Title: Chapter 18

Ares' reaction to Adonis meeting Irene was absolutely priceless!  Nice to see that even the God of War isn't immune to a touch of the green-eyed monster when it comes to the woman he loves. ;)  I appreciate that Theo was very courteous to Irene and Percy, but don't get why he's so upset about their having auras.  Especially since he didn't sense any deception from them.  Dude seriously needs to chill before he alienates his brothers.  Thanks for the update.  On the next chapter!  LOL



P.S. Loved all the photos of the jet, foyer, bedrooms, etc.  Just gorgeous!


Author's Response:

Hey Mia, now he knows how Irene feels when they go out and woman are fawning all over him. Not that Ares is paying attention to them though he has his eyes on his prize and he isn't taking them off for anyone.

Theo knows Gloria wouldn't like it if he didn't treat their guests with respect and being that this is the first time Ares and Damon have brought women to a dinner he knows what's at stake. Even though he senses no deception in Irene or Percy that does not mean there is no danger to come from them.

He also knows that those auras mean there is another dynamic that has been added to his brother's finding their fated females and it is something that he has no control over. This doesn't sit well with him because if there is one thing he loves to do is have control.

Glad you love the pics too, I enjoy them and thanks as usual for reading, commenting, rating and reviewing because I do appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 02:01 am

Title: Chapter 19

Wow ex wife showing up so not good at all. That woman better thank her lucky stars that Grace has class and  won't kick her out yet but question why in the world would she show up to that house?  I love how Damon and Ares are so found of the sister and it nice to see their soft side. thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi WWEFanForLife, Rhea has important news that will have far reaching effects on not just the Pappas family, but all that associate personally with the them. Gloria and Rhea have issues that need to be settled and that will be done hopefully before stuff starts hitting the fan.

Ares and Damon are loosening up and all of the brothers will start interacting more reforging bonds that are going to come in handy later.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, rating and commenting I appreciate it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2011 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 18

I think Theo is going to say that he doesn't like the girls, trust the girls and that he feels they are not a right fit for Ares and Damon but I think in time he will see the Hart women are the best thing that every happen for his brothers. Also whether he likes them or not Ares and Damon love the Hart sisters and willl not give them up no matter what. I just hope the girls are tuff enough to handle what ever Theo may throw at them. Thank for the update and nice pics.



Author's Response:

Hello WWEFanForLife, Theo is going to have lots to say, but will soon realize that when it comes to how Ares and Damon feel about Irene and Percy he is between a rock and a hard place. Neither the God of War or the Underworld will be moved by his blustering but that is all right because the Harts will be themselves and win over even the King of the Gods with their feisty charm and baked goods. 

Glad you liked the update and the pics and thank you for reading, enjoying, rating and commenting I appreciate it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2011 06:02 am

Title: Chapter 17

Waiting with bated breathe for their weekend getaway. Can we say BOOM! FIRE!!! I know it will be great and informative .



Author's Response:

Hello Cimmy1, I too am waiting with bated breath for some Unconditional Love that is.

The weekend is just getting started, so let the explosions and fireworks begin. Enjoy them I know I will!

Thanks for reading, rating and commenting I appreciate it.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2011 12:13 am

Title: Chapter 16

Irene looked really good in her pictures and as alway great pic. Story is moving right along and the PDA was very sweet for them both.



Author's Response:

Hey Cimmy1 what have you been up to? Glad you are enjoying the pics. Yep the story is moving along with Irene and Ares' relationship. Phaedra was lucky she didn't get zapped when she interrupted the couple, but Ares has a mission for her.

Thanks for hanging tough with me, I appreciate it.  

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2011 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 15

Great update! The pictures are fantastic as always! Dwayne and Dave was looking very sweet. Love the story.



Author's Response:

Hello Cimmy1, glad you enjoyed the update and the pictures. Yeah the guys are fine as wine and just as intoxicating. 

