Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

Congrats to your son and his soon to be wife. May God bring them many years of wedded bliss! Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2011 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

Congratulations and thanks for the update!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

this was a teaser but something 2 wet the appetite. Congrats on son Wedding hope ur gainin a nice daughter until next

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 09:28 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

Whowee Dem is showing himself.  I hope he gets a handle on this soon, that someone can get through to him.  And congrats to you son on his wedding!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 09:07 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

powerful chappie thank you for it, i hope your sons wedding is a wonderful one have a great weekend be safe and see ya next week cyn~

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 08:49 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

Appreciate the heads up on update anticipating a comtinued great read.

 

Have a wonderful time and blessings to the Bride and Groom.

Reviewer: Luv2Read Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 08:38 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

Congrats on your son's wedding! Thanks for the update! Great as always!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 08:34 pm

Title: Chapter 20 Rebuilding After The Storm

dem is really battling with the horrific news his talk with gerald was so heartbreking  but like a true good man that gerald is he wanted to let dem know that he loved him and that he was still his farther....ok seleah and joseph are just wonderful i love how he is trying to build his loving relationship with seleah i am glad that she is going back to church with joseph by her side thank youuu for another fantastic update will be waiting for your return next week enjoy your son's wedding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2011 08:09 pm

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

more please.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2011 09:46 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Okay...I usually don't review on workdays...but I read this last night and I just had to come on and comment...the reveal was even more painful and heart-wrenching than I could have imagined...so much pain...the nerve of Bernard Walker...as if his "hush" money would wipe away the destruction that his sick, depraved father has wrought...I was so angry for Seleah...how dare he...to "protect" his mother...a woman who had to know just what kind of monster she was married to...to save her "reputation" and their family's "good" name...the truth needed to come out...though I ache for Dem and Seleah...poor disillusioned Dem...feeling so hurt and betrayed...but I do know that time heals all wounds...some are just deeper than others...I got physically sick picturing that sick bastard Walker crowing like a peacock after just raping a young child and washing himself with satisfaction...death was too good for him...the sick puppy...I have no words for what I want to do to him and others like him that do such unspeakable, despicable things to children...

I'm glad that Joe was there for Seleah...for so long she's carried this burden ...now is the time to lay that burden down...I know she feels like she's lost her son...but I have faith in Dem...he'll come around...eventually...hopefully sooner rather than later...and poor Marri...besides feeling ill about Walker did to her...she has to be feeling some type of survivor's guilt...now knowing the truth about just how much her sister sacrificed for her...they do all need counselling...this was such a painful, yet powerful update...I look forward to what comes next...and congrats on your son's upcoming wedding...you'll be the belle of the ball as the proud mother of the groom...keep the updates coming...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2011 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

That was a powerful chapter. I'm trying not to cry and I did good while I was reading this update.

If you can find out about someone's past then you will know about...I guess certain pecuilar quirks or hang-ups they might have right now. About Amaris, now that we know that the pastor DID molest her at a young age, could that be the real reason outside of her seeing the women in her family screw all day long?

I think it is. I hope everyone can begin their healing soon, especially Seleah and her son. Thanks for sharing this masterpiece.

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2011 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Am I suppose to be in tears reading this chapter?!  This story is great.  Keep up the great work.

S

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2011 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

I've read this chapter with tears streaming... gone away and come back to read again and holding my breath because the tears are sure to stream again and I'm supposed to be working! I'm happy the truth has set Seleah free but sad that the truth affects the many, especially her and her son.. you're an awesome writer Brenda and I look forward to the many chapters coming (noticed many... coz just don't want it to end)...

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2011 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Tears running down my face! I am hurting foe Dem and Saleah but the truth is out and Now everyone have to find a way to heal.



Author's Response:

Healing is gonna come.  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: CJHill Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 08:21 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Wow, that was very emotional.  Poor Seleah and Damaris.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Now that it's all out, healing is coming.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 07:14 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Ahhh! The truth has finally surfaced and what in the world was Bernard thinking when he thought he could pay her off to keep that secret. Leah needed to purge that vile like Amaris did all on the kitchen floor.

