Tobias was an ass to tell her that Ryan only wanted her to bank roll him. That was hard, like a man can't want her for who she is? Good update!
No RYAN NO, don't be an asshole! I know we've only just met, but I think you need your own fic *hint hint* where you calm the hell down and fine woman who can loves you. I will agree, but I can't be certain, but it does seem as if she led him own. I really hope he's not a psycho.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2011 01:13 am
omg hot dam you go tobias. happy they kiss but it going to be problem since he engaged to be marry lol. i don't like this ryan guy thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 05 2011 09:47 pm
Love it!!!...more more more....love your writing style....please hurry with a lengthy update....yes I said lengthy...I am greedy!.......once again love it!
Reviewer: chelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 05 2011 08:55 pm
I liked both updates. The new one, gave a little more depth though into Tobias and Serena's character when she was younger, which I liked too. Anyway great retouch and I hope you can squeeze us other updates around your work schedule. This story is too good. Thanks!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 05 2011 06:54 pm
wow ok he make licking a crumb so dam sexy ok i have some crumbs tobais lol. Now if she don't think he feeling her after their little snack together then she realy lost her mind. wonder what going to happen next? thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 10:58 pm
wow it look like tobia wanted to find ryan and run him over with his car lol. they both like each other and neither one going to say anything at all to each other lol. I like the maid man or woman i know how you young people like to expierment lol. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 10:52 pm
wow that chick tobias is about marry is realy realy stupid lol. why is she so scared around him? is she in love with him? thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 10:47 pm
nice pic of the cast.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 10:45 pm
Wow! I am really enjoying this story and hopefully where it is going.
Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 09:47 pm
That was a wonderful chapter! The tension between those two is killing me! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 10:52 pm
Where is the fan? It's getting hot in here !
Chica, this was intense! I am hoocked!
Toby needs to get a taste of his own medicine when Serena will cut him short too !
But you have got to make these chapters longer
Reviewer: diarylover Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2010 06:30 am
You can already see the hint of possessiveness in the chapter. I'm a little confused as to their attraction to each other. I get his for her, but I'm not convinced about her for him. I think she likes him, but I'm not feeling this all consuming love that would make her hurt. However, this is wonderfully written and I'm highly intrigued.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: December 25 2010 06:58 pm
Great update, Merry Christmas!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 25 2010 08:27 am
Tobias needs to face facts and just tell her the truth. Him getting married in stead of dealing with his issues isn't gonna make things any better.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 25 2010 08:20 am
Thanks for the update. The tension between the two is excruciating. Anxiously awaiting to see what happens next. Hope you have a Merry Christmas and thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Reviewer: Romance Signed [Report This]Date: December 25 2010 01:57 am
Thanks for the update! I am enjoying the start of this story so far.
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 09:31 pm
There is that war inside that Tobias is fighting..he does not want Melissa but he is afraiid of being with Serena...his heart and body says Serena the world and his mind say Melissa..however if does not get his head together soon it will be w mute point cause he mood swings will drive Serena away for good!
Good job sweetie...getting very interesting!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 09:21 pm
Those two are killing me. Tobias really has a strong will. The fiancee seems to be a real baracuda. If she even suspects how Serena feels, she'll destroy her.
Mele Kalikimaka *Merry Christmas*
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 09:05 pm
Thanks for the update. Merry Christmas. Please don't marry her if this will make you miserable.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 08:58 pm
more,more, more =)
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 08:30 pm
can't wait for more=)
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 08:23 pm
can't wait to read more =)
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 08:15 pm
Teasing!! Love it.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2010 07:54 pm
Okay. You are absolutely positively 100% killing me with the short updates! Gah!
I love all the longing and angst. You just want to smush their heads together and make them talk (and then make out). Please update soon.
Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2010 11:17 pm
Hummm what is up with this..Tobias has feelings for her and she has for him..but what is keeping them apart...age?closeness? we will find out more as we go along I am sure...
Good job sweetie....cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2010 11:02 pm