Thanks for reading, enjoying, rating and reviewing appreciate it and waiting on you woman!

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2011 12:09 am

Title: Chapter 17

It's a been a rough month, so you can't imagine how happy I was to finally pop onto the site and find not one, but three new chapters awaiting me!  I'm so glad that Irene is finally starting to open herself up a bit more, and enjoy this new relationship.  Her joyful, spontaneous reaction to Ares' surprise visit was great, and I was so proud that she didn't start doubting herself or Ares again after the Monica encounter.  Thanks for another great read, and do update again soon.  I'm really looking forward to more Ares and Irene (and Damon and Percy), not to mention the promised visit from Ebony and company. ;)



Author's Response:

Hi Mia hope things have gotten better for you and glad that I could provide you with a diversion that you enjoy.

Irene is slowly trusting Ares to be a man of his word. Ares knows he has found the right woman having had experience with all the wrong ones. Irene isn't going to let him get away with anything and he wants to protect her from any danger, something she seems to be good at finding so it will not be easy for either of them.

Irene is beginning to realize that the Monica's of the world only have the power that she gives them and she is taking back her power (something we all have to do). Keep reading lots of twists and turns coming up. 

I appreciate your reading, commenting, rating and reviewing. Thank you for taking the time. 

 

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 12:15 am

Title: Chapter 17

I like how Percy talked to Ares about her sister weather he like it or not. I like how she looking out for his sister and want to know how ares feels about Irene. I don't like that news woman she faker then weave and  something seems very shady. I wonder how the family is going to react to the sisters? I think it will go well but it will be some dram too. I like the pics and like the update and thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Hellow WWEFanForLife Percy and Irene have looked out for each other all their lives and it goes without saying that not even two hunky guys will change that. Monica is just what Ares thought trouble and the family's reaction is going to be mixed. Drama is never far behind with this group and I'm glad you enjoy the pics and the update. 

Thanks for reading, enjoying, reviewing, commenting it is appreciated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2011 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 16

OMGoodness!! I've missed so much, I'm so excited about everything buzzing around at the new homestead. I really wonder who the mysterious "aunts" really are..hmm

Great writing. Hope to read more soon.



Author's Response:

Hey JoiousMaye I hope all is well in your world. Yes there is a lot of stuff going on both in Olympus and Attica and we are getting a little closer to finding out who the ladies are.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, commenting and reviewing, I appreciate it.  

 

 

Reviewer: JoiousMaye Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 16

I love how Ares showed up and suprise Irene that was very sweet of him. I hope they can stay happy for a very long time before crazy dram hit them. I like the pics of their new farm and I belive the girls will have that farm house ready to go. I think is funny to how Irene and Percy can make these big strong men become weak in the knees lol. thank for the update and like the pics.



Author's Response:

Hello WWEFanForLife, Ares is learning the balance he needs with Irene and Irene is learning to be more of herself with him. Drama has a way of showing up they just have to get through it.

I haven't put up any pics of the farm yet, that was Attica. Irene and Percy have a whole team of people helping and the farm is going to be the best. 

Glad you enjoyed the chapter/pics and thanks for reading, commenting and rating.

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2011 02:46 pm

Title: Chapter 15

forgot the stars with my review.



Author's Response:

Hi WWEFanForLife, Thanks for the stars, appreciate you coming back to put them up.

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Wow I can't belive how areas and damon brother was acting when they told him they wanted to invited the women in their lives for dinne but glad it got settle. Now for the other brothers I think that woman drug snake to find out why he following the pappa brothers. I can't wait to the girls find out the answer they want to know about their mother. thank for the update love the pics.



Author's Response:

Hi WWEFanForLife, Theo is still the King of the Gods and as such he feels the need to have his finger in every pie. Family is very important to him and he sees Damon and Ares bringing women to the dinner as the momentous occasion that it is.

Snake was lucky that Brittany didn't really want to hurt him and all he came away with was another voice in his head. Sly knows his son is keeping something from him and he won't press it, yet.

