Thank you for the info. Look forward to the update whenever you get a chance.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2011 06:12 am
I'm glad she was able to tell Nick what she felt at the time. They have a lot to work out but maybe with time they will. Good chapter! More and soon, please!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: August 06 2011 10:17 pm
Thanks OK I know how computers can BREAK on you at the wrong time,.
Update when you can.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 06 2011 01:45 am
I am glad that the problem is fixed. Please update soon.. I love this story
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 06 2011 12:13 am
No problems. Looking forward to reading the next update.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 05 2011 11:34 pm
I'M ALL 4 THE EXPLICIT DETAILS . SO GLAD U GOT THE PROBLEM FIXED I HAVE 2 GET A NEW TOWER SO I CAN PARTICIPATE MORE CAN'T WAIT 4 THE UPDATE
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 05 2011 11:06 pm
Ag no man, i got excited for nothing because there's still no update.
Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]Date: August 05 2011 10:36 pm
I love this story. Please update soon!!!! When are we getting an update
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 30 2011 02:39 am
don't how i missed such awesome story - hope you update sooon!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: July 14 2011 06:13 pm
Ellie, do what's best for you, girl. When she needed Nick the most, all he could do was ask her to get rid of their child. I hope he understands what that really did to her, especially since she lost the baby. That is a life changing event and not something one can just "get over".
Love the story. You're doing a fine job with it.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2011 08:27 pm
im still waiting for the next update. i would like to see nick really open up to elle i dnt know how but he put everything on a plate i dnt know how that could happen maybe elle could be taking to one of his friends and he doesnt like it because they are to firtie or something.i would like to see sexual tension maybe if elle come down in on of his old tops in the morning and start dacning to some music and he wacthing.he cnt stop staring at her or something.
Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2011 12:36 pm
Nick needs to step up and tell his mother and Bianca to stay out of his business. Especially Bianca. More than a sister, she seems like one of those jealous psycho girlfriends. Its sick and getting out of hand. I can understand that she is not happy what Elly did too Nick, but she is acting like everything that had happened to him is all Ellie's fault which its not.
Nick and Ellie both needs to grow up a little bit. Nick comes off as a little bit cold and shows no emotion. But that's just the way he is. And that is what they had taught them. There is nothing wrong with showing no emotion, as long as he lets Ellie knows that he care and show some love is good. Some people are just like that. But that doesn't mean that he doesn't care.
And yes I love sex scene's!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: July 08 2011 10:48 pm
Loved the update. The scenes are ok to me as you've written them. Hmmm, Nick needs to give Ellie some feedback and be truthful.
I'm really not liking Bianca right now. She needs to grow the hell up and stay out of Nick's business. I'm sure she wouldn't like him all up in her business and being a jerk to a guy she was interested in.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2011 06:57 am
Well, here's my 2¢.
I found this story easy to read, and I like the characters. There were a few times where I was confused and had to reread (especially when you used your for you're), but other than that, the plot is great.
Ellie has a right to be upset because Nick was a prick for asking her to get rid of the baby (he got his wish and has to live with that). I can understand-he was caught off guard, but he was an insensitive douche bag.
His mom has a lot of nerve to call Ellie after the way she treated her.
I wonder if Bianca will change positions after she finds out the real reason Ellie walked away.
If I were in Ellie's position, I don't think I would have gotten on a plane to see him, but then again, she still cares for him.
Julienne must have low self-esteem to continue to follow Nick like a lost puppy dog. He is dogging her out in her face, and she is taking that, WOW. Desperate, I say.
I find the whole Mafia thing fascinating, and I do hope Nick and Ellie and work through their issues. I don't like that she lied about having a boyfriend, but she had to protect herself so I don't blame her.
Looking forward to an update.
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 08 2011 06:03 am
I feel some kind of way about this chapter. Not liking his thoughts about the baby. Dude this is not like ordering death against your enemies...this is your own child with the woman you supposedly love. Ellie could have went to the hotel if she really wanted to...she just didn't want to go to the hotel...and deep down wanted to stay at his place anyway.
Can't stand Bianca. And Juliette just keeps trying to hold on to someone that doesn't even want her. Why he went back to her I don't know...what is it with those two? Juliette keeps saying "call me when you're ready for a relationship" or "call me when you know what you want." Just let the boy go. Ugh.
I like the details of the sex scenes in stories...but this wasn't written that way in the beginning so I'm not so sure if they should be written now.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 08 2011 05:27 am
This is getting GOOD, I can't wait to see what Nick has to say.
Oh and I don't know whom I don't like more Juliette or Bianca
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 08 2011 04:51 am
I hope that they get the chance to really talk so that they can both get an understanding of how they both felt and feel. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2011 12:45 am
Elle, Elle, Elle. Elle and Nick does love each other but they need to work on their issues without everyone getting involved. I also understand the uproar and the fact that some want to castrate Nick. Well, castrate is a little strong, but you know what I mean. Yes, Nick was raised to be a douchebag and yes, it is hard to change when you have led a certain path your entire life, but if Nick wants Elle back, which I think he does, he has to open up to her and talk out his emotions. Which I think he is still a little afraid to do. I know, Elle knew Nick was like this when she got involved and she fell in love with him. Nick did not treat Elle badly, but he has a certain coldness and aloofness about him (which I know he can't help either, yeah right, anyone can change if they want to) but that will hurt him more than help him.
