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Title: Chapter 6

This story is SO flipping good..i'm craving more. And wow..what a cliffhanger. I must say though there are a lot of common errors that could be fixed but...I dont let them bother me, lol. If having less errors mean longer wait period chapters then screw 'em, this aint englsh class LOL

But seriously..bang up job!

 Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 03:28 am
Title: Chapter 6

snap!

 Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 06:20 am
Title: Chapter 6

Super update . Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2011 04:09 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Poor Charly; scared and being betrayed by a trusted friend! Makes you wonder how many people Nic has watching his baby mama...

 Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 23 2011 08:21 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Oh wow, didn't not see that coming, Regi is part of Nic's army, who can Charly trust.

I know that Nic is HOT, but he must be DESTROYED.

 Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 08:50 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Love this story poor charly i really hope she finds someone she can trust and saves the world lol she has a lot on her plate. I can't wait for another update i think charly is just the thing to melt nics heart i'll be faithfully checking on this story thanks agian - Amber

 Reviewer: Amber Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 06:55 pm
Title: Chapter 6

oh my god nic is so creepy! i feel sorry for charly i dont actually know what to think! i want this story to be all lovey dovey but i dont think its going that way hahah! great job so glad u updated!!! xxx

 Reviewer: bubblegum7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 05:44 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Oh uh poor Charly...

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 05:14 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I don't think she can trust anyone but herself right now and that's the truth.  But no matter how dire her situation seems I am glad to see a update :) :)

 Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 07:54 am
Title: Chapter 6

Wow, thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 5

Great update.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 05:16 am
Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 05:16 am
Title: Chapter 2

WOW!!! I am not sure if she is lucky. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

Good start to the story.  thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 6

I knew Nic was not to be trusted...and this chapter just proves how dire Charly's situation really is...he possesses her body...now he wants to possess her soul...and she can trust no one...Regi was a nice twist btw...but I still have faith that good will triumph over evil and Nic and his minions will not win...they can't...don't know how Charly will survive all of this...but survive she must...I was thinking that wouldn't it be ironic that the person that Charly thinks she can trust least is really there to save her...what a twist if Laz was her guardian angel...he was created by the Almighty Savior...so he must have some good left in him...I hope so...but I can't wait to see where you take this...

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 6

Charly is going to have to stop being naive, man-up, and do some creative thinking.

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2011 12:20 am
Title: The Cast

I don't know why but I see her friend Sasha as that Angel that maybe able to her save her.

 Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 11:56 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Talk about a perfect story to read on a day like today.

 Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 09:43 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Sorry but I have only just read this story after skipping over it for weeks.  So glad I decided to give the first chapter a read.   I am hooked.  Great writing style, good descriptions of characters and plot (really interesting reading how Nic came to be) and Reggie never saw that coming!  Rosemary's baby comes to mind, who else is working for Nic??? Looking forward to the next update.....hope its soon!?

 Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 09:15 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I knew Regine was too calm. She comes to her distressed and she isn't even worried as to why.  Charly has no one she can trust, unless she goes back to the ex, not.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 09:10 pm
Title: Chapter 6

AWWWWW dang!!! Who can Charly trust???

I do hope she is able to escape... I was liking Nic too... to bad he must go!!

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 09:07 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I really enjoy reading this story. This chapter had quite a few twists in it. I had no idea nick was THAT powerful and the way he became so powerful was very interesting.

Poor Charly it must be driving her crazy to be afraid of a monster that rocks her world. LOL

I knew one of her friends if not all of them had to be working for Nick.

Great chapter can't wait to see how things end.

 Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 07:11 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I could cry for Charly..what a mess she has gotten herself into..this man is worse than Satan!! How can she get out of this mess!! Poor Charly si so innocent and naive...she was just trying to get over her heartache from that jerk!!

It will take divine intervention to help her escape this one...she will need God to send his angels to rescue her!!

My heart aches for her...she has no friends..no one she can depend on..but good has to triumph over evil!! Even the baby is evil!!! Lawd Lawd Lawd!!

Child you got me caught up in this one!!! great job!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 04:38 pm
Title: The Cast

Wow, this is a GREAT story. Charly needs to find a way to redeem herself with God, He's the only one that can help her at this point (He's probably the only one she can trust now).I'm assuming if there're demons, there are

also angels, too? I wish her guardian angel would just swoop in and rescue her; she's so innocent and naive, I really don't know how she got mixed up in this.

 

Oh, snap! Nic killed Lucifer?! Umm, yeah, he's A LOT scarier than I thought he was, but damnit he's so gorgeous! Why, why must he be so fine?!

 

Regi, I knew something was up with her. So much for friends!

 

Oh, and the baby. Wth is Charly going to do with the baby? Surely, she doesn't want to give birth to the Anti-Christ...

 

Please, please update soon! Adding this story to my favs, and you to my fav authors!

 Reviewer: candid confession Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 04:19 pm


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