Excellent selection of cast. I can already tell that Jason and Tony are going to be something else. Tanya looks like she is going to have more than a handful in dealing with Jason, but she seems like a tough cookie who can take him on head to head without blinking an eye. :)
Onto the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Oh yes tanya is tuff cookie and that it going to be a fun and crazy ride with these two. thanks for the review. Reviewer: Missus James Signed
[Report This]Date: February 12 2011 01:18 am
Love love love this story so far. I am glad that Tanya decided to open her own gym. It sucks going to some gyms and they give you the cold shoulder for being overweight. And I am so giddy about John Cena and Randy Orton...eeeep! LOL! Please update soon.
-Rina
Author's Response: glad you like it. i don't like it either when you go to a gym and they treat you like crap because you overweight. Yes i'm very happy i put john cena and randy orton in the story too. thanks for the review. Reviewer: NubianBoriquaPrincess Signed
[Report This]Date: February 11 2011 07:19 pm
I like it a great deal. Other than some milf editing for a better flow, you rated really highly as far as the beginnings of a well-constructed plot lines go.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm working on my form mate to make sure it done very well.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2011 09:07 pm
I really like this start, and being a HUGE WWE fan, I know that is story is only going to get BETTER.... I love both male characters, especially Tony, he is HOT HOT HOT. I saw him in person, and OMG, I so wanted to JUMP HIS BONES. LOL
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: lmaof jumps his bone i understand that how i feel about jc eveytime i see that man live or on tv just have thoughts i know are just wrong but i don't want to be right lol.Glad you like it and i think the story will get better too. thanks for the review. Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 10 2011 03:16 am
I...LOVE...IT!!!
You did a great job on this story. I so love the humor that you threaded throughout. I LOL when Jaycee got all distracted in the ring by her...uhm...beauty. LOL.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
P.S. I can't STAND gyms that treat their overweight patrons like dirt. I'm glad Tanya opened up her own gym and showed them how to REALLY do it.
I also see that you added part of your real name as one of the characters. Smooth. Real smooth. tee-hee.
Author's Response: yeah i got that idea to add my real name from another author wonder who that could be mmmmmmmmm lol. Yeah i hate that gym or any other place treat people like dirt and don't real care how a person feel. yeah he sure did get distracted by her beauty yeah beauty lol. thanks for the review girl. Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2011 02:45 am
Great cast! Not surprised at all to see John Cena among them. lol.
Author's Response:
lol girl you know i had to put that so dam sex he get the underwear of a nun lol. Glad you like the cast thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2011 02:06 am
I think I got Jaycee and Tony mixed up, guess I'm not seeing right today. Anyway, you know who I was talking about. Jacyee rules! LOL
Author's Response: lol yes he does rule big time got to love that sexy man. thank you for the review.
Date: February 09 2011 07:28 am
Me likey!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you likey alot lol. thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: February 09 2011 05:28 am
I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved the beginning when you discussed how Tanya got to where she is now in her life. I thought the section had a lot o f heart.
I lol'ed when Jaycee lost the match, because he got distracted by Tanya. I thought you did a good job of capturing the energy of the match.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I understand where tanya coming from and wanted to make sure i put my heart into that part. lol yeah i thought it was funny he got distracted and lost the match that a man for you lol. thanks for the review. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: February 09 2011 05:17 am
Ah! Already I love Tanya and Trina. Both having the strength to pursue their dreams after some hardship. Love them!
And the arranged back stage passes...oh..la.la
Can't wait to see where this goes!
Great Job!
Author's Response: oh thank you great wise one lol. yeah these two girls been thu alot and they come out fighting for what they wanted. You just have to read the next chapter to see what happen backstage. thank agian for the review glad you like the story so far. Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 09 2011 04:49 am
So i love it already because you used Estelle "Sophia Petrillo" Getty and whoever that bit of cuteness is playing Steve.
Off to read!
Author's Response: girl you know i had to have estelle in this story she my fav from the golden girls. You think steve cute he alright lol. thank you for the review. Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 09 2011 04:31 am
keep it coming its great with my two favourites john cena and mr break your back in a good way mr sexy randy orton damn so sorry off to take a shower
Author's Response: Mr. break your back in a good way lol that a good line. yes i'm a huge wwe fan and just love john cena and felt randy would work well in the story too. thank you so much for the review still lmaof this is a very funny review.
Date: February 09 2011 04:25 am
What a great setup! I am so glad you decided to post a story.
And they got to go backstage? Wow. Nice cliffhanger!!!
O
Author's Response: thank you oliva. Yes i decided to post something when someone told me if I don't they come fine me and kick my but wwe style lol. glad you like it so far thanks for the review. Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 09 2011 04:23 am
Some how I managed to delete my first review. So I'll try again. I am really enjoying your story. Very entertaining. Looking forward to the introductions.
A
Author's Response: Thank you arabelle for leaving your review agian. I hate when that happen you leaving a review and it end up getting delete lol. Agian thanks for the review. Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2011 03:57 am
Okay, I'm very excited about this story. I love the way it starts off. Tanya felt like a real character I can relate to. She struggled with her weight and finally decided to do something about it, plus she worked hard and opened her own fitness center. Too many people just give up.
I love the way the characters look from the pics.
Tony sounds like a dream. When Tanya caught his attention outside the ring, the moment was too cute. Complete infatuation makes a story exciting and she has no clue the man's already in love. Can't wait until she meets him! LOL
So love the setting, she being a fitness guru and he being a wrestler, haven't read too many stories like that.
Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you girl for a wonderful review. Yes i wanted to make tanya real so not only you reviews can relate to her but i know how tanya feel having being big once myself and lost alot weight. Glad you like the cast pic girl it was hell trying to find the right ones and then put them her on the site lol. thanks a million for the review means alot to me. Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2011 03:55 am