Irene and Percy are making progress in their personal and  professional lives The issue of who their mother is also come closer to being answered.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, rating and  commenting it is appreciated. 

 

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2011 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I can't believe Ares served the same meal from his "visit" to Irene's dreams, and had poor Irene thinking she was losing it. LOL! A very nice tie-in to those earlier events.  And thanks for that little glimpse of Percy and Damon at the end.  Definitely a bittersweet parting for our couples, though hopefully not for very long.<p>As to the identity of Irene and Pery's mom, I initially thought of Demeter as she's Persephone/Percy's mom in classic mythology. Not to mention that the whole goddess of the harvest thing seemed to fit well with the sisters' love of the land and their farm.  But with the appearance of Ebony and the gang -- and their rather unique abilities -- I'm feeling stumped again.  Come on, throw a few more clues to your faithful readers. ;)</p><p>Thanks for a great update, Junebug. Looking forward to more.</p>



Author's Response:

Hi Mia, don't let that handsome grinning man fool you. Ares is a strategist and now that he is coming to terms with what Irene means in his life he is getting back on his game. He found out what he wanted to with that romantic dinner by the pool and the God of War is planning how he is going to storm Irene's defenses to get what they both want.

The parting was bittersweet for both couples, having just met and spent time together none of them expected things to be so intense so fast. Having to go to Theo and Gloria's after the Harts left to ask for permission to bring them was necessary (if a bit late) and thankfully with Gloria's assistance it went fairly well.

The identity of the Harts' mother hmmm how to answer that question? I feel like the Sphinx with that one. Demeter is a good guess but yes I did throw in a curve with Ebony, Trinity and Asia. As to more clues you are getting them and may not be picking up on them.

Thank you for reading, enjoying, reviewing and rating. I appreciate the time you take to comment when we all are leading busy lives.

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2011 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 14

I think Irene willl go for it because you can tell they way she lights up when he around. She make him a better person and they just fit so well together. But it also show it going to be a battle going on as well because of what going on with her wanting to find out info about her mother. I understand he worried he should be but she and Percy didn't know their mother and these women can give them answers. Damon and Ares are going to be there for them big time and support them  no matter what. Good chapter and good pics in the chapter as well and thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Hey WWEFanForLife, just as Irene brings a feeling of peace to Ares' life she can also get him hot under the collar in ways no one else can. They will never have an easy time of it but they respect each other.

Having someone care about her besides Percy is new for Irene and she's not sure how to take it, for Ares having a woman who doesn't fall in line with what he wants is new and not something he will easily get used to.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and pics.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, reviewing and rating it is appreciated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2011 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 13

So the plot thickens on the mystery of Irene and Percy's origins.  Those women are clearly some very powerful immortals to be able to evade the Olympians in that manner.  Can't wait to see what you have in store for their meeting with Irene and Percy.  In the meanwhile, given how understandably excited Irene is to actually have a lead on information about her mother, I really hope Ares doesn't put his foot in it and deal their relationship any further setbacks.  Thanks for another enjoyable chapter, and do update (this and Percy's story) again soon! :)

 



Author's Response:

Hi Mia, the plot thickens like honey (yeah I gave myself the side eye too). The women have avoided the Olympians for a reason but because of Irene and Percy that will no longer be possible and they are all on a collision course to meet. As to Ares stepping in it, he's got some pretty big feet so it is inevitable that he will get into trouble with Irene. She has been independent for a long time and prefers to make her own decisions, having a man even one as sexy as Ares tell her what to do will not go down well. 

Glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for rating and reviewing I do appreciate it.

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2011 10:49 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Oh my, minions galore! Although I suspect Ares is rethinking the need for such a large staff since his rather passionate elevator interlude with Irene was so rudely interrupted. *g* I thought Phaedra was a definite goner for a few moments there. LOL. Glad that Ares and Irene were finally able to get some one-on-one time, and to move their relationship a few steps forward without another setback.  Thanks for the great update!



