 06:12 pm
Title: Intro

Great start.

 Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 05:25 pm
Title: Intro

 I really love the direction this story is heading!! Super nice.

 Reviewer: Paris W Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 03:48 pm
Title: Intro

Good start - looking forward to more! Hope you update soon! Thank you!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 11:29 am
Title: Intro

Hmmm, interesting start. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 08:28 am
Title: Intro

Hmmmm....looking forward to see more.

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 05:44 am
Title: Intro

Awesome, I love it already. I cant wait te see whats coming up next,,,,,,,, keep up the good job. it sounds very interesting

 Reviewer: Ladeesse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2010 05:15 am


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