Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

So Joseph is looking for a sign from God to send him a woman. And he doesn't want to believe it could be Seleah. Those to a going to bump heads a lot because both seem to have jumped to conclusions about the other. It's going to be fun to read.

Reviewer: Andreas Petrovic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 03:12 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

I'm al little confused. Seleah is having sweet dreams of Joseph but Amaris wakes her from a nightmare. What gives?



Author's Response:

Like most dreams, Seleah remembers parts of the dream and parts she doesn't.  Her dream of Joseph was mixed with dreams of what Walker did to her.  I didn't want to elaborate too much on the Walker part because I didn't want to push the boundaries too much with details as this sight does not allow stories of sex between an adult and a minor.  I wanted to tell her story, but not go into too much detail to honor the Chambers rules.  Thanks foryour review!

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 03:06 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

HAHAHAH...OMG that was awesome. Look at Tam and Daniel making a PB&J. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

How cute and oh so traumatizing. Seleah's secret is about to come out and soon.

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2011 12:19 am

Title: The Cast

The dream sequence was so sweet...i felt myself tear up...so many walk around carrying this kind of pain...I hope she finds the solace she needs...maybe she will sing again...great chapter

Reviewer: IRlover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2011 10:53 pm

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

Shit is about to hit the fan, Seleah ain't ready for the truth to come out but it will.  When the truth comes out it won't be pretty, but everyone will understand Seleah's major malfunction.  Daniel is too funny, a peanut butter condom!!!  I rolled.  I am so happy that they are working it out.  But it was stupid to take someone elses viagra.  Brenda you have made my day!!



Author's Response:

LOL a friend of mine told me that she came home from work and found her husband sitting inthe bedroom (uh where else couldhe go, they have kids!) and he was hard as a brick because he tried out a viagra pill.  The man has no sexual malfunctions!  She was dumbfounded and she said he was hard all evening andthe rest of the night.  LOL and he was lucky that it went down by morning.  Yall know I don't have that much imagination.  Reality is so much better.  LOL

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2011 08:41 pm

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

oh my gosh i am loving the pairing of seleah and joseph that will be some fighting and loving!! ok damn what a samll world dem meeting a group of men that says he looks just like a walker damn please let seleah tell before dem find out the horrible truth from someone else whoo as always your writing is super superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2011 08:18 pm

Title: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

lmao, viagra??! i'm feeling really sorry for Dem, looks like he's about to hear some bad news. i'm wondering how much Paula is going to go off.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2011 07:27 pm

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

Children should NEVER carry the SHAME of such dispicable acts against them but yet they do. Seleah needs to come clean because she is letting the secret eat her up, and she doing more damage than good. I wish the SOB hadn't died because that does not seem like a just punishment; he good the easy way out in my opinion.

I know Joseph likes to eavesdrop on Julian and Amaris' conversations so he's going to be the one to show her what she has been missing out on and how to love herself.

Traumatic experiences don't have to ruin someone's like indifinetly. This is a very sore spot for me. I HATE when men take advantage of little girls.

PLEASE TEACH YOUR GIRLS HOW TO TELL AND WATCH THEM FOR SIGNS OF WIDTHDRAWS FROM FAMILY; THAT'S A SIGN THAT SOMETHING IS WRONG. SELF DESTRUCTION IS ANOTHER SIGN.

Great message!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  You are right on point.  Both boys and girls have to be educated.  It's so sad that there are adults out there that ruin children's lives.  Thanks again for the review.  More is coming ....

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2011 11:28 am

Title: The Cast

No never could hate you.  You keep me entertained and on the edge of my seat and talking to the screen.  I know crazy right.

Girl yes 12hrs is a bit much...ok know that I know the 411 I will try to hold my mule on bothering you about an update.

Congrats on a new daughter in law

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2011 02:48 am

Title: The Cast

I love the direction you are taking this story...I hate when a character is one-dimensional....Everyone has layers...some good, some bad...Seleah and Joseph didn't see it coming...but i love it...lots of fire

Reviewer: IRlover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2011 01:21 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

OMG! No wonder Seleah acts the way she does she was trumatized and by a man that was suppose to be a man of God.

Seleah should have told her mother she would have believed her but when you're a child and you have trust in someone and they betray that trust especially someone in his position it's hard to comprehend when you're a child and believe and have faith.

Seleah needs cousnelling and Joseph has an interest their and she him but she so hurt that she can't see the forest for the trees.

