Love the update!!! BTW I was finally getting around to picking cast members for my little fic and was shocked when I saw that your Sasha is who I wanted my Sasha to look like. Oh well guess I gotta do some hunting to find a replacement.
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 08:13 am
Hot durn this story just gets better and better...
Can't wait for more more more.
Thank U 4 sharing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: April 08 2011 08:01 am
Rosemary's Baby is one of my favorite classics so i am looking forward to reading this story so far so good =)
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 07:55 am
Charly it's to late to run, Nic is no joke. I wish you luck, Is Nic a good angel or bad ass angel. Wonderful story.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 07:53 am
oh snap, charly sure is in for it.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 07:44 am
Wow, if only she knew what was in store for her!!!! Poor thing, her life as she know it is OVER!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 07:19 am
I love this horror story, need a update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2011 01:21 am
oooo whats gonna happen! love it! cant wait for more!!
Reviewer: bubblegum7 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2011 12:44 am
Damn!!! I want more, Charly is definetly lucky.. HELLA luck, well maybe just the hell part for later, LOL!!
Great Job :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2011 07:29 pm
i am loving this story keep the updates coming
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2011 08:13 pm
So, is Nic a demon? Omg, I need more...
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2011 07:09 pm
I really like so far...keep it coming
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2011 06:58 pm
Whoa!!!!! This is turning out to be a good read. I'm a little scared for Charly though. I have to admit though that it is rather unbelievable that she didnt have her phone in the club.
A side note: You tend to repeat phrases/words multiple times within a sentence.That along with the occasional left out word or letter is something to look into. I think correcting these few things may improve the flow of the story.
Author's Response: Thanks you. I appreciate the contructive criticism that will help me grow as a writer. It's much appreciated. Reviewer: MissCO Signed
[Report This]Date: April 01 2011 06:50 pm
So Hot !!! Lucky Lucky Charly .Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2011 04:42 pm
That was hot! Poor Charly doesn't know what she's gotten into with Nic. This is going to be good!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2011 05:11 am
Lucky Charly
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2011 04:27 am
Oh crap!!! What's gonna happen to Charly now??!!! Sort of scary with those flashing red eye!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2011 02:35 am
that was hawt! more please!m76wi
Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2011 01:03 am
woo, hotdamn!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2011 12:32 am
WTF...girl when he is sleep run for the hills.... please update soon
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 31 2011 11:16 pm
Daanngg!! More please
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2011 07:58 pm
You are cold, What can I say. Excellent.........
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 31 2011 06:50 pm