Title: Chapter 17 The Truth Will Make You Free II

You are preaching to me. The Lord once told me that I was trusting him in other areas, but not a mate.

Man you got me praying up in here! God bless you for keeping it real! I love all your stories thus far and I always come away with a new level of trust in God.

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  God always does better than what we ask for.  We just think we know better than God a lot of times.  I still struggle in that area. (We all do).  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2011 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 17 The Truth Will Make You Free II

Wow so he going to take her out on a date that nice I can't wait to see how the date goes. I'm glad that he listen to God you know sometimes when we pray for things it right in front of our eyes but we are to blind and stupid to realize it. I think they are ment for each other and make a cute couple. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2011 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

Thanks for a great update.  Seleah and Joseph know how to draw blood from each other.  When they do get together it will be explosive.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2011 02:30 pm

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Thanks for a great update.  My goodness so Seleah and Joseph very odd combination but I think that they could work. 

Seleah secret is getting ready to be blown out of the water.  I wonder how Demaris and the rest of the family will react to this new information....

I was LOL at Daniel taking the Viagara.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2011 02:11 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

Joseph is a gonna. Loved the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2011 07:49 am

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

I love how Joesph called her out and she did the same for him. I hope these two get together and be happy because weather they no it or not they are ment to be together. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 11:04 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

I can't wait to see what happens between Joseph and Seleah!!!! It's getting really exciting now!!!

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 10:48 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

I really love this chapter....

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 07:30 pm

Title: The Cast

Thank you!

And I have no doubt that Jules along with Amaris will have to add referee to their list of qualities especially if it's dealing with their sister and brother Seleah and Joe and their new relationship and unknown to them it is a relationship. *Grin*

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 07:09 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

I like how Joe did not take the bait of Seleah not in that instant anyway.  He wants a relationship outside of sex and that is so what Seleah needs a relationship a loving and kind relationship with a man again she still can't see the forest for the trees but she will learn and so will Joe.

Marri love and desire herself some Jules :D

I like how Jules wants to create a bond with the boys and be that positive role model for the boys which they so need as well.

Great update on my B-day! More please.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Happy Birthday!  Hope it's a great one.

Yes, Jules wants to have one big happy family.  He might have to play referee to Joe and Seleah, though.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 06:29 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

It would seem that Joseph gave Seleah some food for thought, but we all know that she will ignore those words.  I love Julian he is such a good and he really loves Amaris to put up with her crazy @$$ family.  Maybe this week will allow Seleah to see men in a different light.  Maybe she will begin to see that not all men are users.  At least I hope so and I hope that finally decides to get some help to deal with being molested as a child.  SHe won't be able to move on until she does.  Her life won't improve until she does!!  Most excellent Brenda, you rock!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 05:42 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

Seleah and Joseph gonna keep running run eachother until they RUN right into eachother and when that happens...OOHH WEEE! Now I want to see how Julian and the nephews take to eachother. As always a great update. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 02:57 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

well well the sparks R flying 4 joe & Seleah N more ways than1the lord is answering prayers sopme acknowledged others still wondering now its time 2 C what this week brings forth now that the wheels R turnin hopefully closure truth 4givenessaa& closeness all around

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 02:53 pm

Title: The Cast

I'm glad that Joseph turned Seleah down because if he didn't he would be just like the other men in her past.

Reviewer: Venus Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 02:05 pm

Title: The Cast

Julian is such a thoughtful man. When he sees that there is a need for something, he just tries to help and doesn't worry about whose job it is.

