Reviews For To Last a Lifetime
Title: In Dreams

Awesome. What a greeting to come home to, the soon to be ex, the woman he loves who is pregnant and Aunt Mae. Loved it.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 02:10 am

Title: In Dreams

ALL I CAN SAY IS:  OMG I'M SO LOVING THIS STORY.

And Coopers timing is just great, LOL, LOL

Please update ASAP!!

 

Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 02:10 am

Title: Waking Dream

Seven weeks, is nothing if you love each other and can be together for a lifetime.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 01:58 am

Title: Limit to Your Love

Aunt Mae is a mess, a good mess. She needs to go back and talk this through with him, no running away now.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 01:38 am

Title: In Dreams

Yes!!!  That was freaking awesome!!!  I am so glad that he told that ho Amber that he was in love with Amber!!  I love Aunt Mae, she cracks she reminds of my Aunt Marge!!!  I can't wait to read about Amber's reaction Simon giving her the facts.  Amber will whintastic!!!!  I love it!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 12:22 am

Title: Lay in My Bed

Hot chapter, what can the secret be that he is holding back. Awesome.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 12:14 am

Title: In Dreams

ABOUT TIME!!!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 11:16 pm

Title: In Dreams

more more more please. Aunt Mae is about to open a can of whip azz on amber. loved the update

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 11:00 pm

Title: In Dreams

Oh no, no, no. No you don’t IT! Don’t you dare end this story so quickly!  It is a beautifully written piece that has endeared me to its characters.  The dialogue is smart and to-the-point, the plot twists make sense – they’re not out of left field and imo (of course), Moliere, Simon, Aunt Mae, Cooper and even Amber-Who aren’t just characters in a book [which it should be], they’re real people with real lives dealing with realistic day-to-day situations. To just ‘wrap it up’ would be a crime!  The finale deserves the same love as its debut don’tcha think? Pretty please!

[ok, end of begging LOL]

As I’ve said before, every time I’ve read To Last A Lifetime, I'm pleasantly surprised. At first I thought, ‘oh here we go again, she’s not going to tell him, he’s coming back with Wonderbread, she’s going to gloat, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah’ and then when she showed up in the trench and heels, I almost stopped reading (seriously) because I just knew he’d punk out and totally destroy Molli but that was definitely NOT the case!  I didn’t expect Molli’s revelation, didn’t see Aunt Mae’s affection, NEVER anticipated Simon’s reaction and Cooper’s entrance to the hilarious calamity was the cherry on top!  GuurrrllI…I was breathless from hollering so much, I couldn’t stop lmao and then the ending just made me swoon:


"Simon, we need to talk," Moliere said quietly.

"Yes, we do," he whispered to her, brushing her cheek lovingly.

"I'm in love with her, Amber," Simon said, his voice even, cool, his eyes still in Moliere's.

"Amber, I'm in love with Moliere and she's carrying my child."

I'm very interested to see what happens next and down the road: what Amber-Who has to say, what’s wrong with Aunt Mae, what Cooper’s hiding but more importantly, I'm enthusiastic about Simon and Moliere’s relationship and their bundle of joy. So see…there’s absolutely too much fabulous ground to cover for at least five additional chapters! J

Aunt Mae is PRICELESS and so is the author’s talent!

BRAVA!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 10:38 pm

Title: Waking Dream

I feel bad for Moliere; this lady deserves all the love a good man has to offer. Simon is that good man but when will he be her good man, for keeps?  I guess my skepticism comes from the fact that he’s still holding on to Wonderbread, or perhaps evading is the best way to describe his reluctance to end things. I mean, how difficult is it to terminate something that was never meant to be? I know he’s a gentleman but still…Simon…be an ordinary guy and dump her!  Doesn’t seem like their relationship was all-that in the first place anyway.


Also,


Simon appears not to be a fickle person and certainly not easily persuaded by a woman’s charms so I really, really hope she-who-is-NOT-the-love-of-his-life doesn’t miraculously make an appearance while he’s away from his lady. It’s so cliché but it happens.


In the meantime,


Molli’s with child…I just know it!  And Aunt Mae will be beside herself once she ‘tells’ Moliere she’s pregnant. How will Molli handle it? How long before she share the good news with the father?

