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Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

You sure know how to start a story, lol, I'm loving this so far. The humour is brilliant and I am so jealous of the way you're able to make the characters have distinct voices while the boys sound like boys.

I don't know how I feel about Aunt Mae, she's funny but knid of rough, lol, but she feels real which is good. Cooper, lmao, jerk but an amusing jerk so we shall see. 

 

 Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2011 03:14 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

love it

 Reviewer: bredreaway Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2011 02:25 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

Awesome update and the plot thickens!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 11:38 pm
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

sookie sookie now i cant wait til sim and moli hit the sheets oh boy coop and aunt mae? 

i dont like how aunt mae talks to moli. if ur goal was for aunt mae to come off as a selfish bitter old woman then good job lol. being raised with that im even more grateful moli is so awesome. 



Author's Response: LoL yeah, Aunt Mae has her own history and hang-ups that you'll learn about later on. their relationship is a lot more complex than this chapter shows, mostly by an unspoken history. don't strike her down just yet; Aunt Mae's got a heart somewhere in there.

 Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 11:19 pm
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

Auntie Mae, how I love thee! The woman is awesome.

Cooper doesn't sugar coat it with Simon, I like that.

I wish Amber would come back sooner, so they could end this farce of an engagement before he tries to pursue Mo. I don't want their relationship karma messed up.

You need to knock out another chapter pronto.

 Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 08:32 pm
Title: The Cast

This story ROCKS!!!  I love the characters especially Aunt Mae. She kinda reminds me of my Nana who is 92 and could cuss you out real good, except of Sundays, cuz thats the Lawds day!!! Cant wait to see if my predictions about this story is correct. UPDATE SOON

 Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 07:18 pm
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

that was the funniest dialogue I've ever read. Loved it!

 Reviewer: Kiwibabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 02:52 pm
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

OMG i.t. anotha stunna lol!!!! can they please f**k each others brains out next chapter so she can gone get that bun the oven and blow these wedding plans to smithereens?????????? please and thank you!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 01:53 pm
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

Great update!

Yup, when others start seeing and talking about your "secret" crush;  it's time to face reality!!

Aunt Mae's party should be very interesting...

"When the rum is in, the wits are out!!" 

Until the par-tay!!

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 12:29 pm
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

the chapter was unny as hell and aunt mae lets just say i wish she was my aunty  am to rude to say that i cant wait for molliere and simon to do the nasty can't wait for the next chapter

 Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 07:22 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

That was a great update!!!!!!!  Please come back soon.

 Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 06:59 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

hmmmmmmm are they they gonna take the advice given I WONDER THIS IS A GREAT STORY KEEP IT COMIN

 Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 06:39 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

I most definitely agree with your end notes.  I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Mae/Cooper get into.  Simon and Moliere are stupid for agreeing to go to a party with those two in attendance but Mae doesn't seem like the person you can say no to.  I'm loving this story.

 Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 06:32 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

love freaking aunt mae she is a damn hoot!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 06:10 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

Yes yes and yes!!!!!

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 05:51 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

A whole lot of trouble. I love Aunt Maee and Cooper.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 04:35 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

please updte fast

 Reviewer: monique32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 04:24 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

I love this!

 Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 03:55 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

Why is it that Aunt Mae and Cooper know how they feel abou teach other but those two don't seem to have a clue?  Simon is clearly in love with Molli and how long has he felt that way?  Does he think that Molli isn't into to him because he's white?  That is why Mollie doesn't say anything.  These two need help!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 03:54 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

LMAO...that was a great chappie as always smiles i so love cooper and Aunt Mae...cynn

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 03:54 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

Aunt Mae had me cracking up! Cooper is a nut! I guess everyone except for Mo and Simon realises that they have feelings for each other.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 03:25 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

O.M.G.! This just keeps on getting better and better. Aunt Mae had me rolling, loudly! She is a very colorful character. Cooper is a trip too, dude hade me laughing at his crazY ass. Both Aunt Mae and Cooper can read those clueless lovebirds like a book.

Another week out of the country?! Mmmm makes me wonder what's up with that.

I canNOT WAIT to get the party started. Aunt Mae and Cooper together where booze is involved...?! Wow, Simon and Molli are done for, in more ways than one!

Fab update IT! (Btw, Loved the chapter title)

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 02:56 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

lol LOVE aunt mae and cooper! i want them for myself. i usually hate cheating, but mo and simon were clearly meant to be.

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 02:54 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

I LOVE Aunt Mae's character...can't wait for this story to develop.

 Reviewer: 100percentfan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 02:45 am
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

I'm interested to see what the party brings out in these characters.

 Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 02:33 am


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