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 01:57 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

when these two finally get intimate, it's gonna be HOT!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 01:48 pm

Title: Chapter 16 The Truth Will Make You Free

Damn it i need much more of this budding fighting and loving going on between joseph and selah i absolutly adore this story!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 01:38 pm

Title: The Cast

Author's Response: Everyone would like great sex all the time, but in reality there are times when each partner may fall short in some way.  No one is good all the time except in stories (lol) so I wanted to put a bit of reality in there.  I've read stories where men have come back immediately after the first sexual encounter and I said to myself, "Hmmm, how come I always have to wait a bit for him to recover?"  LOL.  So I have to put some reality in there every now and then.  LOL

 

Thundakat: Gurl aint that the true...say it! say it! preach sista! just experienced that recently.  Anyway Jules aint never lied when he said he created a monster.   LOL!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 07:54 pm

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

great chapter.  I really, Really love your story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

I can't wait for your talented words to bring those two together. Right now they seem to far apart and want nothing to do with each other emotionally, but since they were meant for each other, there will be no running.

He's going to heal her disturbed soul, and she is going to be exactly what he needs. They are both judging the book by its cover, but once they start reading each other, there will be no turning back.

I love this story. Next please

Author's Response:

Yes, it's going to take some work to bring those two souls together, but it will happen!  Thanks for your review.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 11:37 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Well sweet Joesph be careful what you pray for you might just get it. She has been dropped in your lap so to speak then again maybe not quiet yet cause you can't recognize it yet and still a bit in denial.

Seleah may believe she doesn't have faith or the strentgh to have faith any more but GOD still has faith in her and is still with her and sent both her to Joesph and him to her.  Now they need to get it together and bring all this hurt for Leah to the foreground and start healing even for Dem.

I feel so hurt and sad for Seleah she needs to talk to someone. I don't think that Amaris would be judgmental of her nor that her mother or her sisters would look at her differently or hate her though they were poor and had their own way they have always been close until that shit raped Leah. There is nothing that can be done about or to him now he took a child's life and turned it all to hell.

I take it that Bernard is one of Dem's older brothers and you know what they say about the world being small well there you have it. Who would have thought out of all the barber shops in the world he would have chosen the one his brother frequented.

All sookie sookie now....Danny had gotten his ju ju back with a little help from the little blue pill Tamara sista it's on and popping.  LOL

Thank you as always for a wonderful update.

Can't wait for more

Happy writing



Author's Response:

Thanks ThundaKat for the lengthy review.  LOL.  Don't we do that all the time?  We ask God for something, and we already have the answer all made up in our mind, but God always has better for us than we can even imagine for ourselves.  He knows just what we need.  LOL. 

Joseph's prayer has been answered, but there's always a road you have to travel first and Seleah needs something more from a man than just sex. 

Everyone would like great sex all the time, but in reality there are times when each partner may fall short in some way.  No one is good all the time except in stories (lol) so I wanted to put a bit of reality in there.  I've read stories where men have come back immediately after the first sexual encounter and I said to myself, "Hmmm, how come I always have to wait a bit for him to recover?"  LOL.  So I have to put some reality in there every now and then.  LOL

Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 09:03 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Feeling bad for Seleah! Looks like Dem is gonna find out some things on his own. I hope it doesn't mess with his head. Hope Seleah finds some peace. Glad Daniel got his groove back!!

Author's Response:

I know...we see the train wreck coming, but Dem is stronger than Seleah thinks.  He's no longer a child (he keeps telling her this), but you know how Moms can be.  She does love Dem, she's just conflicted because she has never dealt with what happened to her.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 08:19 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Wow daniel just made me think of penut butter and jelly in a whole new light lol. Omg so people are looking at ameris sister son and know the truth. I hope she tell her son before he find out. thank for the update.



Author's Response:

LOL That peanut butter and jelly thing just came to me while I was writing.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

So Demaris is about to discover the truth. I hope some good comes from this. Like Demaris finding relatives and more importantly, Seleah getting help.

Reviewer: Venus Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 03:26 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

It good to know that Daniel can talk about his problem with Julian. At least he felt better knowing that other young men may sometimes have the same issue.



Author's Response:

Men don't like to admit their shortcomings in the bedroom especially to other men.  Daniel and Julian have been friends a long time and they are comfortable letting down their guard around each other.  Truth be told, all men fall short every now and then, they just don't like admitting it.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 03:22 am



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