damn. this is creepy as hell. LOVE IT!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2011 12:34 am
I have a feeling that lucky Charly is soon to become poor Charly...my goodness Nic is a beast in bed...and probably everywhere else...and he has staked his claim on his unwitting 'vessel'...just three short months...and what in the world will she be bringing into this world...I'm frightened for Charly...who will help her now...
Can't wait to read more...this is sinfully delicious!!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 11:51 pm
Oh, Oh! What demon spawn is Charly having?! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 10:47 pm
At first, I wasn't going to read this because of the demon factor. But those red eyes drew me in. Lol. This is so creepy, but in a good way.
Btw, Kevin may be a complete douche, but he was right about Charley. She was/is boring or maybe just prudish. Good girls can have fun. I'm surprise she did such a quick sexual turn around with Nic. She wasn't drugged, right? Did Kevin just not turn her on?
Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 08:56 pm
Ok Nic and Laz are scary. What are they? Demons, maybe? Anyway Charly is in for quite a ride. I'm intrigued by this story. Anxious for the next chapter. Good story!!!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 07:28 pm
great story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 07:22 pm
This has to be one of the worst things to happen after a one night stand, to be pregnant with a demon! Yikes!!
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 06:51 pm
ooooo who's the guy that plays Lazarus? pretty please?
Author's Response: The guy playing Lazarus is model Ben Hill. He's hot isn't he?
Date: April 08 2011 06:32 pm
OH LOVE THIS STORY. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.
Reviewer: phillyfan Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 05:39 pm
Damn, that was really HOOOTTT!!!! LOL!! Charly got a hot night, but some real crazyness come up, I hope it's some more Nic and Charly hotness that continues on.
Great jobI can't wait for. Ps, I hope Charly doesn't lose her mind getting with pure hot, evilness, LL!!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2011 05:07 pm
Totally loving this story.Poor Charly , she has no idea what she's in for. Can't wait for the next update .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 04:58 pm
No, Charly will need some luck to come her way with the mess she has gotten herself into. Loved the update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 04:31 pm
Hell no! Great update.
Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 04:19 pm
One word: Awesome. Just wow.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 03:26 pm
WOW, this story is INTENSE, it really has CAPTURED my interest... can't wait until Charly finds out who Nic and Laz really are.
Oh and I wonder if Kevin and Nic will ever meet, that would be ever INTERESTING.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 03:01 pm
what a great way to start off this weekend - loving this story, look so damn forward to more!!! thank you!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 02:55 pm
Wow... Nic is a bit off his rocker. This should be fun. More please!!!
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 02:54 pm
Charly is in a precarious situation and I am more worried than anything. I don't think luck is on her side but I'm glad to see a update!!!!
Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 02:28 pm
He is deliciously evil. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 01:20 pm
oh man this is kinda creeping me out but im still lovin it!!!! i dont think shes necessarily lucky but i still wanna know what happens next! more please!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 01:05 pm
My answer to your CEN is no but this is a very interesting story. Charly might enjoy her journey but I'm going to enjoy reading about it.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 11:14 am
i see even after one night he has already changed her role to future queen
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 09:30 am
Hell naw she aint lucky!!!!
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 08:43 am
Loved it! cant wait for more!
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 08:24 am