Author's Response:

Hello Mia, yes Ares is a very social fellow and I bet he wishes he were more like Damon now. Phaedra did have a close call but then so did Irene. I know she isn't quite ready for that big step yet but she'll getting there and Ares will have to exhibit patience for a little while longer.

Thank you for commenting and rating I do appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2011 10:14 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I understand why he freaking out these women can change so many things for Percy and Irene and not good way. I mean they will get answer about their mother and why she had to give them up but something tells me that these women have other things in store for the sisters. I wonder how she going to respond when Arres tells her why he not happy and the truth about him and Damon? Nice pic and I like the one with the garden alot. Thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi WWEFanForLife, Ares is freaking out because these other Immortals have not made themselves known to him or his family and that is very suspicious to him and Damon both. The answers may not be worth what the Harts have to endure to get them but for better or worse they are going to be making that journey. Ares will either get on board or he will be left behind we already know how Damon feels but the choice may be taken out of his hands as well. Glad you enjoyed the pics, the garden is in Minneapolis and they use it for weddings among other things.

Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing I do appreciate it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2011 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Love this!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Sure_Thang glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Sure_Thang Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2011 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Wow sexy Ares made it up to her big time. Taking her to his home showing her that amazing garden and just have a great breakfast together. One thing I like about the brothers is that they don't show off their wealth like most rich people and they are down to earth guys. I think they are that way because the sisters brings out the soft side in Areas and Damon.

 

I wonder what those Pitts brothers are up too? I bet it nothing good. Love the pictures I love the garden one and thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Hello WWEFanForLife, Ares has had lots of practice but never had a woman who wanted to spend time with him and not just to spend his money or be seen in the poshest spots. The wealth is nothing to them since they are Gods and they are all too aware of the reaction of most mortals. Irene and Percy from the beginning have been focused on Ares and Damon as men and not wallets and this is the difference.

The Pitts are a little occupied at the moment but will show up in a few. Glad you enjoy the pics as much as I do.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, rating and reviewing. I do appreciate it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2011 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 11

Yup, you did keep your promise and it was a great chapter.  I was really worried about Amber there.  I knew she wouldn't be outright evil, but I had the impression she might not be on the good side.  Glad to see that she's on our side and healthy.  I'm loving the tension between her and Dion. Wow...I wasn't feeling Dion too much---didn't do it for me on attraction (he's Bacchus right?--didn't see that either); but after this chapter---> He's a winner!  I love him. I can't wait until you give some of the other pairings some love.  Like Marina/Sean (I think) and Selene/Apollo (and they got the age gap thing to worry about).  

 

I loved the detail on the three sisters and now I'm wanting to know more about them.  And if the guy they caught was connected to the other bad guys in the picture.   I wonder who Kay is.  This is getting bigger and more convoluted.  The chapter is great and I hope we get a nice make out session between Irene and Ares---cause the peck wasn't satisfying.

I'm glad you updated and I'm happy to R&R for my two most favored stories on this site.    ^_^



Author's Response:

Hey Vaberella, keep in mind though that just because they have auras don't make them 'good' girls and Amber isn't a diva for nothing. Dion isn't the only one who likes drama and she will give him a run for his money. The boys have a way of growing on you and yes his Roman equivalent was Bacchus. As to giving them some love it will take a while I kinda got my hands full. Oh and the age thing is a big deal for all of them considering the guys are all Immortals.

The sisters are characters for sure and going to play a part in the telling of this tale and the others as well. Is convoluted good or bad? Glad you enjoyed the chapter and I'm sorry no make out in this one maybe the next chapter. Ares is chomping at the bit for a little something, something too but he'll have to wait something he's getting good at.

As ever I am glad that you enjoyed and thank you for the R&R it is appreciated.

