Freakin' AWESOME!!!!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed
[Report This]Date: May 05 2013 10:41 pm
Yes he free from that hoe bag stacy and glad he kick sam ass. Friends dont' screw the friend girlfriend it just plain nasty. I hope she get into the school so she can have her dream come true. I love jusitn thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2013 02:57 am
Yesssssss!! My favourite story is back!!
Reviewer: megananomous Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 09:44 pm
These crazy kids LOL. Thank you sooooooooooooooooo much for updating. I:m glad they're finally a couple but anxious about what's to come.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 04:39 pm
That was awesome! That ho Stacey got treated! Finally Justin is with the right girl, Helena.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 04:26 pm
Thanks for coming back. Love this story and hope for a happy ending! Looking forward to the next update and hope they stay together.
Author's Response:
Yes finally back lol! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 03:32 pm
Have you written an update yet?
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 02:32 am
I've been waiting for this update. Thank you!
Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 21 2012 03:14 am
Where are YOU!!!!!!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2012 08:26 am
:'-(
Author's Response:
Dont give up on me just been super busy and struggling with this chapter I dont want to dissapoint like I did with the last :)
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 14 2012 10:45 am
I am missing this story tooooooooooooooooo :(
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2012 08:51 am
I really missing this story :(
Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2012 05:57 am
I'm gonna need an update cuz ya know this is my favorite story!
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 09:52 am
Ahhhhhhh I love this story so much I keep re-reading to see if I missed anything and to see if u have updated yet! :)
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2012 10:01 am
thanks 4 the lastest update and i love the new banner!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: June 15 2012 10:40 pm
I think you need to update with more chapters.
Kim
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2012 12:48 am
Reading a new update about Justin and Jalena was just great,I almost forgot about them,I had been looking for an update for so long and didn't recognize the title when I saw it, but I'm glad they're still on your mind,now it's time for a consummation between them already,lol.Justin needs to realize what his heart already knows and have some hot and heavy JuLena time with Stacy plotting to break them up.Enough angst, good loving requested ;))))
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
[Report This]Date: June 03 2012 11:50 pm
In the McDonald's bathroom. He is an idiot but most men are, especially when they think with the other head. Damn.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 11:32 pm
I'm not hating on this story but we're at chapter 25 now and I need something to happen. PLEEEEASEEE!!! Their constant to-ing and fro-ing is do-ing my head in. Fucking teenage angst LOL. On the plus side, reading this makes me appreciate my parents more and grudgingly admit I may have had a touch of madness throughout my high school years. And I totally identify with Becca though girlfriend gets props for getting the jump on hocey before anyone could blink. WooHoo!! I sure as hell wasn't that fast. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Aroha Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 11:24 am
I've been waiting for this update forever!!! I love this couple, when are you gonna put them out of their misery and your fans out of theirs. Let them get together why don't ya!!!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 07:04 am
Thank you for updating. I love this story and was so so so excited to see you had updated. Please continue with this story. No matter what other people say at the end of the day its your story to tell and I m a fan. It takes time and passion to write. So keep it coming.
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 04:19 am
Dear Meme,
Thank you for finally updating what has to be my favorite story on this site. I know that you're a little down about the reviews for this most recent chapter but I like to live but a little credo called "F- them". Seriously, there are more seasoned writers and more polished stories on this site however, this is your story and you're telling it the way and at the rate that you want to. Personally I have few complaints. Yes, Justin is pissing me off by being a douche when it comes to skanks-r-us and I'm holding my breath for when they finally do get it in but I'm also aware that we're talking about teenagers. Who doesn't know a cocky oblivious bonehead who needs to be hit over the head a few times for common sense to assert (or reassert) itself? Anyway, I said all that to say this...keep doing what you're doing and writing from your heart. If you feel the story is not what or where you'd like for it to be then make changes. Because at the end of the day you can always go back and edit.
Still a "10" in my book,
AP
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 03:47 am
I like your story a lot and think your a good writer but I think some people want to see Jalena be stronger. Justin saying he's wants her and then going back to his gf gets tiresome. This story is interesting so I will continue to read it.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 03:32 am
It think that artimiss caine is right. We get heavily invested in our characters and when someone keeps jacking them around we want it to stop and for our fav character to grow pair and kick them to the curb. I liked justin but with how he is acting its like an abusive relatiosnhip. I want you when i want you but i don't want you to move on so I can keep my options open type of thing.
I hate that. I think everyone with an objective point of view hate this. Anyway, congrats that you made these HS kids not to be one deminsional characters.
I think that when you finish the story for us and pick it up again a few months later with fresh eyes you will see that you could have removed some non plot moving or character developing scenes. But you can only do that when you get distance from the story. I say this but I haven't yet got to that point with my own story but I hope I can get there.
It is not easy writing out what is in your head. Congrats on your bravery and for giving us an entertaining and thought provoking story to read!!!
CL
Reviewer: crocuslady Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2012 12:54 am
Don't feel bad about the reviews. I think that they are having an emotional response rather than an actual critique. I think what they are saying is that there needs to be a ponit of catharsis for Justin. He can't just jump from Stacey to his soulmate because the relationship won't make sense and the readers won't believe it. I get they are teenage dumbasses but the relationship has to make sense even if it is on a dysfunctional level. Right now it is not showing that..nothing editing can't fix. Sometimes we get so attached to our work that we don't see that some parts.may drag on and on. Its not to say that the work is bad, just that it needs reorganization. No matter how young, we all have breaking points and usually girls reach it before boys at that age. I think that is what your readers mean by it is getting boring. I just don't think they are seeing it with a critical eye.
I hope this helped. :)
[Report This]Date: June 02 2012 11:20 pm