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Title: Chapter 5

Everybody made it out alive!

Now Nick need to face the two important women in his life.

Like what i'm reading so far.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2013 02:18 am
Title: Chapter 4

The family interaction is a mess o.o I don't know how she kept herself composed.

 

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2013 01:37 am
Title: Chapter 3

Whoah at this rate I would've locked myself in the nearest bathroom X(

At least evrybody took the situation as adults...except for B****

I'm on to the next chapter

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2013 12:42 am
Title: Chapter 2

Woah o_o

I see what you're trying to do; more depth and flaws in characters?

Hey it's not always sunny in "engaged'' couples life.

Other than little words missing it's alright a bit.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2013 12:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

I understand Ellie's thoughts about Nick's interaction with Gio's wife.

Being ''nice'' can only last so far XD one time she'll get tired of it.

On to the next chapter...In laws.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 10:15 pm
Title: Prologue

I'm quite fond of the prologue.

Next chapt.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 09:23 pm
Title: Prologue

I got to admit that this story has me frustrated.  Ellie loves Nick and is  having his child. He would have never married Juliette if Ellie hadn't left him.  He told her he would leave the family business or whatever she wanted him to do to be together, which is something she wants. He settled for Juliette knowing that she was a gold digger, who just wanted to be a kept woman.   Now, he's trying to compromise with Ellie because she doesn't want him to divorce  Juliette,  but then she does. Jeezz, what does she want.  This is the classic example of getting in the way of your own  happiness.

 Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2013 02:06 pm
Title: Prologue

update soon love your work

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Date: January 26 2013 12:53 am
Title: Chapter 25

Please for the love of God update soon. Please tell me that Nick and Ellie end up together. I need to know if they end up together. I want themto be together. Screw Juliette. Ellie knows she still loves him. They need to be together. Please update soon. I'm loving this story. It's 4am, and I couldn't put it down.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 10:04 am
Title: Prologue

I too am lost. This story started great. But now, I just don't know. What is the deal with Nick and Juliette???????? I just don't get it at all. If he doesn't love her, don't care about her feelings and can't even stand her. THEN WHY DID HE MARRIED HER?????? Why did he even get back involved with her when he and Ellie broke up? I mean he did drugs, slept around with countless of woman and even slept with Ellie while he was still in a relationship with Juliette. And now he even married her. What is the point in this. Don't tell me its because of business or because they want revenge on Juliette family and what not. That is just so outdated. I just don't get the characters of this story anymore. Its all over the place. Nick loves Ellie yet he treats her like dirt. He wants her to be his mistress while he is still married with Juliette and the list goes on. I don't think that I'm the only one who thinks this either. But yeah, what ever!!

 Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 25

I'm happy to see an update for this story. I need for Nick to put up or shut up. Why is his divorce contingent upon Ellie being with him? I'm still salty with him from a few chapters ago when he was sexing Juliette in the next room. That's some bullshit right there and Ellie's a better person than I.

 Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 11:56 pm
Title: Chapter 25

Short but an interesting chapter. Nick needs to decide if he wants te wife or Ellie. I'm glad Ellie is being strong in resisting Nick.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 05:11 pm
Title: Chapter 25

Too short but still great update. 

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:21 pm
Title: Chapter 25

What?  I am so confused by this story that it is driving me crazy.  It started of wonderful but somewhere along the way I got lost.

why would he marry a woman he does not want?

I am just lost

 

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 09:46 am
Title: Chapter 25

The situation between these two seem absolutely hopeless. I cant stand it.

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Date: October 22 2012 07:51 am
Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the great update!

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 05:50 am
Title: Chapter 25

Please update soooon, the ending was sooooo abrupt! Great story nevertheless!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 04:30 am
Title: Chapter 25

I loved the update!! I hate the circumstances Ellie and Nick are in. I cannot stand Nick half the time and his little suggestion made me want to *itch slap him. He is married. Does he expect Ellie to just be okay with that and be a side kick? Okay, I know Nick loves Ellie in his own way, but it is not good enough. When he said 'I do,' to someone else he LOST the privilege of all that is Ellie. She deserves so much more. I am glad Ellie has realized she has a backbone and decided to use it. She is going to need it. Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:46 am
Title: Chapter 25

I hate Nick right now. He wants to have his cake, and a chocolate sundae. I'm happy she didn't fall for it again. He needs to get his wife situation in order before she can even entertain the idea of dealing with him again.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:45 am
Title: Chapter 25

Just go ahead and divorce Juliette as you don't love her anyway and you never have.  But you would rather continue to hurt Ellie, just to prove that you can still get her.  Ellie you did push Nick away, saying that love wasn't enough.  Nick got married mighty fast and that had to hurt Ellie.  I so love this story, but I am waiting for both Ellie and Nick to wake the hell up.  Please tell me that it will happen sooner rather than later.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:21 am
Title: Chapter 25

I am so glad to see an update. I am glad to see Solid stand firm. Great chapter please update ASAP

 Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2012 02:20 am
Title: Chapter 24

Nice update.

I hope they get back together soon.

 Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2012 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 24

I think Nick made a hasty decision marrying Juliette. He didn't love her so why did he settle?  Juliette is a fool for marrying him...the way he cheats on her.  *Shakes head* at Nick's family.  They sure are treating the mother of Nick's child coldly. Nina is such a sweetheart and Gio is cool.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2012 03:37 am
Title: Chapter 24

Ellie knows she wants Nick. Stop being difficult and be with him. Terrific chapter!

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Date: August 01 2012 02:01 am
Title: Chapter 24

Another update, yes!!!!  Nick continues to frustrate me, why did he married that ho in the first place?  If he were honest with himself he would admit that he has never been in love with Juliette.  All Juliette was sex, not even good sex because there was never any love involved.  If he wants to convince Elle to give him a chance he needs to divorce the gorgan and quit the family business.  Handle your business, becasue on her own she will never give you another chance.

Nick, my grasshopper, you must show Ellie through actions that you are serious about being a family.  That is only way to convince Ellie and win her over.  Delia works my last nerve, Ellie doesn't have to tell you jack.  What ever is happening between her and Nick is none of your business!!

Great as usual!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 11:07 pm


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