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 09:35 pm

Title: Limit to Your Love

"Bitch, what'chou thinkin'!"

Moliere hopped three feet in the air and pirouetted until she was facing the barrel of a .45 nickle-plated handgun.

"Aunt Mae!" Moliere yelped. "Jesus, put Fluffy away!"

"Fluffy was about to blow yo' ass away!"

 

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ROFLMAO!!!  Fluffy?!!  BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

 

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 09:34 pm

Title: In Dreams

Ok I was all set to be pissed at Simon until he told stupid Amber teh deal!! Aunt Mae is rough..how old is she..I want her on my side in any fight for sure..now that cat is out the bag...nxt Cooper can tell his best friend he slept with his fiance and Aunt Mae can let them all know she is dyinng!!

Mo and Simon love each other ..time they make it official!!

Excellent story sweetie...excellent updt as well!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 09:30 pm

Title: Lay in My Bed

She looked up at him. "No." He sucked his teeth and turned away as she giggled. She hopped up from the couch and followed him into the kitchen, watching his naked backside flex with each step. She bit the corner of her bottom lip, her core wetting and pulsing almost painfully. She was pretty sure there was no way she'd be able to have sex again, not so soon, but Simon was making it difficult to focus on the health of her coochie while looking like that. And so effortlessly. She stopped in the middle of the kitchen and crossed her weakened legs, moaning to herself and letting her eyes close. By the time she opened them, Simon was stalking towards her, his dick bobbing as it hardened with each step.

"Yeah, pepperoni, mushroom, large, Sprite," he groaned, his voice hoarse, eyes set on ripping his button-down off of her. He grunted their address and promptly hung up, his arm wrapping around her waist in the next second. He pulled her against him, his head dipping to kiss her hard.

 

 

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OOOHHH LA LA!!!! SIMON IS DA MAN!!  OMG! That's my fav scene.  I know Molli's kicking herself for letting that man almost slip through her fingers.  But their time is now, not then.  They've shared a life for ten years...now it’s time to share their love.

I freakin' LOVE Aunt Mae and Cooper.  They are the finishing touches to these wonderful characters, this enchanting story actually.  I don't know what's going with them, I'm not even going to guess (well, that's not exactly true. I've been racking my brain trying to figure out what could possibly be up with Cooper but I'll just have to be pleasantly surprised *wink wink*).  I just hope everything works out for the best.

Loved the update lady! Keep 'em coming. :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 09:30 pm

Title: In Dreams

At least we got that at of the way quickly.

This is so comical.  Aunt Mae is a hoot.

Loving it and thanks for the update.

At least Simon knows who he loves.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 09:07 pm

Title: In Dreams

Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! Tis all.

 

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 08:39 pm

Title: In Dreams

ejoyed your story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 08:33 pm

Title: In Dreams

No, don't stop there!!!  Please update again soon.

Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 07:56 pm

Title: In Dreams

i laughed my ass off its funny update soon please

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 07:28 pm

Title: In Dreams

Sorry Simon is acting like a punk!

Reviewer: MsLilly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 07:14 pm

Title: The Cast

Aunt Mae is a HAM and I love it!!!! It's about time everything comes to light.. Now, on to Cooper and Aunt Mae's big reveal..

Awesome Chapter!!!!

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 06:50 pm

Title: In Dreams

Well, that would be right at home on 90's style Jerry Springer.  All we need now is Steve to bust in the door to break up the fight that's about to go down!!!!  Steve! Steve! Steve!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 06:18 pm

Title: In Dreams

Good update, but I'm a little confused if the ending with Simon and Amber was a dream.  That seems too easy for Simon to now know Molli is pregnant and to tell Amber he is in love with Molli.  I'm hoping it is not a dream.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 06:12 pm

Title: The Cast

Loved the update!  Mae is too much!  Is there something going on between Cooper and Amber????  

Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 05:56 pm

Title: In Dreams

Please Please Please Update again this week-end!!! This was tooo funny!! I am glad Molli and Simon are back in the same town and in the same house.. Now for the other hot news to be dropped!!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 05:56 pm

Title: In Dreams

I'm so glad that he owned up to the baby and didn't try to sugarcoat things for Amber. Now i really can't wait to see what happens next.

Bumps

Reviewer: KIAH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 05:33 pm



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