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Title: Chapter 4

This stroy is so different but great all the same. What the hell is Ana thinking, he is going to kill her any way he can if she messes with Charly, stupid girl!!!

 Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 08:00 am
Title: Chapter 2

Like...whoa...that's all I got to say. 

 Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 07:58 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh great, just what we need, a handsome, sexy, devil of a guy to sweep our herorine off her feet at her most vulnerable time.  Hmm indeed. LOL 

Love it!

 Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 06:53 am
Title: Chapter 4

aw, jeez. ana asking to get her ass handed to her.

 Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 10:38 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Awesome Chapter! so many turns and twist 

 

YEAAA!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP


 

 

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 09:27 pm
Title: Chapter 4

oh my god i dunno what to think about nic i ???? ana she just had to pop didnt she! great chappie cant wait for more

 Reviewer: BubbleGum7 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 07:40 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Anatasia is going to get her ass killed by Nic!  Can't wait for Nic to reveal he's the father!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 06:29 pm
Title: The Cast

good, but you should continue writing the scar.

 Reviewer: sailormoon89 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 05:48 pm
Title: Chapter 4

What a mess, I feel sorry for Charly.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 05:10 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update.  I love how you are developing the story.  Please update again soon.

 Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 05:02 pm
Title: Chapter 4

This is getting good... 3 months pregnant? Nic has some explaining to do. And where is Laz..isnt he suppose to be watch Charly?? Slipping on his job.

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 04:20 pm
Title: Chapter 4

This was a very interesting chapter. I think Nic might have to make himself known sooner rather then later. And I think "Ana" is playing with fire and she might get burned but maybe she doesn't care about that but Nic and Laz will and seeing as though Charly will be getting stronger with the demon seed stuck in her womb, Ana better rethink whatever it is she is thinking. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 04:19 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Wow, just wow. Please continue updating this story. I absolutely love it.

 Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter 4

awww man how could they let ana get ahold of her?!?!?!?!? MEN!!!!!! im not liking this whole 'sweet chaos' idea but i have to know what happens next! MORE PLEASE!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 02:37 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Umph what a update!! I hope when Charly puts all the pieces together that she gives Nic exactly what he deserves!!!

 Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 12:29 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Nic should really stop playing games with her like that before she really does lose her mind. 

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 12:16 pm
Title: Chapter 4

O damn! this is getting good! :)

Can't wait for another update.

Thanks for the read.

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 10:39 am
Title: Chapter 4

Yeah, I love the new chapter! I can't wait for Charly and Nic lovin' *wiggling eyebrows*

Great job, pleeassse post soon :-)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 09:55 am
Title: Chapter 4

Well Well Well I wonder if Nic and Laz saw Ana just save Charley's life and now trying to befriend her.

Great update

More please.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 09:05 am
Title: Chapter 4

ca't wait

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2011 08:49 am
Title: Chapter 3

I think Charly's lucky.  Any chance that Sasha gets Laz?! Cause, Laz is hot! ^_^  Or hope I Sasha gets a hottie.  Anyway it's a good story.  I'm all in.

 Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2011 09:11 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I'm soooooo lovin this! please update soon

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2011 03:31 am
Title: Chapter 3

OK Happy..I decided to take a chance on this scarey tale..though I don't like scarey.but I am loving this one!! I love the mystery and the supernatural elements..I love the hawtness very much!

It would appear Charly has bitten off more than she can chew  but how will that all play out..we will se!!

Ok bloody and gore I will run away but for now..I am lovimg this story..great work sweetie!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 08:16 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Nic and Laz both are scary...3 months and then she will have tge devils baby...wow.  Thanks fir a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2011 06:44 am
Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for a great update.  I am not sure if I should be scared or excited for her.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2011 06:32 am


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