But what happens to the tramp Ana??
Great update..even though it was short.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2011 05:00 pm
Woah, Nic's is going to tell Charly the truth of their unholy union.. I hope Charly can handle what he tells her. I am happy the Laz's stopped that crazed witch, Anna. I only hope Nic gives her a slow and painful end (the same one she had planned for Charly and their unborn baby)
Great JOB!! I love this story and I can't wait for more.. Please post soon :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 04:01 pm
Charly ain't going to take well. Hell, I am salty for her as he just had the nerve enough to tell him that he is her master!! Charly needs Jesus and I mean with a quickness!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 03:42 pm
DAMN!!! I am almost speechless after reading this update; it was so good and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 02:20 pm
Damn this chapter is wonderful need more very soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 02:03 pm
this aren't looking good for charly is it? and things definitely aren't going to go well for ana.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 09:38 am
Thank you for the update. Completely understand about things happening in life but very happy 2 see u back and with a great update.
Poor Ana "NOT!" I guess she did not believe when Nic gave her a warning.
I am to wondering how she is going to take the truth when she finds out that the father of child is from down below and Aussie is not the down below I'm talking about.
Homeboy said he is her master well alrighty then.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 09:09 am
Ana knows she's gonna get her ass kicked and/or killed by Nic! Nic is your master Charly! I like Lazarus!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 08:42 am
Loved the update but hope Charly can cope with the reality with her situation when it finally hits her. Ana needs to die as she'll always be a threat.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 08:36 am
To late Charly you cannot run or hide. Excellent.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 06 2011 08:19 am
Great chpt. I can't wait to see what happens to Charly now. Please update soon.
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 08:28 am
Another great chapter; thanks. I know that I probably shouldn't like Nic but I do. If I was Charly I would have already went crazy.
Reviewer: Dannie Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 11:10 pm
Nic is so sexy but he is also so creepy. Thanks for writing this story.
Reviewer: Dannie Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 10:53 pm
Usually I don't read dark fiction, but I decided to try this story and I'm glad that I did. This is great so far. I hope that there is a happy ending for Charly.
Reviewer: Dannie Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 10:42 pm
Oh, man, I hope Nic and Laz are still keeping tabs on Charly...I've got a bad feeling about Ana suddenly showing up!
Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 05:40 am
Me likey:)
Please continue.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2011 01:21 pm
That Ana , Charly better watch out . Thanks for the update .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 04:51 pm
OH Boy, the DRAMA is about to begin.. I had a feeling that Ana might try and get close to Charly,I wonder what she is going to do, and if Nic finds out, I wouldn't want to be Ana.
I can't wait until Charly finds out just whos baby she is carrying, and what plans Nic has for is future"Queen"
Looiing forward to more.
[Report This]Date: April 18 2011 01:38 pm
Ana is about to mess with the worng person. She must want to die. Let the fun begin.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2011 05:37 am
Anastasia's up to no good...she's been warned...yet she chooses to defy Nic...bad, bad move Banshee...
Three months along already...at this breakneck speed...Charly's going to be insane before she gives birth...wonder how long it's going to take her to realize that she's not carrying Kevin's child...but the Devil's spawn himself...and I'm almost afraid to find out what exactly it is she's birthing...
And just exactly what grand schemes does Nic have for his heir and poor Charly...does he plan to possess her very soul along with her body...and I know the wicked delights he has planned for her body will never compensate for the carnage he plans to wrought on her life...
Hurry on back soon...love this Happy!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 06:19 pm
Wow poor Charly..somebody will need to explain to her what's up quickly!!
This baby is working on poor Charly and Nick finds it all amusing (btw new plcture of Nic ...finesss!!)..something tells me though Charly is not the strinking violette they think she will be at all and once she finds out the whole truth it will be on and she will take it all laying down.
Ok crazy behind Anastasia has found them and I am sure is there to start trouble bbut I know Laz and Nic ain't just going to let her hurt the demon baby are Charly...so she better watch out!!
I don't know how Charly's frinds will react to her pregnancy but this is about to get very interesting In deeed!!!
I love the twist and turns...cannot wait to see what happens next!! Great job sweetie..more more more!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 02:44 pm
Oh mannnn, Nic is an asshole. I mean, if he can alter her memory he can at least make her think that the pregnancy makes sense. I dont' blame her for being so confused and I love the fact that she feels that something's wrong even if she doesn't know why.
And is he going to alter the doctors' minds since they know she's only supposed to be three months pregnant, so the fact that she's six months when she's supposed to be four is deffo going to cause her [and them] some stress, lol.
And Ana, wow, she works fast doesn't she. This story has me hooked though I do wonder how it's going to end happily, if it does. I wonder if her being a good person and human will have any influence on her son at all.
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 09:31 am
Oh gosh, Ana, is just looking for trouble. Can't wait to see this. As for Charly, I feel kind of bad for her. How freaky is it to find out you're three months pregnant in such a short amount of time? Hope she figures it out soon who's responsible for it.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 08:20 am
I am so loving this story. LOL Good work girl. I love the way Laz and Nic are working together to look after Charly and I love the whole supernatural feel to it. I am a sucker for supernatural stories.
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 08:10 am