Elle has been hurting, I know, but Nick has been hurting just as bad if not worse which we all can see. He sucks at dealing with things, but in his position and based on how he is, who knows what one would do. I am not in any way making it easy on Nick, but he has to knock down some of his pride and if he wants Elle, get her. I do not want them together because of Marta and her tricks, this is something Nick and Elle have to work out on their own. Bianca, she needs to take a chill pill. I know Elle hurt Nick, but hello Nick hurt her too and there is nothing that pisses me off more than when family members get or try to get involved with a couple's business.
And yes, I think if Nick keeps letting his issues get in the way, he is being immature. Is this how he is going to act when the going gets tough? Some one has to be the grown up. I know that Nick has been groomed to do and act the way he has, fine, but if he wants Elle, he has to figure out a way to make it work. Elle cannot change Nick and Nick cannot change Elle, which I don't think he wants to. Elle has to be stronger a do a little growing up too, she now knows the full extent of what Nick does and if she cannot deal, she needs to bounce, which is what she did.
Now the real test comes. What is Nick going to do? Is he going to let his issues, character, and how he was raised get in the way? Is Elle going to be a weakling? One thing I can say for Nick, although he is how he is, he did treat Elle as good as to be expected for his character. I know he loved her and loves her. He also begged her to stay which is something he has never done and then went down hill after that. But that is what I am saying, when times get hard he has to learn to work thru them and so does Elle for that matter. They are both still young and have to figure out how to be with each other if they both truly love and want to be together.
Philipa1234, you definately have created good characters that unleash an array of emotions that has everyone responding in all sorts of ways and to me, that is excellent when you can create characters that seem so real you just want to either hug them or go up and slap them. What's the point in creating characters if you cannot judge them in a good or bad way or have a strong array of emotions about the characters both good and bad? Some emotions are said in anger which is expected and some frustration which is also expected. Your characters shouldn't be so good, lol. Excellent work, girl and keep it coming. I cannot wait for an update.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 10:48 pm
Of course there has to be some sex scenes, they are suspose to be in love no matter what other promblems they are having!!
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 09:44 pm
omg at last a update lol.wasnt very long though i will be waitng for more to come hopeful not that long
Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 08:16 pm
Really love this story. Can't wait to see the direction that it takes.
Would love to see some sex scenes between Ellie and Nick
Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 07:39 pm
Bring on the sex scenes I don't mind. Nice chapter I wish Nick would open up to Ellie. He knows he loves her. Men are so stubborn. Excited for the next chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 06:41 pm
I still don't understand why some people are so against Nick. Nick is hard and cold because of the environment he grew up in. He was raised like that. That is what they taught him. Yes its wrong, but if they raised you like that, its very difficult to change and I think that some people doesn't understand that.
Nick never treated Ellie like dirt. Yes he was a little cold and showed no emotion. But he did love her when they were together. He never cheated on her. Not all guys are all romantic and lovey duffy. And Ellie knew what kind of guy Nick was before she got involved with him. But she still fell in love and chose to be with him.
Nick never told her about his family business because he was scared to loose her and he was trying to protect her. But that doesn't mean that he doesn't care about her. Yes he should have told her, but hey we are human and we all make mistakes.
I don't agree with the way that Nick treated her when she she told him that she was pregnant. But there must be a reason to why he reacted that way. I can understand that Ellie was hurt and that she blamed her miscarriage on him. But the way she ended things was wrong. She should have been honest with him and explain why she is leaving him.
I don't think that Nick is being immature. Yes he is spoiled. But Ellie broke his hart. Everyone handles their heartbreak different. So its not up to us to judge him and say that he is immature.
I also wish that Ellie could be a little stronger and less naive sometimes. She is so weak. When something goes wrong, the first thing she wants to do is run. I do want Ellie and Nick to be together. Its obvious that they love each other. But they still have a lot to talk about. And is Ellie strong enough to life in Nick's world? If he has to give up his profession what will Ellie give up to be with him. It has to be 50/50.
I don't think that Nick expect Ellie to accept what he is doing. If he did, he wouldn't have let her go. He knows that Ellie can't accept his job. That is why he never tried to get her back. So that shows that he does care a lot for her.
Bianca needs to mind her own fucking business and Nick needs to tell her that. I get that she may be a little upset that Ellie had left Nick like that. But really its not her business. This is something between Ellie and Nick.
I don't mind sex scene's. As a matter of fact I love them. Its up to you if you feel comfortable writing them. If its detailed its good, but if not, then write it in a way that the reader knows what is happening. Especially the intimate stuff. So yes I would love some HOT HOT scene's .LOL. But only if its between Nick and Ellie. I don't want to read how Nick have sex with Julliete. ieu!!!
Date: July 07 2011 05:58 pm
Nick's family especially that Bianca makes me want to put my foot up their asses. Ellie had better get a backbone and stand up to them. Nick is acting like a spoiled ass kid and he needs to grow up. I hope Delia comes back to lend some support to Ellie.
Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 05:31 pm