Dem needs to know to his true parentage and get counselling as well because I can only image that is going to be hard on him.

Mr.  Walker got his just deserve and I hope he is suffering in brimstone now.

Thank you for the update....I need more please...

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Hey Thundakat:  Yes Seleah should have told her mother, but she blames herself some.  Thanks for always giving me in depth reviews. they really get my juices flowing.  I'm going to get started on the next chapter tonite, but I doubt if I finish it.  12 hours a day can be a killer!  Plus I have my son's wedding on the 1st so this week and next week are going to be stressful and busy.  However, I will attempt to update at least once or twice.  Don't hate me if you don't hear from me much especially next week!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

Deep Chapter... I now can see why Seleah is the way she is, being MOLESTED at a young age by not only  MINISTER, but he was a well liked man as well... she really needs to finally TELL her family EVERRYTHING that happend to her, and maybe someone can get her to see that what happened to the Reverend was NOT HER FAULT... she thinks that she doesn't deserve love and that somehow maybe God is punishing her, and that is not the TRUE at all.

I do hope that her and Joseph become friends b/c they seems to be exactly what the other needs.



Author's Response:

You are right on point, Lady Liberty.  Seleah has a lot of conflicting emotions.  She loved church and she looked up to the Rev. and she trusted him.  She is carrying around the burden of feeling that she caused his death and she feels guilty about that.  She feels betrayed by God as well as the good Reverend.

Thanks for the review.  More is coming...

 

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

More please..update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 10:33 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

So Joseph and Seleah are attracted to each other. I did not see that one coming.

Reviewer: Venus Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 10:19 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

This explains why Seleah is the way she is. That's a huge load for her to shoulder on her own. Amaris will probably figure it out before Seleah reveals the truth. Poor Demaris. I hope he never knows the truth because it may destroy him.

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 10:17 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

I am shocked by what happened to Seleah.  This explains why she is so angry with her sisters.  Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 08:20 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

oh my damn what a terrible sick thing that happen to little seleah damnit that sicko piece of trash reverened forever scarred seleah against men wow just shocking loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

Loved the update. Feel sorry for Seleah. She needs to talk to someone. Hope she finds love eventually. Maybe Amaris may figure out the truth and try to help her.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 06:10 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

ooh the plot thickens. I can't wait to see Seleah and Joseph's story

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 05:52 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

well dang you had to go and make me feel sympathy for seleah. i was perfectly fine disliking her.  i still cant feel too much sympathy though, she's an adult now and should have changed her way of thinking. i feel worse for dem. having a mom who loves and resents you and not having a clue as to why. i hope those two do some bonding and get that mother/son relationship that they should have had all along after the truth is revelated.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately victims of child abuse cannot change themselves. They need help in order to stop their own self destructive behavior.  Seleah knows this, but she's afraid to tell anyone what happened to her, so the cycle continues.  You can keep disliking her if you want, that's ok.  LOL.  However every negative person has something in their past that made them that way.  Until they face what they've been through, nothing will change.  Thanks for the review.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

Poor Seleah. It's good for her that her past is coming out so she can get help, but I feel bad for Demaris when he finds out.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

Another damn winner...OMG Seleah! It just like how my grandma used to say. There is always a story behind a frown. I hate dirty old men...God snatched his trifling tail quick fast and in a hurry.

I hope that Seleah can find a way to truly heal, maybe she can do it with Joseph while they're tossing insults at each other. Thanks again for the great and tear-jerking update!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 03:42 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

Wow, she was raped and and didn't tell her momma.  Reverand got exactly what he deserved, although his death was to quick and not painful enough.  Pedophile deserve the worst death that there is.  Seleah needs to get help, counseling would help her.  She doesn't love herself and doesn't think that she deserves the love a man.  Although that doesn't explain why she is such a user.  You made those choices but you resent your sister for your choosing to sacrifice yourself.  This chapter was amazing and made me empathize a tad bit for Seleah.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I have learned that everyone is the way they are for a reason.  Seleah does need some help.  As she says, she uses before others use her.  It's sad, but I guess it's her way of coping.

More to come soo!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

omg so that why her sister act the way she does. It so sad when sick adults hurt kids Iknow how she feels because it happen to me as a child.  I hope she tells someone other wise it will eat at her sould trust me. thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks WWE:  I hope that you are better.  Seleah does need some help.  She can't change on her own.  She doesn't want Dem to know so she keeps quiet.   That's not the answer.  It's going to come out...but not the way she expected.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2011 03:29 am



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