Reviews For The Demon Seed
Title: Chapter 6

Charly is completely by herself, she needs some serious prayer!!!  How can Regine call herself her friend, that is so wrong.  Charly has to realize that there is no where she can go that he can't find her, except a church.  I hope that thought comes to her mind.. Maybe her love can change Nic, he's in love already but he can't admit it to himself.  Love is being in the presence of God's light so he wants to be as far apart from that as possible.  Excellent chapter!!1

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 03:41 pm

Title: Chapter 6

geez, i bet she's wishing she didn't go to that club now, huh?

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for the update. Charly's friends aren't who she thought they were.  please continue soon.

Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 03:17 pm

Title: The Cast

Great casting.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 02:36 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Damn, crazy good chapter!!! GREAT CHAPTER!! Pwease, post soon, I can't wait for more ;-)

Ps, Nic and Charly were HOTTT!!!!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 01:50 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Damn, Nic is evil! And he killed the Devil! That's some kinda evil!  Poor Charly, how many of her friends are in league with Satan Supreme Nic?

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 01:25 pm

Title: Chapter 6

oooooooooh and the plot thickens great story cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: leahcar Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 11:11 am

Title: Chapter 6

:D

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 10:51 am

Title: Chapter 6

Welcome back great update!

Thank you 4 sharing

Happy writing!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 09:44 am

Title: Chapter 6

Oh hell NOOOO!!! Reggi is apart of his Nic's workers???!!! Poor Charly!!! There's no escape!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 08:57 am

Title: Chapter 6

Very good

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 08:56 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wow

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 08:40 am

Title: Chapter 5

 I'm liking this so far. Not sure I can root for Nic just yet. I have to see where you go with this first.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 17 2011 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 5

Ana is quite the idiot. Its somewhat comforting to know there are idiots in every realm of existence. I wonder if Nic had not predicted this and it was all part of his plan. Wouldn't surprise me.

Well, I can update now....whenever you're ready.....soon....don't let me stop you.

 

Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 07:24 pm

Title: Chapter 4

For heaven's sake! You'd think the poor girl would have learned not to go around with strangers. Is an mind blowing/altering hookup and baby rowing at the speed of light not enough evidence? Sasha is a trip, great on liners. I wonder if Charly will go to Kevin and tell him about the pregnancy?

If she spews info to Ana I will be pissed. I don't care if she saved her life. Lets not get stupid now. 

Very entertaining. Finally, I started reading it. Sorry I'm a bit slow. Well, off to the last chapter!

Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I FUCKING LOVEE THIS!!!

Reviewer: Leahh Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2011 03:43 am

Title: Chapter 5

I'm going to take a wild guess and say not very well, LOL. He already has her thinking she's going insane as it is, the truth might come as a relief or it might throw her over the edge.

This was a great chapter and I'm glad she was able to break loose even if it made her question her mental state even more. I wonder how aware the baby is or if it just reacted to her fear.

Nic is something else, he has this appeal even though I know he's an evil person. Wouldn't want to meet him in a club though, lol.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2011 09:20 am

Title: Chapter 5

This is really interesting. I wonder how Charly will react once she finds out what's happened and what he is. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2011 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Girl why you had to ended it like that you could have at least build it up to a hot climax...LOL

LOL

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2011 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Ana days are numbered, but I doubt she has the sense to leave things alone. Next chapter should be interesting.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2011 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 5

So glad to see you back with this story, Happy...I love it...

Maybe it's just me...but I'm not rooting for Nic at all...he's too diabolical...and I hope he's underestimating Charly and her goodness...isn't that why he chose her in the first place besides being physically attracted her or is it her goodness that's the turn on for him...but I don't want him to succeed...and though by some miracle I want Charly's baby to make it...I know it's not possible for her to keep her sanity...so the little one will have to be sacrificed to thwart Nic's evil plan...at no point now am I seduced by his 'hotness'...he is pure evil with evil intent...he wants mankind destroyed and will turn on poor Charly at anytime if she does not blindly follow him into his perceived entitlement of world domination...

This is a terrific story of the battle of good and evil...I hope that good prevails...see ya, later...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2011 03:56 am

Title: Chapter 5

I'm running around the room like a fool

Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07 2011 12:15 am

Title: Chapter 5

Girl this darn story is too good to be a quickie and too exciting too wait..lol!! It is exciting and suspenseful..as I read I hoping it is not going to end...

I feel so bad for Charlie but I so want to know what is going to happen next..Nic is a monster and Laz I so love..I neeed to know how poor Charlie is going to deal with her demon seed!!!

great job!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2011 12:06 am

Title: Chapter 5

Please, please, please, please update quickly. You don't know how antsy I get for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 08:10 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I truly enjoyed this chapter and I look forwad to seeing how Nic handles Ana or hoh Charly handles Ana. Laz is playing with some fire himself and interesting he might have a liking for being burned. LOL I am think Charly needs that demon seed in her to give her not only some courage but some strength seeing as though she would rather peeps manhandle her, wlk all over her, and disrespect her then tell them how she feels. Her thinking that Nic is not human is very interesting, I guess when he confirms it, that is when she will freak out. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 05:20 pm



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