I have got to say that your characters have some of the best lines and funniest damn dialogue out of most romances that I've read....published and unpublished...hands down. You are truly gifted. You should be a screenwriter. I can picture your stories in my mind like a film. Loving it.
Reviewer: Shea Signed
[Report This]Date: March 28 2011 02:18 am
ok loving the story. Glad you updated again. I m right here waiting.
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 28 2011 02:05 am
Loving Aunt Mae and Cooper..
Reviewer: Reneek Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 28 2011 01:45 am
Love Aunt Mae but am thankful she is not my aunt. I am rooting for Moliere and Simon.
Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2011 01:26 am
damn this is whoo just greatttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 11:32 pm
Great start to the story. They have known each other for a long time and now he is about to get married. Can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 11:18 pm
Well................HOT DAYUM!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 11:06 pm
So hot! Can't wait for the next installment. This is a great twist on roomates turning into more.
Reviewer: Shereads48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 10:33 pm
great start IT. I cant' wait to read more. *ahem* I totally miss your stories on TST is there a chance you'll finish them mi amore?? :)
Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 08:52 pm
Moli is a sleep masturbator, that's hilarious.
Simon need to break up with Amber and ask him roommate out. He's letting valuable sperm going down the drain they could be using to make babies.
Next chapter, please.
Author's Response: yooooooooooo! you's a mess! valuable sperm! Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 27 2011 08:40 pm
DUDE!!!I'm sooooo gonna love this story!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 07:56 pm
This was a great start! I'm loving this story already. Molli and Simon are gonna be explosive when they finally give into each other. Simon needs to let Amber go and move onto who he really wants.
You are an excellent writer so I know this story is gonna be GOOD! Please give us more!!!
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 06:52 pm
I'm looking forward to your delving into their relationship. This first chapter was a real attention grabber. It seems Molli is more forthright when she's partaken of the bubbly. Can't wait to see if she'll admit what she feels for him and if he'll admit what he feels for her. This is a sticky wicket with the him being with fiancee.
You know by now that I think you're a prolific writer, but it bears repeating. I'm always happy when you post.
Author's Response: thanks, Bella! glad you're enjoying it and my writing in general! Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: March 27 2011 06:02 pm
This is a marvelous story and I can't wait for them to give into their feelings. Why is Simon getting married when he obviously has feelings Molli? I hope that he wakes up before it's too late.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 05:57 pm
Loving Molli and Simon already...that other chick (Amber who?) should be a memory for Simon; his present and future is Molli. C'mon dude, man-up!
Fantastic start!
[Report This]Date: March 27 2011 05:17 pm
All I can say is OMG. Can't wait until the next Chapter
Reviewer: Tracy Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 04:15 pm
Stop pretending! Loved it. Amber will be no more pretty soon.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 03:57 pm
Stop pretending! Loved it. Amber will be no more pretty soon.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 03:57 pm
This is starting out hotly and I like it. Update soon please.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 03:47 pm
nice cast pics.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 03:44 pm
Great start!!
Molli and Simon have a subconcious mutual attraction that is bubbling to the surface. What tantilizing fun!
Poor Amber may soon become, "Amber, who?" lol
More, please!!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 03:40 pm
HAWT! Awesome story and writing skills - me likey very much! Love "best friends becoming lovers" stories! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 02:58 pm
Now that's what I call the beginning of a great story. Can't wait to read more.
Love baby fics.
Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 02:00 pm
Wow, what a great start! Glad to see a new story and will definately keep tab of it........though I must honestly confess that I find the cast of Cooper much much more sexier, sinfully delicious and compatible with Moliere.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 01:25 pm
this story is now on my check list ! =) great job
Reviewer: DivineFindings Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2011 01:19 pm