Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I'm glad Tam & Daniel finally got back together. They were so miserable apart. I wonder how he'll react to the news of her pregnancy?



Author's Response:

Tam and Daniel were both miserable apart.  They are in love, but Daniel still has to deal with his issues.  I am sure he will be a happy Papa.  Thanks for the review.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 06:13 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

More and more I am disliking sista girl Seleah...she is a money grubbing, jealous, trifling trick.  She can still get child support for Dem with him continuing his education heifer but even if not before the child support stopped she still had her hands out.  She had the same opprotunities afforded to her as Ameris she just lazy as hell.

:D Jay and Mark still together that is wonderful see at least the two younger sisters are making it do what it do and are with good men. :) Yeah!

Daniel couldn't take it anymore he came and got his woman even if it was 3am in the morning.  She has told him that she is pregnant I can't wait to see his reaction and Jun knowing him will probably question it but oh well get over it papa sun she having your grandbaby

Great update as always

Thank you

Happy writing...



Author's Response:

Ah, well Seleah doesn't see it that way. LOL.  Amaris knows she is lying about the child support which is why she called it and Seleah got mad!  You called Seleah lazy, but remember she has a PART TIME job at the Dollar General.  She feels that is sufficient and whatever else she needs, others need to step up to the plate.  LOL.  

 

Believe me, I've lived it!  I know of someone who charged their mother to take her to the grocery store.  Mom could not go unless she paid them gas money and then the mom would call my house asking for the money.  Then after she was taken to the store, the person who charged her would come over and help eat the food she bought.  Of course the money and food always ran out before the end of the month and these were GROWN CHILDREN doing this.  Mom just couldn't say no to them, but she could call my house asking for money to tide her over until the end of the month!

I could write a whole book on people like Amaris family.  LOL.  

Thunderkat, you are on point as always.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 06:12 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I think that Julian was right about Mrs. Wilmington. She seems to be reliving her past believing that Amaris will get hurt like her. I'm sure that Amaris was very disappointed by her reaction.



Author's Response:

Mrs. Wilmngton is sixty years old and she has seen a few things.  She came up in a time where such unions were not acceptable.  I think she feels that Amaris is going to be hurt.  She doesn't have children of her own, and was like a second mother to Amaris.  

Amaris is disappointed.  

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ceece Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 06:03 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I know Julian is being nice! But I have a family like this! Amaris is better then me! I wouldn't allowed none of that! Great read can't wait til the next chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Most of us have family like that!  I could write a book!  LOL!  Julian is just trying to make a good impression on her family.  Don't worry, Amaris is going to keep the sharks at bay.  LOl.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ms dimples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 05:44 am

Title: The Cast

Thank goodness you can't pick your family because Mari's folks aren't ready for primetime. But that is what makes them sooo real too. I think all of us have at least uncouth cousin, crazy aunt or strange uncle in the attic:). Nice update.

Reviewer: nodrivel99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I don't like that bitch Seleah!!!  Now I've got that off my chest I feel so much better.  Tam what a way to tell the man that you are pregnat, but has she been to the doctor yet?  Seleah is user and I do hope that Julian doesn't fall the banana in the tail pipe.  That ho needs to woman up!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  You must know a Seleah type.  I'm glad you feel better.  Yes, the girl is a piece of work to be sure.  She is jealous of her little sistah!  Tam has an appointment coming up.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

well mrs wilmington threw me for a loop. wasn't expecting her to give amaris a hard time. saleah...smh trifling with a capital T.  Julian better stop handing over money before she has his number on speed dial and they'll both be broke together. lol



Author's Response:

Julian is trying to make a good impression on her family.  LOL.  Amaris is going to handle him.  Believe that!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

OMG, that's all I can say. Like the bit about Tyler Perry!

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

another excellent update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 04:06 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

lol omg amaris mom is a trip lol talking about can you lay that good pipe on my daughter lol crazy but she keeps it real. Her sister how can I say this she a real bitch lol and trust me I understand how amaris feel about her family have crazy ones like that in mine lol. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 03:51 am

Title: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I'm mad Mrs. Wilmington reacted the way she did.  It is sad because she was such a major influence in Amaris' life.  Marri's mother and Seleah are a trip and a half.  At least they are like as long as the man has money it doesn't matter what race he is.  They are too much.  It will be an interesting wedding for sure.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 03:51 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

A lot certainly went on in this chapter. Lol, I really enjoyed reading about Daniel and Tam!!!!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 09:34 pm

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

smh Daniel put it on Tam something serious. Eww Tam need to stop playing games and put Daniel out of his misery. Julian and Amaris are killing me with their lovey dovey, but I'm happy for them. I'm super interested in this baby Tam is having. haha

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

lol...I'm still giggling at Julian with the rose between his teeth and wagging **Hello**...Now to Ms. Tam if ya' nasty!! GURL...keep on messing with Daniel and see what that gets you!! But it seems that u don't mind not one bit...**tsk tsk**

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Lol loved it! She is playing with fire but I dont think she minds getting burn.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 11:19 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

I love that Daniel turn to tables on Tamera. She's playing a dangerous game. It's one thing to make him believe that she dating another man but bringing her date into Daniel's restaurant could had blown up in her face.



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  I think it did blow up in her face...or was it HIS face????   He knew that she was testing him and she figured that he would only do so much in the restaurant with his father being there.  LOL.  She didn't think about the bathroom being a factor.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Wilifred Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 10:57 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Amaris is too funny. Tam is sexually repressed Amaris is teasing her mercilessly. Once again, great dialog.

Reviewer: Andreas Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 10:44 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

lawd...rofl ..funny shit i tells ya funny shit ..great chappie loved it!!! that Daniel is a fool.

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 10:16 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

LOL!  When will Tam learn yes you a big girl but Daniel son is an Alpha male and yes maybe a bit bipolor but he is your man and very possessive I don't know why u think that little stunt you pulled was going to fly over well.

So Daniel has always had the love of chocolate and his girlfriend was black that cheated on him before.  Now I know Jun is just protective of his son but he needs to but out and not be so judgemental when he does not know the full situation and it's not his business his son is a GROWN ASS MAN.

My girl Marri has released the freak that is what dick will do for you though.

I can't wait to see Julian reaction when he meets Amar family

Thank you....

Happy writing I need more please.



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  Daniel showed her!!  Jun has a lot of the old ways.  The family members are very close and always into each other's business!   He is concerned about his only son, but Daniel knows how to handle his father.  Trust is a struggle for Daniel after being burned, but he's working on it.  Thanks again for the review.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 05:48 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Daniel is something else. DAMN! He set Miss Tam straight.

Marri creases me up with all her names for Daniel. LMAO

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 05:43 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Loved the update. Tam definitely playing with fire. She needs to tell Daniel the truth.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

wow dam mr.wong know how to handle his business you go boy. I hope when julian meet his lady family that he comes back out of it alive lol. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

oh my damn that daniel is something else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 03:51 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Daniel is the man,  Tamera is going to mess up  and not have Daniel at all.  He was wrong but so is she for playing with him like that.  I can't wait for Juilian to meet Amaris's family.  It will be hilarious!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

lol at nathan. i like daniel and tam was playing with fire but daniel does need to get a hang on his anger issues.



Author's Response:

Daniel does have some issues and he knows he does.  Going to counseling will help him realize why he does what he does.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 03:04 am



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