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Title: Chapter 26

I hope he doesn't take the baby

 Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 03:13 pm
Title: Chapter 26

to be honest I am not really liking ellie I think she is playing with his emotions way too much but i love this story

 Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2013 12:17 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Sorry I didn't review on the other chapters. I actually like Nico..... he can be a jerk but at the same time I think more then half of the problems she caused. Good job.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2013 12:56 am
Title: Chapter 26

Very nice chapter! Are those two ever going to agree on anything?

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2013 04:06 am
Title: Prologue

so far it is very good

 Reviewer: lady nae Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 07:36 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for the update, I hope nick and Ellie can work things out.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 03:41 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy welcome back!!!!!! So glad you updated I really love this story. And I CNT wait  until nick and Ellie get back together!!!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat :)

 Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 05:40 am
Title: Chapter 26

so happy u are back more and soon do not take so long love it

 Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 03:31 am
Title: Chapter 26

I don't even know how Nick and Ellie are going to resolve this problem. Every time I think that they've come close to making up another argument starts. Anyway, I look forward to see how their problems are solved, which ever way you decide to allow that to happen.

Thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 26

Juliette and Ellie were just strange. One loves him, but can't have him; the other has him, but doesn't really want him. Crazy!

Nick is getting on my nerves.

Glad you updated, it has been a minute.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 11:35 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Ellie is both stubborn and stupid!  Nick loves you and that baby please give him a chance Ellie? Her friends are works my nerve, they are supporting Ellie by calling Nick names.  I hope that they can work it out, that baby deserves to have both parents. Ellie is being selfish, although their lives. And the way in which they live it makes it hard to sympathetic. Yet I still love Nick he is cool people for a criminal!  Juliette makes my teeth itch, she knew that Nick wasn't in love with her so why is she so angry and hurt? Juliette is dumb dumb ditty!

I love this story, thanks for updating!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 05:38 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Yay great update...

 Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 04:56 pm
Title: Prologue

I forgot to rate :)

 Reviewer: Fastidious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 06:35 am
Title: Chapter 26

Your story was the first I read on this board.. and then you dissapeared so I assumed it was canceled. I'm glad it's not. 

 

Ellie's a better person then me, I wouldve kicked that hussy out if she came into my place talking crazy. Sometimes she's too forgiving. 

 

I know I'm being selfish, but I don't really want Nick at the birth. Maybe, its because he still isnt in my good graces from his previous actions, idk. I feel like something crazy is going to happen soon. 

 Reviewer: Fastidious Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 26

I am so glad you have updated this story. I love love Ellie I am so happy that Nick is divorcing his wife. His wife should have never went to Ellies apartment. I wanted Ellie to smack juliette. I want Ellie and Nick together. Please update asap

 Reviewer: primesgirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 06:28 am
Title: Prologue

Sometime I wonder how us women think....good chapter, however shhe needs to rethink her pland...She needs to be strong  woman

 

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2013 06:13 am
Title: Chapter 24

Cruella Deville is the one that wanted to hook them up and now she's putting a face O_o that woman is nuts!

Feels bad for Ellie's situation but Nick is determinated to make it work, aww.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2013 05:32 am
Title: Chapter 23

She wants to invite the family O_O O.M.G she got iron balls and a steel brain.

I'm on to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2013 04:06 am
Title: Chapter 22

He had a change of mind that was cute.I want to see how this situation will be handled without anyones being hurt X(

Now everybody knows she's pregnant O_O

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2013 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 21

No! Ellie No! Delia

Delia contacted Nick? O.M.G now Ellie is in trouble.

I'm on to the next chapter!

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2013 02:52 am
Title: Chapter 14

She's trying to be strong so much and failed everytime.

Nice to see each parts expressed themselves... XD

Go get the plan B, Ellie O_O

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2013 02:30 am
Title: Chapter 13

Ouch! That hurts :( What she'll going to do, runaway? I would!

On to the next chapter!

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2013 01:14 am
Title: Chapter 12

It seems that Cruella Deville wants Ellie and Nick together o_O

I like Ellie explanation.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2013 12:47 am
Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

An old woman texting,l.o.l.I would have tortured Marta on the phone XD

That came quit fast, six months after and both parts are in the path of debauchery except Nick is all the way in it.

I don't know what will happen but there better be more drama XD

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2013 11:37 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I did not expected that o.o but with Nick's mother, the business Nick is involved with plus him in jail must have got to her...I thought she was poisoned for second O_o

I don't think a woman would want to bring a child into this o.o well some woman o.o

 

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2013 10:32 pm


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