Like Paula said Mrs. Walker had to suspect that he was doing something but turned a blind eye and Dem may not be the only prodoct of his betrayal. The man was sick beyond what I intially thought to to go after a child because your son was interested in her WTH!?!

Joesph is correct they need to get some couseling. Joe asked Leah to marry him, I like that but again I am like Leah, he is still in school and he lives with his brother in another state mind you.

All of Leah's encounters have been practically forced on her Joe was the first feel good and sista girl was about 2 hac the big O but with never having one she thoght she had 2 go.

Dem poor baby was and is so hurt> He needs 2 stop thinking he is like the pedophile that sired him it's not a disease that is herditary baby it can't be passed down to your offspring. He needs time and I hope he will forgive his mom for not telling him and his father Gerald as well.

Thank you for the update. Patiently waiting for more.

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Thundakat.

Joseph asked Seleah to marry him to let her know that he is seriously committed to their relationship. 
They are not going to run off an elope, however.  LOL.

Dem is hurting, but he just needs some time to take in all that he has learned.  He will be alright.  Next chapter, he will have a conversation with Gerald Jackson and hear his side of the story.

More is coming soon.

P.S.  Wedding week is here and I doubt if I will write anything after Thursday.  I will probably resume either that Sunday or Monday.  I pray the weather is good cuz it's an outdoor wedding, though they have a backup!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 06:48 am

Title: The Cast

hey gurl that was deeeeep very hot intense & eye opening & I bleive that rev. wife .n fact new about her hubby but chose 2 ignore & pretend & 4 banard 2 offer money 2 stay quiet shameful. Glad the truth & secret is finaly out hopefully Seleah excepts Joe's proposal

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Damn Joseph, how waiting for Seleah to begin going to therapy first.  You just met the woman, and she is not ready to give you her heart yet.  This is so awesome.  I can't stand that Bernard, your father raped her as a child and you are worried about your momma.  Joseph should have stomped in his head!!

 



Author's Response:

Joseph was just trying to show his commitment to her because he could tell that she thought that he was going to break it off.  He doesn't expect her to marry him right now because they both still have to learn about each other and deal with their individual demons. 

Thanks for the review. 

More is coming soon.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 05:23 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Oh I hope that old man burn in hell for his sins! How dare his son offer money to keep it quiet! Joe & Leah can't get married before Julian & Amaris or Tam & Daniel!

Author's Response:

Those two aren't ready to march down the altar yet. Joseph just wants her to know that he's committed.

More to come soon!

Reviewer: ms dimples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 04:49 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Wow I understand what Selsha son feels I asked god all the time why did it happen to me why did I have to be hurt in such a cruel way. I still look for answers. I hope he talked to his mom and understand that she loves him and why she kept quiet all that time. I'm glad that she has Joe to help her heal. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 04:03 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

I am so hooked,,,,update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

OMG!!! Its like I just took a deep breath I have been holding forever!!!! I feel like I can breathe again and I'm crying and I am so glad that Seleah was able to finally get all of this off of her chest and that Dem does not do anything stupid and realize that his mother was a terrified child who was incapable of coping with what happened.  Great update Brenda, you never disappoint!!!!

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

I feel so sorry for Dem. His world is crumpling right infront of his eyes.

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

I'm so proud of Seleah for finally revealing the truth and also turning down Bernard's hush money. Eventhough she in a financially burden she has enough dignity to refuse his money. 

 



Author's Response:

No amount of money could relieve her of the burden she was bearing.  She was ready to let it all out.

Reviewer: Andreas Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Bernard's an idiot to believe that a 12 year old CHILD could seduce a grown man. He may have been confused as a child when he first found out but after becoming a man how could he still feel the same?



Author's Response:

Bernard does know better, but a part of him still wants to blame Seleah.  All he cares about is protecting his mother from finding out.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Venus Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 02:23 am



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