I can't stand Marta, Bianca, and last but not least NICK! I know Ellie is naive, but come on. Her friend on the phone told her right. I do also understand that Elle wanted to set things right for how she left Nick, but to me, she did nothing wrong. Nick knows why she left. She is way to good for him. I know she loves him but he is too reckless and immature. I do believe that Nick does love Elle even though he has a hell of a hard time showing it and doing it. He has such pride and a super large ego. He tries to pretend nothing affects him and at the expense of Elle and her feelings.

So, I take that back that mofo does not love her. He is a coward and a boy. Yes, Nick took it hard that Elle left him, but seriously what did he expect? And I did feel for him just a little because he was raised entitled and doing whatever he wanted at the expense of others, but that does not make it right. Because if Nick wanted to, he does not have to be an assh*ole; he chooses to be one. Nick has no intention of stopping what he is doing. He would expect Elle to do everything he says and to 'Shut up and sit back,' lol.

I mean Elle came down as a favor to Marta the witch and now she has to contend with Nick's attitude and his sister, Bianca's as well. While Marta is being two-faced mustering up a way to get Nick and Elle back together when Elle and Nick are both still sore and raw from the break-up. Screw him and his family and I am sure if she told Nick this, he would look at her without emotion and ask if she was 'done yet' and go try to screw Juliette in front of her. I mean I would not wish harm to them, but I would stay clear of them. I just don't have patience for getting treated like crap when I have done nothing in return. Elle is a sweet woman and people (Nick and some of his family) use that against her. I don't want her to change her personality but just her company, the people she thinks she owes something to.

Nick is cold and harsh and Elle knows this. So, I hope he gives his bullsh*t response and Elle leaves. But knowing Nick he will evade the response and continue to treat Elle like dirt, but not enough for her to leave, but enough to let her know that he is in control and doesn't care what she does including leave. And I am sure Elle is going to take it because she is trying to do the right thing and oh, I forgot he asked her to tell him that she loved him in the hospital which I guess is supposed to mean something. WOW, lol. I wish I would!

GREAT UPDATE!!!!

I feel that you are amazing writer and you draw me into your character which is amazing. However, the storyline has become predictable which I hoping it would not because the story started off so good.

Predictable parts: She is weak (something tragic happens, she runs): wants the Italan man she loves to his change profession but she does not change.  Why?

Why can't she not be the stronger half of him? stand up to his mother, make him respect her, and push is buttons in positive not whinny.

I know this is your vision, your story and you have a clear path for the story ending but please make differnt it from other stories with the same theme.

You are truly talented writer, keep the good work and update soon

omg ive being waitmg for an update

were the long update ive being waiting for ever for it?

Nick's sister could have at least asked to hear Ellie's side of the story before stubbing her. Nick is pretending he doesn't care any longer but it's obvious he does. Just like Ellie still cares for him. I feel for both of them. If only they would communicate with each other. Well done and waiting for the next chapter!

why is everyone hating on Nick. Ellie is the first and only woman that he fell in love with. And he is suffering. Its not an excuse but everyone handle their grieve and pain different. And the way that Ellie broke up with him was mean. She didn't even give him a chance to talk or explain things. She just walked out. If the person you love break things off with you in such a mean way, It will hurt your feelings and you may even get out of control sometimes. Yes he needs to man up and grow up and everything you want. But you have to be in his shoes to understand the way he is feeling and why he is acting that way.

And as for what Nick family's job, everyone is acting like its all his fault which is not. Its not his fault that his family is powerful and that they trade drugs. Its not like he can just up and leave his family and family business because even tho what they do is wrong, its still his family. The people he grew up with. We can say everything that we want about the business being wrong and that he has to stop. But its easy said than done. He is hard and mean sometimes because he was forced to be this way because of the environment he grew up in. Its not his fault.

I do understand why Ellie broke up with him. But she broke up with him in such a mean way. Then there is also how Nick reacted and what he told her when he found out that she was pregnant. He was shocked, but its not an excuse. I still think they could have talked things out if Ellie had gave him a chance to explain himself.

Bianca needs to mind her own business, but if I were in her place I would have done the same. Its still her favorite brother and she loves him, so its understandable.

Now Nick's mom is something else.

Excellent, Nick need to grow up.

What does Ellie mean that they don't work?  Nick and Ellie were working just fine before she meet his family.  They were working just fine before he showed his ass about the baby.   We will finally get to know her true reasons for running away like a punk.  Juliette needs to be banned from the hospital, I don't like her.  Great update.

I can see how much Nick loves Ellie. Even though Marta is crazy she knows Ellie is the best thing for Nick. I hate that nick was mean to her but I do know nick loves ellie. Ellie should watch out for Juliette she is crazy and knows Nick loves Ellie. I hate to say it Marta go to work and get them together

I like the choices it should be interesting. She also needs a guy friend. I am getting excited. Please update soon can we get more than one chapter. Love the story

Seeing Ellie should be a wake up call for Nick but he needs to get his shit together for his own sake and not to get Ellie back She should encouage him to get help but not stay with him I think Ellie and Nick have some growing up to do and it would be better if they did it apart

Marta has no intentions of letting her go, once she gets there.