 

Reviewer: vaberella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 09:28 am

Title: Chapter 11

Good thing she safe and those brothers going to regret for messing with Ireas because look like Ares want to kill someone bad.  Thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Yes Amber came out of that unscathed, luckily someone didn't want to hurt her. I feel sorry for whoever is targeting the Harts because they will have Ares, Damon and the rest of the gang to deal with and it won't be pretty.

Thanks for reading, enjoying, reviewing and rating. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

By the way...what's up with Amber ditching our girl?  That was out of order.  Also are you going to write up the scene we see in the other story where Ares walks into the room behind Irene to talk to Percy by comp?  I was a bit saddened when I read in the other story that Ares stopped dreamwalking her.



Author's Response:

Hello Varberella, Amber had no control over that as you will see she didn't mean to do that. Yes that particular scene will be in LABTH. Ares only had a limited amount of dreamwalking that he could do which is why he will go to 'supervise' the ORE crew and of course spend quality time with Irene. That means he will get up to all kinds of naughty stuff in the real (can you hear my evil laughter?) Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing. You have given me quite a few good laughs. 

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2011 10:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for answering my Dave Batista question.  I'm glad he's retired--doing it for a few years should always be enough---after a while you need a break from that biz.   It's when guys like him and the Rock come along and I don't hear about them until I retire that I miss watching Wrestling---let's just say it's been a few decades since I gave it up.  Not to mention I was partial to female wrestling anyway (yeah, I'm female).   ^_^  

 

Anyway onto the main reason for my new review.  I love the story, as I've said countless times.  But guess what I saw this weekend.  That's right....I saw FF5 (Fast & the Furious 5).  I'm a big fan of that and I always hated the fact there was NEVER one Black woman in the film.  Fine, the women in it are cool, but Black women can be just as cool.  Of course my tirade is to send a subliminal message to maybe do a story where the women are Black for some of the lead guys---since I love your writing.  But the main reason is because I saw The Rock in it.   And I LOVED his GOATEE.  OH MY GOD!!  OH MY GOD.  Sure the film made him almost like a bear and he was always sweety, but he was breathtaking.   And his GOATEE was something else. 

I was just wondering if you'd let Ares grow a nice full goatee.   Yes, after all I said I was just asking if there was a chance of seeing some goatee caressing.  Because I wanted to do that...and I hate mustaches and beards, but The Rock's was so delectable....it made me think of this story.

We await your update with semi-bated breath.  Cause if it was bated we'd be dead.  ^_^



Author's Response:

Hello Vaberella, Can I say that I love your enthusiasm? First off let me say that I agree with you, I too am glad that Dave is no longer wrestling even though I don't get to see him doing his thing, that is one occupation that is very hard physically, mentally and emotionally on a body. Let him stay healthy and safe and make movies, because he is charasmatic and I wouldn't mind him strutting his stuff on the big or little screen. I stopped watching wrestling when I was a kid and just started again last year so I didn't get to see Dave 'live' so to speak and boy am I kicking myself.

As to Dwayne I'm not sure how I feel about him returning to wrestling but I hope he remains safe also. I have not seen FF5 yet and I'm not sure if I will. I could so easily fall for that goatee as well as the rest of him all over again and although I can multi-task I am not quite that talented. We will see about the goatee thing cause I do love me some facial hair as you can tell from the cast pics. I will put that Fast and Furious idea in my back pocket, unless someone (Read you. Why do I think you might do justice to that story?) beats me to it.

Yes please make it semi-bated breath, I want all of the VC readers to remain very much alive.

Thank you so much for your support V I do appreciate it.

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2011 10:39 am

Title: Chapter 10

great



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Date: April 12 2011 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 2

Who is the real life person you've cast as Damon/Hades?  I see his face often, but don' t know who he is.

Author's Response:

Hello Vaberella, his name is David Michael Bautista Jr. to give him his full name. Usually he goes by Dave Batista and he is a four time WWE World Heavy Weight Champion and won the Tag Team Championship several times. He is retired from wrestling and doing some acting now. 

David

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2011 09:42 pm



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