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Title: Prologue

nico should have told her everything. i hope she gets the courage to tell him about the baby.

 Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2011 03:12 pm
Title: Chapter 7

He could have told her the rest. she had better be careful or she will lose this baby. She needs to come clean as well.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2011 01:50 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I love this story. I'm so hooked!!! Great chapter. The grammar wasn't bad. Please update soon!!! :)

 Reviewer: ALP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2011 10:42 am
Title: Chapter 6

Gosh the updates are sooooo great!!!!

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2011 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 6

Oh oh!! Hope Sammy is ok. Nick needs to tell her the truth soon especially if her life is potentially in danger. Wonder who was doing the shooting???

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2011 01:22 am
Title: Chapter 6

Supreb, Ellie you need to run like hell.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 06:46 pm
Title: Chapter 6

ok great way to start off an engagement party.  Now is he going to tell her his secret or let her go b/c i don't think there is an in between on this one 

 Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 06:03 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Aw man I hope that Sammy is okay but judging by how Gio said that, i really don't think he is. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 05:57 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Wow, Sammy got hit.  Now would be a good time to tell Ellie about his family's mob connection.    I hope that Sammy isn't dead but just shot somewhere non=life threatening.  I so love this story.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 04:07 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Ellie needs to be told, but I am thinging it's not really the Mafia, but something else all together. (:-( please) LOL!!

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 02:39 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Lovin' this story. I like that Nick is protective of her but we know why. Sounds like more danger ahead . Update soon!

 Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 02:20 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update. I wonder who the shotter was aiming for.  Please continue soon!!

 Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 12:03 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I am really starting to enjoy this story
I love how Nick is jealous and protective at the same time with Ellie. I am glad she got to meet some of his friends. I don't like Juliette I have a bad feeling. I hope we get more chapters. Nick needs to explain what he does. I also would like to see her get her own hotel or apartment for a few weeks and get a job and show that he has to be honest. Let him know she loves him but needs some space. I am glad her and Bianca are getting closer. It would be nice if she ran into a friend a male that she has known a long time. Make Nick jealous but the Guy is up to know good. GIRL THIS STORY IS GOOD!!!!!! Please update soon more than one chapter. You are doing a good job.

 Reviewer: Trina Mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 10:12 am
Title: Chapter 6

Wow...um didn't expect guns to be blazing this soon and poor Sammy. He was a real character I could tell from those few lines. :-(  Nick should have a discussion with Ellie VERY SOON.  Like he should have had this discussion even before he propsed to her...to give her a chance to walk away if she wanted to...and WTF is his ex-girlfriend doing at the party?  UGH. I hope he doesn't carry some sort of torch for her.  Were any of her family and friends there? I understand that her family is not in the same city.  

Besides discussing the obvious, I really think they need to have a discussion (if she decides to go forward with the marriage) sbout how they are going to raise their kids.  Very important.  With his family business, I understand they will grow up differently than Ellie just because...but it doesn't mean they should party and drink while being underage like Nick and his siblings did...

 

 Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 07:21 am
Title: Chapter 6

He has no choice but to tell her now, if not she needs to walk away. There can be no secrets.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2011 06:49 am
Title: Chapter 5

Great update!! Glad Bianca and Ellie seem to be bonding. Hope Nico tells her the truth sooner rather than later.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2011 08:04 am
Title: Chapter 5

Excellent

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I'm glad Bianca gave Ellie and chance and that they can head on the path to becoming friends or atleast speaking to each other. I'm glad Nico stood up for Ellie and can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 06:07 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I am glad that Biance apolotgized to her brother and to Ellie.  When is Nick going to man up and tell Ellie the truth about his families business?  I love this story, thanks for sharing your talent.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 05:43 pm
Title: Prologue

Please note, there is no such thing as a "too long chapter"

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 03:42 pm
Title: Prologue

Love your story. Keep up the updating!!!!

 Reviewer: iyc211 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 03:40 pm
Title: Chapter 5

There's something about this story that keeps drawing me in...

 Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 03:26 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Thank ypu for the update....Your story is coming together very nicely and I beginning enjoy the characters internal and external makeup.

 

Great Job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 03:25 pm
Title: Chapter 5

If only mom  would come around, I doubt that will be happening anytime soon. His line of work is dangerous, so he needs to tell her soon. He wouldn't want it on his conscience if something happened to her.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 01:44 pm
Title: Prologue

I wish Nick would be more affectionate but I love how he stood up for Ellie. I can't wait to her family comes. It would be nice if she had someone there she could talk to or a friend that lives there just a thought. I am so glad to see that Ellie and Bianca will try n get along. I can't wait for the wedding n they move in a house and she get her independence. Ellie needs a job. Keep it coming you are doing good with this story.

Author's Response:

Dont worry I've already started writing in a visit from her friends. I think you guys will really end up liking them. 

 Reviewer: Trina Mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 12:27 pm


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